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message 5451: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm here for a moment, just for fun. I'm at the library. Patrik didn't answer Sean! He is still in the same room as Salem, right?))


message 5452: by [deleted user] (new)

((And gone.))


message 5453: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "((Bye! Have fun! :B))

"Yeah like that. It was weird." Patrik smiled"


((thanks, I had a FAB time, how did your walk go?))

Mackenna nodded. "That would've been weird."


message 5454: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Good my dogs are crazy! We only had two leashes and 3 dogs lol one had to stay home. and then we came back for her.))

"It was. Like reading about our own lives. It was so odd.."


message 5455: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments (( O__o....woah! ahaha, we brought a yellow lab on our hike...crazy!))

"So, the author got it close? You think maybe she is one?"

((I have an idea-ish thing. Maybe the girls use the morphine really fast because of who/what they are? so it wears off before it should and no one knows at first. Plus, maybe Salem and Emmy should try to talk again?))


message 5456: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes I like it!))
((Awww whats your lab's name? I have three giants. :D))

"Nah, she isn't. She was just a really good writer." Patrik grinned.

The pain came back again, all to quickly in my opinion. I would think Morphine would last longer than an hour...


message 5457: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((coolio. *grins* um, he's my aunt's dog and his name is Rigley, but we call him Riggs. what are your dogs' names?))

Mackenna laughed. "She would have to be to even get close to how it is."

It hurt. All over. What? Morphine? Are they sure they used Morphine? That's a friggin' strong drug! Why the hell does it hurt again! Salem bit her lip to keep from calling out as she woke up again. She couldn't see, the pain left a cloud that she didn't want to try and gaze through. all she knew was that Patrik wasn't there anymore and neither was Mackenna. Emmy? she searched, needing to know if Emmy was any better.


message 5458: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Aww cute! They are Phinneaus (Finn), Tulah, and Bowen.))

"No, We looked into it. She isn't." Patrik said shaking his head.

Salem's voice found me again through the fog of this damn place.
"Yeah Salem?" I say trying to concentrate through the fog and pain.



message 5459: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's awesome, I love the name Bowen! And Phinneaus! ehehe))

"Nah, I meant she'd have to be good." She winked.

Salem could tell, just by her mind's voice, that she was hurting too. It wore off for you too? I mean..that was Morphine!


message 5460: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Thanks! My mom picked Bowen and Phinneaus is names after Phinneaus Nigelus In Harry Potter the first Slytherin Headmaster lol I picked that one))

"Yeah she was." Patrik laughed

I nod "Yeah and Kher gave me a LOT of it. I could feel how much. It was like double the normal ammount. I don't understand... What the hell is happening to us?"


message 5461: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grins* that's awesome!))

Mackenna nodded. "Right. Hmm..what is your favourite song?"

Salem didn't move, though she felt like she should nod or something. Yeah, same here. That was a lot. I don't know Emmy..I don't and I wish I did. I'm not used to not knowing! Her mind's voice was tinged with frustration and agony.


message 5462: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Thanks! *laughs*))

"Anthem of our Dying Days By Story of the Year. How about you?"

"Tell me about it." I say "I wish something would work. Atleast to take the pain away. I can normallly deal with pain well but this is so bad." I shake my head "This is way to much." I say again "Salem... I think Patrik can help you..."


message 5463: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*laughs too*))

Mackenna had already thought about it. "It's an old song: Thriller, by Michael Jackson. Did you know he was black when he made that?"

Salem felt the tears stinging her eyes and knew they were open. She saw nothing but darkness. Pain..ugh. I always feel it, more than most but I had a high pain threshold..it's gone. This surpasses that. Emmy..something's got to be uber wrong for this to be effecting us this way...and Patrik...left. I don't know where he is.


message 5464: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Huh. And yeah I did know about that." Patrik nodded.

"Well you're going to need him." I say "Try to get him to come back. I really don't care how it's done. And yeah something is Majorly wrong here. I don't lik ethat your awake and I'm not."


message 5465: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She smiled. "Yeah, it's too bad about him."

