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message 5701: by [deleted user] (new)

I won't say it. I... it can wait. I was worried about you when I said it... I wanted you to know in case something happened. I'm so sorry it made you cry. He rubbed her back gently.


message 5702: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She nodded,her face buried in his shoulder. Don't be sorry. You don't know why I cried.


message 5703: by [deleted user] (new)

No... I don't. May I ask? You don't have to answer... He closed his eyes.


message 5704: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It really doesn't matter though.


message 5705: by [deleted user] (new)

I just... I don't want to make you cry again. If I know why... maybe it won't happen again.


message 5706: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It won't happen again. Shadow thought, steel in her mind's voice. Never.


message 5707: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. Okay. He looked up, and saw Lizzie pacing nearby, obviously impatient. He sighed. "Look... we need to talk to the others about Lizzie." His voice was reluctant. "I think I might have said no right away if it weren't for the fact that this isn't her world and I don't know if she'd be willing to go back. She's so stubborn..."


message 5708: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow laughed bitterly. "It won't be hard to make her want to leave."


message 5709: by [deleted user] (new)

He grimaced. "I'm sure. It's just... I feel like I should let her stay with us, you know, because I kind of pushed her into meeting me before. I wouldn't leave her alone, and I went into her dreams and left her messages and entered her mind, and she was scared of me but I wouldn't leave her alone... I let her go when she wanted to go, but I was stupid and I must have left a pretty bad impression." He sighed. "I guess I want to make it up to her. It's not going to hurt, right?"


message 5710: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Says you." she retorted. "Anyway she can stay. Who cares?"


message 5711: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2010 03:24PM) (new)

He nodded. "Okay." He stood and offered her his hand.


message 5712: by Ky (last edited Feb 25, 2010 03:23PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg,do dishes))

Shaking her head and ignoring his hand, she stood. "So Lizzie." she said sarcastically.


message 5713: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, bye!))

He shrugged. "Everyone called her that. I don't know about now, though. She actually told me not to... but I slip up. I've only ever thought of her as Lizzie."


message 5714: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm going to call her Lizzie." She walked over to Lizzie. "You can stay. But if you're trouble: you're out. Got it?" Salem said authoratively.


message 5715: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm gone))

She walked away, not waiting for an answer.


message 5716: by [deleted user] (new)

((*sigh* Well, hi and bye again!))

Lizzie raised her eyebrows and watched her go, then looked at Sean. "Attitude much?"
Sean frowned and went over to her. "Look, Liz- Elizabeth... I need to make one thing clear. These people here are my friends, and I will trust their decisions. If they don't like you and want you gone, I will not fight for you."
She shrugged. "Sure. I won't be trouble." She grinned.
Sean nodded. "That's Salem." He pointed over to Salem. "I'll let you meet the others. Come on."
He started walking over to them and she followed. "Patrick, Emmy," he said to the people he actually knew, "This is Lizzie. She's... a girl I knew a long time ago. She followed us through, and she wants to stay with us, if that's okay with you all."


message 5717: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy instantly got on the defensie she didn't like that he was here and now he wanted to bring someone else? Someone who was only going to be a liability? Oh no way in hell. She jumped up.
"There-" Emmy started
"You give us attitude or hinder us in anyway I will send you back and make sure you can't come back." Patrik said dark future hinting at the edges.


message 5718: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smirked, eyes flashing as she stood beside Emmy. "I'm with you on this one."


message 5719: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hola.))

Emmy nodded "I thought you would be."
Patrik looked at the girls
"Play nice with the annoying Norm."
How the hell did she survive the Jump?


message 5720: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hullo))

"What if we don't want to play nice?" Salem muttered under her breath. She interrupted Emmy's thoughts, I was wondering the same thing.


message 5721: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "We kill her." Emmy mumbled back.
"Power is multiplied here, be careful Salem you don't know the extent of your own powers yet. We do, so just be careful." Patrik warned.
She wouldn't be in one peice if she was a true Norm and Jumped. I don't like her.


message 5722: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I don't like her either. Frig. Nothing happens right. Never. Salem sighed and walked briskly over to an empty space,jsut standing there. "I wish it were raining."


message 5723: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It probably will soon." Rife commented.

She'll end up dead soon. Emmy shrugged


message 5724: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow's mood brightened slightly. "Good. I love the rain." How do you suppose? Oh. I see.


message 5725: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yup. No one really lasts long here without powers...

"Me too." Patrik smiled
"I like the thunder storms."
"Yeah because they are like you. Unpredictable and sometimes scary." Patrik cuckled.
Emmy shook her head smiling "Jez."


message 5726: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Haha, sucks for her. Salem laughed. "I like them because I blend in." it made sense really.

Blaze chuckled. "Maybe it's because you're a Raindancer. Huh." he was joking.


message 5727: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yes, yes it does.

