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Patrik laughed at both Salem and Anika"What are you going to do? I have more power than you, you can't do anything."
Carefully she got a hold of it and sipped it cautiously. It settled her stomach but had nothing for her headache. "I want to know how Emmy is," she said quietly, setting the bottle down.
Patrik grabbed Mackenna's laptop. It had the observation room camera's feed on it."Not so good Salem.." Patrik said softly.
"Like I'm scared 'Not so good'." Patrik told her. "See for yourself." he showed her the screne.It was just Emmy in the room unmoving.
I had been wandering in this place for so long. I don't know what I am supposed to get from this. Whatever it is it's taking too long.
"No. It's not. It's no one's fault." Patrik said looking at her.Jesus Christ. "What am I doing here?!" I yell at this place. "What?! Huh? What?!"
"No, Salem, it isn't." Patrik said again"Oh my god, Salem. Tell me you're ok. Please tell me you're ok." I say into my dream hell. I know sh ecan hear me.
She ignored Patrik, focussing on Emmy even though it pained her to do so. It was more important.Uh, ya. I mean. I'm awake now. It still hurts. I'm sorry! This is my fault!
I laugh that takes a lot of energy. "It's not your fault. It's mine. I'm glad your awake, how far did they have to take you? And the hurt probably isn't going to go away for a while." I sit down again, the burning underwater feeling came back. It makes it hard to focus on what I'm saying."Salem, are you talking to Emmy?"
It's not your fault, she shook her head. I'm at Torch, we can see you on the laptop, Patrik and I. Gre-eat. She made a face. "Yes..I'm talking to her."
"It's not yours either. Patrik's there? He's ok right?" I put my head in my hands "What does he think happened?"Patrik sighed
"Good thing right?"
Well then, it's no one's fault. Yeah, he was here first, 'member? I don't know, but I can ask him what he thinks."Salem nodded. "Yeah," she exhaled slowly. "She wants to know what you think happened."
I think for a few seconds "Oh yea. I remember now. I'm sorry, it's so hard to concentrate. Ok, tell me what he thinks." Now it's so hard to focus, my words sound weird and off. I'm slipping and I can't hold on."I thought it was you two. Like Emmy was blocking you and vice versa. I don't know what else it could be." Patrik said with a shake of his head.
He thinks we were blocking each other. Salem held her head in her hands, a moan slipping out jsut as Mackenna came back in. Anika left quickly.
"Salem.. I can't..." I try to say as I slip away completely. It was odd to fall into the blackness in a dream. It wasn't something that people would normally feel, well I'm not normal. Never had been.Patrik looked up at Mackenna he stood and started pacing again. He hated this.
Can't what? she died to ask, but it was too late for the moment. Salem fell back, crying.Mackenna handed him the food and stood there awkwardly. "What's...wrong?"
Patrik didn't say anything all of his attention was on Salem."What happened?"
Fear colored his voice.
"I need- it to stop," she broke down crying, something she never,ever did."I'm guessing this is bad...anything at all: your wish, my command? I guess."
"I know. I don't know what to do about it." Patrik said gently. He looked back at Mackenna "Can I have some water and asprin? Please?"
Mackenna came back in record time, with Hunter. She wasn't certified for the morphine injection, but he was. She gave the water to Patrik.
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Anika clenched her fists. "Don't be stupid."