Awake is an overstatement. My eyes are open, sure, but I can't see right now. It's as if I'm not awake at all, besides the pain. I'll try..see if I can send a thought to him or something..careful Emmy. she paused. I love you, and I know that was random.


message 5466: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I don't think so. He was a pedofile(sp?) I'm not really sorry for him.." Patrik said shrugging.

I smile "Love you too. You're like a sister to me." My eyes close involuntarily "I'll try to be Careful, but you know me. I attract trouble."


message 5467: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sorry this took so long, I'm packign to go home AND doing this...olo))

"Rumours Patrik. RUMOURS." she smiled.

Salem stopped the laugh before it had a chance to come out. Same here, now don't make me laugh!


message 5468: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol nice multitasking))

"Ah. But I know for a fact." Patrik smirked

I smile a little "Ok. But get Patrik. I have an idea... Even though we all know how well my last Idea went."


message 5469: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grin*))

Mackenna made an 'eww' face. "Gross."

I'll try. Just a minute. She 'focussed' on sending a thought to Patrik. Hey Patrik...you there?


message 5470: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Your mind is wicked dirty." Patrik laughed then he stopped Salem..? You ok?

I smirk "Yup I'm not going anywhere."



message 5471: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna made a face. "Hmmph."

No...Emmy said you could help. She told me to get you, and she has an idea.


message 5472: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded and replied
Not another idea.. jez that girl needs to stop thinking. We'll be right there.
"Alright we need to go back to Salem." he said to Mackenna


message 5473: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna nodded. "Okay."

Soon they were there.

We might as well hear it.


message 5474: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Might as well." Patrik said walking in the room.
"What is it?" He asked


message 5475: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I'm gonna talk from in here if that's okay.. Salem mumbled in her thoughts. Emmy, what's your idea?


message 5476: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah of course. Patrik said nodding.

I try to remember, it takes a minute for me to figure it out.
"Have Patrik heal you. He's more powerful than Morphine. I think I should work."



message 5477: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow sent Emmy's thought directly to Patrik. That's her idea.


message 5478: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Jesus Christ Emmy. That's you grand idea? That's all you can think that might work? He was anxious and overtired and it was fianally starting to show.
I laugh quietly at hearing him. His voice sounds so good to my ears.
"Yeah. And If it works come and heal me. I'm ready to get out of this dream hell prison."
I open my eyes and I see a figure, which is strange I've been alone this whole time. Why would anyone else be here?



message 5479: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((is it the same guy from when Salem was there?))

Salem felt a small smile tug at her lips. Emmy, you make my day.


message 5480: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes. It shalll be I just needed something to spice it up. I'm thinking having the guy take her to see her mother. Hmm... your thoughts on the matter?))

"Glad to help Salem." I say but I'm distracted by the man standing infront of me.
"What do you want?" I ask trying to stand.


Patrik kneeled down next to Salem. "This better work." He said quietly.


message 5481: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sounds cool. he's just a random dude that was pissing Salem off..olo))

"HmmMmm." Salem hummed a little to herself, closing her eyes though it made no difference.


message 5482: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol Thats never good. Pissing off Salem isn't conducive to living past yoru next birthday.;P))

Patrik put a hand to her head and started healing her.

"Come with me." The man says looking right at me
"I tend not to follow freaky dream men." I say leaning on the wall.
The man shoots me a look it says 'You're comming if I have to drag you.'
"I guess there's a first time for everything" I mutter and start to follow him.



message 5483: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods* at least someone understands..ahaha))

Shadow sighed, it helped a little.


message 5484: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha All my charries do haha))

Patrik looked down at her, this was going to take a while.

For a minute I wondered if Salem or Patrik could still hear me. Then I figured they were busy trying to figure out what the hell I did to us.
"So," I sigh "What do you want from me?"
"I don't want anything from you." He replies.
Great... "Then what are we doing?"
"Taking you to your mother." He says as if he takes comatose Lyrs to their dead mothers everyday. Maybe he does.. Either way, I'm so far beyond screwed.



message 5485: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yah, ahaha))

She winced away from him for a moment when the pain flared,a small gasp escaping her lips.


message 5486: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik took his hand away from her quickly. He didn't know what happened
"What?"