Liv nodded "Makes sense."
"Dude. What the hell is so special abotu Raindancers?" Patrik asked suddenly.


message 5728: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan glanced at him sort of funny, but it was Salem who explained. "It's the ridiculous name our 'kind' was given. You know, basically. You guys are Lyrs, and we're pretty much the same thing, with a stupid name." she grinned.


message 5729: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh! Why couldn't Mackenna just say that? I was so confused." Patrik said nodding
"Who's Mackenna?" Liv and Emmy asked in unison.


message 5730: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Mackenna is a Torch member.."


message 5731: by Hannah (last edited Feb 25, 2010 07:09PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What were you doing at Torch?" Liv asked
"I got captured." Patrik shrugged
"Duh, you obviously there on Vacation." Liv rolled her eyes.


message 5732: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze smiled widely.

Salem shook her head.


message 5733: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Liv chill." Emmy said
"Don't Emmy. I wasn't told about anything that happened to you or Patrik. I want some answers, now." Liv said crossing her arms looking at them all.


message 5734: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze sat down. "I know what Liv knows."


Teeghan sighed, "Just tell us."

Shadow walked further away from them, knowing it would piss someone off, but not caring. She didn't want to talk about it.


message 5735: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments A gust of wind blew in reaction to Liv's annoyance and anger.
"Liv." Emmy snarled "I seriously don't need this right now."
"Then just tell me what the hell happened? You were in Cobra for more then three weeks. When I see you again you're unconcious and telling us to go home. Where we all know you never had any intention of comming back to."
"That isn-" Emmy started to say
Liv interupted seriously pissed
"Don't even say that isn't the truth. We all know it is! You hated it here more than the rest of us! Yet somehow you are the one to send us back."
"I had to Liv. I never wanted to come back." Emmy said softly the glow dying.


message 5736: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow turned around, angry at Liv a little. "Shut up! You don't even know!"


message 5737: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Neither do you! You came because you wanted to not because you had to! Do you know why we came to your freakish demension? To escape this!" Liv yelled wind freaking out as she did.
"Liv!" Rife yelled
"Rife." Patrik shook his head at him "Let her get this out."
Emmy was getting pissed off again.


message 5738: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow glared at her, "You don't know why I came. You can't even guess. But if you could..." she trailed off furiously. "Nevermind. And you know what? I know a hell of a lot more than you do right now!" she took control of some of the wind, calming it slightly so Avery would stop crying.


message 5739: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Then what the hell happened because Emmy sure isn't talking."
"Liv!" Emmy yelled fire springing up her tattoos glowing "That's enough! Salem, calm the hell down. Now."
Liv glared at her wind still spazzing. She had to get used to the air doing as her every whim intended to. And she had forgot how much POWER Emmy had at her disposal. That fight that day with Ellis and his sister was less than nothing compared to what she could do here without loosing it.
"Liv, if you don't stop now I will make you. Shadows can already sense us. You bring them here.." Emmy trailed off the look in her eyes enough for Liv to get the point.


message 5740: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow didn't want to calm down, in fact it took her a few minutes to be able to, but she decided she had to. For them. "Shit."


message 5741: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded looking at Patrik trying to calm herself back down.

Liv stepped back her head in her hands.


message 5742: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She sat,rather abruptly, on the ground, folding herself in such a way that her head rested on her legs just beneath her knees. Her legs drawn to her chest.

The rain started.


message 5743: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked up laughing bitterly at the sky. The rain sizzled when it made contact with her skin.

Liv leaned against a tree, fuming.


message 5744: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze went to sit with Liv.

Shadow looked up slowly, letting the crystalline raindrops hit her face.


message 5745: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked up her anger abetting a little when he came to sit with her.

Patrik put a hand on Emmy's shoulder. There was intamacy in his touch, there always was, Emmy noticed with a jolt. She looked at him he was smiling, that just for her smile.


message 5746: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey."

Shadow saw. As in mind-saw ((lol)). They were adorable, such a cute couple. She smiled and then the image was burst, brought out of focus as another was brought in. "Crap."


message 5747: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Hey you."

Emmy didn't hear her, neither did Patrik they were a little busy. Patrik's hand slid up her shoulder and to the nape of her neck. Emmy went up on tip toes and kissed him throwing her arms around his neck.


message 5748: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze grinned and sank to the ground beside her.

Shadow stood slowly, feeling the cold water dripping down her face. The storm wasn't angry...yet. She walked over to Rife, the only one of the Lyrs not busy or angry with her. "Um okay. The 'Shadows' or whatever, they're coming...soon."


message 5749: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv couldn't help but grin back.

"Well shit. The one time." Rife shook his head "Oi! Shadows comming!"

Patrik looked up breaking the kiss Emmy spun to face Salem and Rife
"Damnit."

Liv jumped up.


message 5750: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze snapped to attention and stood by Liv, "Already?"

Teeghan held Avery closer to her chest. "Shhh.it's okay baby..shh.."

Shadow's fists were clenched at her sides. "I'm sorry."


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