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((don't worry everyone posts late every once and a while, it's ok))


message 502: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah!" Liv yelled and ran up to them
Rife groaned quietly.
Emmy grabbed Patrik's Hand and walked with them


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"Hey Liv, these shoes match the outfit you showed me," Gwen said holding up a pair of black and neon green checkered flats.


message 504: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok in love with those! But I'm going to need some converse," Liv replied


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"I saw some over there," Gwen said pointing down a couple isles.


message 506: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "THanks. You should totally get those shoes!" She said walking to the racks of converse. Rife returned to Gwens side with his shoes purchased.


message 507: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Jonah looked around for a few seconds to check for mall security and then dragged a complaining Danny to the mens shoes.
(( I'm gonna give this one more try. -- ))


message 508: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ohh don't quit!))
Emmy was next to Patrik and Liv rifilin gthrough the converse.
"What should you buy?" Rife asked Gwen.


message 509: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 13, 2009 08:25PM) (new)

Gwen looked at the shoe choices and decided on a pair of black-universal-but-still-cute pair of flip-flops, a couple pairs of flats, and one black with sidewalk drawings, sturdy, good for walking pair of converse. "A pair of converse, but I'm ready."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok, Emmy and Patrik are too." He looked over at them
"We just have to wait on Liv and the twins," He said smiling at her


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"Can you hold these," She asked giving him the three boxes before he could answer. "I'll go help Liv."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Um ok," Rife said as Emmy came up laughing
"Dude, demoted to box carrier?"


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Gwen laughed from several isles away.


message 514: by JD (last edited Aug 13, 2009 08:32PM) (new)

JD | 27 comments Danny and Jonah went to the counter to pay for a couple pairs of cheap shoes. He pulled out a notebook and let his hand hover over a credit card before pulling out cash instead and decided to count the clerks freckles while he waited, keeping an eye on Danny. He was being unusually quiet.


message 515: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smirked and went ot pay for gwens's shoes.


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"Liv, how about these ones," Gwen asked showing her conveses with mini converse all over them.


message 517: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I like them but I think I'll get these ones" Seh held up a pair of black cons with grafiti all over them. "What do you think?"


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"Sweet, you ready? I think Rife's past his limit," Gwen said glancing at Rife holding her bags.


message 519: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Walking into a store is past hs limit." She smiled at him and held up her shoes. He scowled at her.
"Let's go,"


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Hey, Rife, wanna wait outside," Gwen went up ant took some of the bags from him.


message 521: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Danny looked around and spotted the teenagers again. He ran over and quietly asked, "So where are you guys from?"


message 522: by Hannah (last edited Aug 13, 2009 08:41PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Umm.... alternate demension," Patrik said serious.


"Like outside outside, or outside as in there?" he asked relinquishing some bags to her.


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"D.C.," Gwen said as she walked out the door, then looked back to see if Rife was coming.


message 524: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Danny stared and then nodded happily. "For a minute I thought you were just going to lie." Jonah walked up and raised an eyebrow.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "How do you know we didn't?" Patrik asked half grinning.
Emmy paid for the things then turned to them
"We've been known to lie,"

Rife followed Gwen mumbling "Outside as in there,"


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Gwen rolled her eyes and kept walking.


message 527: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments "Because normal humans from earth don't cause chaos at McDonalds." He paused uncertainly. "That I know of." Jonah began to fidget uncomfortably.


message 528: by Hannah (last edited Aug 13, 2009 08:48PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah I bet they don't" Patrik said
"That was why we got all those weird looks there," Emmy mused sarcastically

"Don't roll your eyes," he said jokingly from next to her


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Gwen stopped in her tracks and spun around on her heels and asked, "How do you know about that?"


message 530: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Who wouldn't know about that?" Liv asked from the store front
"Wait, Gwen has a point. How do you know about that?" Emmy said stared at Dany and Jonah


message 531: by JD (last edited Aug 13, 2009 08:57PM) (new)

JD | 27 comments "It's not like your the only ones that like their french fries." Jonah asnwered promptly.


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"That's not what we asked. You said something about causing chaos at McDonadls, how do you know," Gwen was stunned and wanted to know why it didn't work.


message 533: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments "Err...we saw it?" Jonah looked at Danny confused.


message 534: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Come on, I haven't seen you before and I have a freaking photographic memory!" Emmy said getting antsy


message 535: by [deleted user] (new)

"What," Gwen almost shouted, she looked at them with disbelief. "But I, I..." She stuttered.


message 536: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I think we should start to leave," Patrik said grabbing Emmy's forearm as her tattoos started to glow faintly


message 537: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Jonah looked accusingly at Danny. "You should have stayed quiet about it." Danny shrugged his shoulders and replied, "Figured it'd be better to get it out of the way."


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"Where did you see it from," Gwen was not going to just let this be.


message 539: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What are you?" Liv asked cocking her head "Because I'm getting the feeling you two aren't human either."


message 540: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments "Someone just showed us, alright? I didn't know who but they had a camera." Jonah replied hastily.


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"OH," Gwen said, still a little frustrated that she didn't completely do her job.


message 542: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Danny smiled and poked Jonah. "He's human", he stated.


message 543: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy swore loudly, getting weird looks from teh people around her
"We need to leave, Now!"
Liv ran over to the Lyrs and Gwen with teh twins in tow. "Run. Meet us at the parking lot," Emmy said to Liv


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Gwen ran out, all the while thinking she needed to see her grandmother really soon.


message 545: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments Danny and Jonah stood still looking dazed until they noticed a security gaurd walking purposefully towards them.


message 546: by [deleted user] (new)

((sorry guys, but I really have to go, it's a school night and I still have homework))


message 547: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments (( Oh, good night and good luck on the homework then. ))


message 548: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The Lyrs met up with Liv next o a beat up truck "This is the best you could find?" Emmy said looking at it.
"Yeah, It's already running so get in,"
Patrik and Rife hopped in the bed of the truck leaving enough room for the girls to get in the cab.
"I'm driving," was all Emmy said


message 549: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "What in the world is happening!" The twins yelled in onison.


message 550: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What always does, we are running. You think by now we would know better," Liv said bitterly
"Don't even go there," Emmy said as her tattoos started glowing brighter. She swore, then she said "Liv your going to have to drive for a while,"
Liv nodded adn climbed up next to Emmy, ,putting her hands on the wheel adn stepping on the gas.Emmy lifted herself up as Liv scooted under her. THen Emmy climbed into the back seat them through the back window and landed in the truck bed next to the boys.
Patrik placed a hand on her shoulder. Rife layed his head back and asked up to Gwen, "You wanna sit back here?"


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