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message 6051: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back. I wasn't gone for good yet. Sorry 'bout disappearing. Which I will do again soon. *sigh* I was called away to do something.))

Ellis raised an eyebrow. "Don't understand what?"


message 6052: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))

She ignored his question. "How'd you get here?"


message 6053: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Pure Iron." Liv said "Repells the evil of the Shadows." She shrugged


message 6054: by [deleted user] (new)

"With Lizzie," he answered simply. "You don't think I'll tell you exactly how, do you?"


message 6055: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: ""Pure Iron." Liv said "Repells the evil of the Shadows." She shrugged"

"That's cool."


message 6056: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: ""With Lizzie," he answered simply. "You don't think I'll tell you exactly how, do you?""

"With Lizzie? I was right. She's no good!" Shadow sat up, glaring at him, getting through his deception for a moment.


message 6057: by Hannah (last edited Feb 28, 2010 04:47PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Mhm." Liv said "Here try it." She handed it to him.


message 6058: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ah-ah, sweetheart, you need to be quiet. You want to be quiet for me." He smiled and gently pushed her back down. "Oh, and she is just fine. The poor girl didn't want to come here in the first place."


message 6059: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hey, everyone's supposed to be asleep! Don't mess up the plan, man.))


message 6060: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oops sleeping. As of now.))


message 6061: by Ky (last edited Feb 28, 2010 04:48PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She started to fight, but gave up; Ellis had control again. "Lizzie isn't nice."

Blaze smiled, pretending it was a lightsabre.


message 6062: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thank you. He woke Salem up, you see, and she's going to believe it was all a dream in the morning.))


message 6063: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I changed it))


message 6064: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh, she is. But she has to bend to her parents' will. She's not as strong as you, I'm afraid."


message 6065: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Strength is nothing when it can be bent." she said quietly.


message 6066: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed. "I bet if you ask it nicely it'll make the sounds and light up."


message 6067: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis smiled. "Your fight is still admirable. Just not enough. I'd love to give you what you want... but I'm afraid I wouldn't like it much." He chuckled and leaned towards her. "A kiss goodbye before I leave?"


message 6068: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No Ellis." she said, eyes hardening again.


message 6069: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Liv laughed. "I bet if you ask it nicely it'll make the sounds and light up.""

"Really?!"


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Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: ""No Ellis." she said, eyes hardening again."

"Hm... I suppose I'll take one, then. I wouldn't want you to forget the dream; I should make it memorable for you." He leaned in more. "You will not fight me," He promised quietly, just before he pressed his lips to hers.


message 6071: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh yeah." Liv laughed nodding. "May the force be with you"


message 6072: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She didn't kiss him back but Salem also didn't fight him. Just like he said she wouldn't. Silver tears escaped her eyes.


message 6073: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: ""Oh yeah." Liv laughed nodding. "May the force be with you""

"Oh right, Star Trek is the one that goes 'Live long and Prosper'...I like that one better." he laughed.


message 6074: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I like May the force be with you. THough.. Chris Pine is much hotter than Luke was.." She mused.


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He pulled back after a moment of trying to get her to kiss him back. He stroked the tears away, and his parting words were, "Do you know how beautiful you are?"
Then he strode away into the trees.


message 6076: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: ""I like May the force be with you. THough.. Chris Pine is much hotter than Luke was.." She mused."

"I don't know who those are..are they the actors?"


message 6077: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "He pulled back after a moment of trying to get her to kiss him back. He stroked the tears away, and his parting words were, "Do you know how beautiful you are?"
Then he strode away into the trees."


She fell back asleep a while after he left, crying until she passed out from exhaustion.


message 6078: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hmm... skip to morning?))


message 6079: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sure ya))


message 6080: by Hannah (last edited Feb 28, 2010 05:01PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah Chris Pine was the actor that played the Commander of teh Enterprise.. Luke is just Luke Skywalker from Star Wars. How I know that and you don't.." She shook her head.


message 6081: by [deleted user] (new)

((Kay.))

Sean woke up with his arm around Salem, her head on his chest. He looked down at her with a slight smile and combed his fingers gently through her hair as he waited for her to wake.


message 6082: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I have seen the movies, but they are very old and only the show got burned onto the video disks." he smiled.


message 6083: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem woke with a start, gasping when she saw Sean.


message 6084: by [deleted user] (new)

((Just reminding you, I'll disappear any minute now.))


message 6085: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))


message 6086: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean's smile faded. "Hey... what's wrong?"


message 6087: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smirked "Excuses." She waved it off.

Patrik woke up, Emmy right after him
"Hey."


message 6088: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ellis...he was," she looked confused. "It was a dream."

Blaze laughed. "Woah, it's morning!"


message 6089: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 28, 2010 05:07PM) (new)

Sean nodded. "I'm sorry. I wish you could forget about him. We're gone from him now."


message 6090: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "He told me I'll never forget..he was telling me about Lizzie." she shuddered.


message 6091: by [deleted user] (new)

He frowned. "Do you want to tell me about it? Maybe that'll make it easier..."


message 6092: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why don't you just read it? It's pretty obvious that I'm thinking about it..." she said reluctantly.


message 6093: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Whoa!" Liv looked around he was right. The sun was out.
"You all still here?" Emmy said loudly.


message 6094: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We were up late."

Shadow looked over to Emmy. "Yup."


message 6095: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded. "I'm so used to not listening. It's more polite, I guess." He listened, and his frown deepened. "I... jeez. I'm sorry."


message 6096: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's not your fault." she smiled bitterly. "It's his."


message 6097: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Try all night."

"Great." Emmy nodded "You ok?" She asked sensing something was off.


message 6098: by Ky (last edited Feb 28, 2010 05:16PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze laughed.

"no. I'm not okay." she sent part of the dream to Emmy and another part to Patrik. She didnt bother to notice which one went where.


message 6099: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 28, 2010 05:16PM) (new)

Sean didn't speak, letting Salem explain.


message 6100: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv shook her head taking his hand and leading back to the others.

"Holy Shit." Emmy said raking her hand through her hair.
"How the hell did he get- Oh my god, Salem I can't believe."


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