"My MOTHER?" I ask half laughing
"Yes." He says seriously
"I'm dead aren't I?" I say the sarcasam barely in it.
"No." He replies confused "Why would you be dead?"
"Well, seeing as my mother has been dead for 17 years. I was just checking."



message 5487: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The weird thing was that the pain got worse when he took his hand off. Shadow shook her head, "It's...fine."


message 5488: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok. You want me to keep going? Or what?" He asked he couldn't sense what he was doing to her and that was making him nervous.

The man nodded "Well she wanted to see you. She thinks you need help."
"That makes two of us." I comment running a hand through my hair.
The man stops in front of a door. It must lead somewhere, but I have no clue where. I look at him
"Go ahead." He says
"I can come back right?" I ask suddenly very nervous.
"Of course. When she is done you can walk back through the door."
He made it sound as if I couldn't leave untill she said I could. And knowing this place I probably couldn't. Taking a breath I step through the door.



message 5489: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah..just..make it stop." she started crying again, silently.


message 5490: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok," Patrik put most of his energy into healing her. It took longer than he though but by sundown he though he was finished. He fell back against the wall.
"I don't know what else to do. That should work."

I'm in a room. It's huge and ancient looking. With stone walls that have infinite runes and symboly etched in them over the years by its various occupants. There is a sofa and chair near the center of this room. And at first glance there is no one here. You would think a huge empty room would be silent, but not this room. Noise is everywhere, soft like whispers, seemingly comming form the walls. I'm drawn to them. The rune covered walls, whisper secrest of unknown power to me. I go to place my hand over one.
"Emmeline." I hear a woman's voice say.
I spin and it's her, my mother in all of her glory. She's beautiful I find myself thinking.



message 5491: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow opened her eyes and looked up at him, being able to see again. "Thanks Patrik," she said quietly.


message 5492: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You're very Welcome Salem." Patrik replied.

"Mom." I gasp taking her in.
"Hi baby." She smiles at me holding out her arms.
I walk to her and fall into her. She hugs me tightly, I can feel the smile on her face. I'm smiling too, I've missed her.


((I'm thinking of keeping Emmy's dream for the book what do you think?))


message 5493: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods* that would be cool. I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF THE BOOK))

She sat up and leaned against the wall beside him, just super tired.


message 5494: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((=DDDDDDDDD Good! I'm typing it up now! Muhahaha))

Patrik was just as tired as Salem.
"Can you tell Emmy it worked?" He asked falling asleep.

"Come and sit" She says pulling me into the center of the room. She plunks herself on the sofa and I flop into the chair pulling it so I'm across from her.
"So, Emmeline. You seriously messed up." She says without humor
"Oh trust me. I'm starting to get that." I nod looking down at myself.
She's looking at me intensly, her eyes raking over me. I can feel it it's that intense, her eyes tend to linger on the tattoos and then lastly on my eyes. She's supprised at the silver there I can tell by the little bit her eyes widen.
"What? You didn't know about that?" I ask sitting back



message 5495: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahah))

"Sure," she said, but he was already out. Emmy?


message 5496: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg..meh. movie. *makes face* and then I should, should be on later tonight))


message 5497: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I could barely hear Salem when she called out to me. The whispers from the wall seemed to screw up the signal or something.
But my mom is talking to me and I shake my head thinking that maybe Salem can hear the conversation we are about to have.
"No I didn't know about that. You were placed with Patrik so that didn't happen." She says shaking her head and standing.
"Patrik can only do so much." I reply curtly, instantly going on the defensive.



message 5498: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((my last post I think))

Shadow focussed, hearing Emmy and another woman's voice.


message 5499: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok I'll talk to you later :} ))


"I know. It's just it wasn't supposed to be happening this fast." She replied while pacing
"What isn't supposed to be happening?" I ask nervous again.



message 5500: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm here just to say that I won't be here any more today. Until late, anyway. And then only for a few minutes. Movie for me too, except it's a documentary. XD About India. Wee! I'm going to say that Sean didn't show up until... now. Moo.))

Sean walked into the room and there she was. Awake. He smiled, but didn't say anything to her as he could see that she was concentrating. "Hey... are you Patrik?" He asked the man that was in the room.


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