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message 5501: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok sounds good))

"Yeah that's me." Patrik said opening his eyes not recgonizing the newcomer.


message 5502: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay then. I'm here for a few minutes now. But I'll be disappearing any minute now so I'll say bye ahead of time. Hi and Bye!))

Sean nodded. "I'm Sean." He smiled slightly. "I guess I'll tell you how Salem, Emmy and I met later... but I'm a friend. Is she alright?"


message 5503: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hi and Bye!))

"She seems fine now. And yeah later is probably better." Patrik nodded


message 5504: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The conversation going on between Emmy and the strange woman was confusing but incredibly interesting.


message 5505: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ello. :}))


"You, the Shadow part in you, it's not supposed to be advancing this fast." My mother sounds anxious
"What? How do you know how it's supposed to Evolve or advance or whatever?" I'm seriously confused.
"I don't know."
"Then why are you worried? I mean this just happened. Recently. My eyes happened a week ago and my arms happened before this." I wave my hand encompasing the room and dream hell.



message 5506: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ello, your pic confused me, even though I saw it on the palace one...I need to get a life , I mean..get used to it. lol))

Shadow wished she could be there, wanted to figure this out with Emmy. What does she mean? She sent the thought in general and was almost sure that the strange lady would be able to hear too.


message 5507: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol ik the feeling.))
My mom looks up at the sounds of Salem's question.She laughs a little. "A friend of yours?"
"Yeah. Salem." I nod
"Well, Salem, I mean that she isn't supposed to come into her Shadow powers yet. Her eyes and tattoos getting outlined in the silver means she getting power from the Shadow part that's in her. Make Sense?" She asks both me and Salem.



message 5508: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((alo, Imma change my pic soon, it's 'bout time!))

Um..sort of..


message 5509: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I like your pic. Thats the kid that plays Jasper right? He so much better looking in that pic than in the movie... *sigh* hollywood ruins everything))

I laugh "No, not really. How does this help me?"
"You're here because you accessed too much power at once. When you tried to help Salem you tapped into power that I had blocked off when you were a baby. You weren't supposed to be able to do that. Untill you were ready, to avoid this." My mom explains looking at me intensely
It takes me a few minutes to process this.



message 5510: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yeah,when he was yungah'. I KNOW!))

Shadow sighed and leaned back against the wall. So I take it..it's pretty bad?


message 5511: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yeah))

"For Emmeline, yes this is very bad." My mom says not even an attempt to sugar coat it.
I smile grimly "Why did I know you were going to say that? What the hell am I supposed to do? I can't just be in here." I point at my head. I stand unable to stay seated any longer.
"I know you can't. Any way this will end up bad. Ask Salem she can see now. It's not going to be good for you. Or Patrik, Liv or Rife."
"So we're all basically screwed?" I laugh "Do you know how many times I've heard that?"



message 5512: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem scrunched up her face. Not funny Em. she then spoke to Emmy's mom. So..I can't really see them..not yet. Not them. What do you mean: bad for all of them? she'd forgotten about Rife.

((but I didn't forget him!))


message 5513: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((thats good! He's off with Gwen. He can do whatever. haha))

"I think they have forgotten that in the time that they have been here, the war that they are supposed to be fighting in our world is still happening. All four of them need to go back before there isn't a world left to go back to." My mom says looking sternly at me.
"It's difficult to forget a war that I've been in since before I was born mom." I say.
My mom looks pained, I know that was a low blow. She didn't give herself over to the Shadows, they captured her. But caring stopped a few minutes ago.



message 5514: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahaha))

Salem 'stepped' in. This world is ridiculous: no one knows how to leave..I mean seriously, this is the past for me..I'm not 'born' yet. How are they supposed to get back? Serious question.


message 5515: by Hannah (last edited Feb 23, 2010 08:02PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Patrik can take us back." I answer for my mom.
"You just never went back."
"No, mom we didn't. We were tired of running and fighting all the time. We are teenagers! How can you expect us to lead a rebellion that only have four people in it? Huh?! How are we, four teenagers supposed to fight all of the Shadows and half of the Lyrs? Tell me that!"



message 5516: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow smiled to herself. I'll help..if that would work..and Blaze would..Teeghan..


message 5517: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I wouldn't know if you three could make it." My mom replies thinking about it.
"Liv won't leave without Blaze, not anymore. You might have been able to get her to leave a week ago but not anymore. Maybe we could help them through the Portals mum."



message 5518: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments What's the worst? I mean seriously? Death isn't that much of an issue anymore..except for Teeghan..but only Avery. I know I want to help..Emmy's like my sister.


message 5519: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah. I think Patrik and you could make them safe." My mom says thinking again.
"Yeah but mom what if we can't?"
"You will."



message 5520: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded, though they couldn't see. Kay I didn't see you guys specifically..it seems I'm back to not doing that yet.. but I saw Blaze and Tee in what is not this world.


message 5521: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "See?" My mom says "You can do it."
"Mom, I'm in a coma, I can't do anything now."
"I think I have the ansswer to that too." She says looking at me.



message 5522: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments How?


message 5523: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "She needs to go back to Sildon." My mom says to Salem. "You should tell Patrik. He'll know what to do."
"Mum, Patrik isn't here. He'll need to come and get me."



message 5524: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Patrik is over here though. Mackenna will let him go..I'll make sure of that. Shadow looked over to Patrik, "Emmy needs you over there...to go to Sildon?"


message 5525: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Good. He will know what to do. Thank you Salem." My mother says smiling
"Mom... What if it doesn't work?"
"It has to." She says firmly
"I'm scared."


Patrik looked at her, gaping "Sildon? She wants us to go home?"


message 5526: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shrugged. "She says it's the only way."


message 5527: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "For her to be normal again?" Patrik asked standing up.

"Mom?" I say looking around. She wasn't here anymore. No goodbye, nothing just like when she died. I'm still in the rune room. The whispering was louder now, like the room was talking to me instead of whispering.


message 5528: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah... and I'm coming." Salem said, standing too. She glared at him. "Don't even try to say no."


message 5529: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I wouldn't expect anything less." Patrik said nodding. "We need to get Liv, most likely Blaze too."


message 5530: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah, I saw Blaze there..Tee too. She's at Cobra right now." Salem said,slightly releived.


message 5531: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed "Alright. Avery too?"


message 5532: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah," her brow darkened. "That's how they got Tee there."


message 5533: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah Tee wouldn't be there if they didn't have Avery. How are we going to get there?" Patrik asked looking pointedly at Mackenna. Sh ehad grown on him over the couple days he'd been here


message 5534: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna nodded. "Yeah..just a sec I can arrange that... We'll just pretend I don't know you don't plan on coming back," she smiled, speaking quietly and disappeared for a minute. When she came back she whispered to Patrik, "Maybe Tylan is right."


message 5535: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I think she is." Patrik whispered back. "Thank you Mackenna." He smiled


message 5536: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She nodded. "The car is outside the front doors." Mackenna said,pretending to be rough, grabbing Salem by the arm. Salem pretended to be annoyed. "Let's go!"


message 5537: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik walked next to the two girls.


message 5538: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna put Salem in the backseat and got herself into the front.


message 5539: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik jumped in the driver's seat. He revved the engine and drove to Cobra.


message 5540: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We'll just pretend I'm driving," Mackenna laughed.

Salem rolled her eyes and leaned back into the seat, really not caring for a seatbelt.


message 5541: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah, pretend." Patrik nodded smiling a little.


message 5542: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Soon Cobra's main building was in sight. "There!" Shadow said. "That one, the main one."


message 5543: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Salem get Liv and the others first. Then come to get me." I say just remembering that that would make the most sense.


message 5544: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sorry it took this long..I was reading the Mutant RP while I waited...lol))

Okay..Tee's in there..can I get Patrik to get her and Avery? It'll be easier for me and Mackenna to get Liv and Blaze.

Mackenna looked back, "What's with the silence?" she asked Patrik.


message 5545: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol its ok I don't mind))

"Yeah totally." I say nodding "be careful"

"We can talk like that. So it's not that quiet to us." Patrik said


message 5546: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo, you guys are funny. I like Adi))

Ya, I'll try. You too.

Mackenna nodded. "Wow."

Salem looked up at them. "Kay, Patrik. Emmy said for you to get Teeghan and Avery first. Me and Mackenna will get Liv and Blaze from the U. We'll meet up in say..ten minutes?"


message 5547: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol thanks. I'm loving her too.))

"Always." I nod

"Yeah tell me about it." Patrik laughed "Yup alright. I can find her easily enough.


message 5548: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahahaha, yeah!))

Right,always. Ciao! Well, not really..I'm always here..duh. Salem chuckled. "Right, let's do this thing..we need the car..so scat!" she said teasingly.


message 5549: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha))

You're perky now that your ok." I say laughing
Patrik jumped out and walked into Cobra's building.


message 5550: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Well..I guess..I sorta feel like decking someone..that's when I need Ellis.

Mackenna took over the steering wheel and Shadow navigated.


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