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"Nice." one of the twins said "Better than nice." the other intterupted "She looks really good in those."
Gwen looked at her. "Those look amazing on you," She gushed before grabing a dressing room before a snobby looking blonde got it.
"Thanks," Emmy said retreating to her dressingroom. Liv smirked as seh slid into the dressing room the same snobby stick blonde wanted.
"Ok, I'm ready," Gwen shouted as she came out of the dressing room in a sky blue tee and distressed light wash jeans. "I don't think I'll try the rest on now that I know my size. Just pick the ones I like best."
"Ok I love it!" Liv said looking ather smiling "But di dyou grab any skinny jeans? You would look amazing in those!"
The twins had dwadled off. Now they were standing by the jackets arguing witch color was better. The green or the blue.
Patrik came up behind the twins, "Blue," he said "But I'm biased. So why don't you get both? Then if you decide the other color you can swap,"
"Yep, I think I'm done," Gwen changed back in to her old clothes and gave the dressing room to the still waiting snobby blonde stick. "Let's see you."
They tryed in the extra small. the sleves cmpletely covered their hands and some. It looked like a dress."Somehow I don't think they fit." Rose said looking down at her own.
Gwen saw them and laughed, "Don't worry we'll stop someplace for you, but you have really good taste, I love that jacket."
Patrik laughed and said "Yeah I think so. But you can go pick the next store,"Liv came out in a noen green shirt, black hoodie, ripped up skinng jeans. She spun and asked "What do you think? I love it!"
"Whitch is better teh green or the blue?" Lilly popped in. She waas partial to the green.Rose was struggling to get out of the jacket.
'I'm stuck" she said through the fabric. It looked like it was eating her.
"I thinkI like the green better," Patrik said helping Rose out of the sweatshirt
Lilly laughed at Rose who stuck her tounge out.
"It's totally you, I love it too," Gwen smiled. "This is so much fun." She spun around to see Rife leaning against the wall looking miserable.
Patrik smiled and walked over to the mens clothing. He picked up a pair of jeans, a t-shirt, and a blue hoodie. He went to change, walking past Emmy. Who was throwing on a black t-shirt over a pair of dark ripped up jeans. He smiled "You look good,"
She grinned "Thanks, your turn. Go try on your stuff,"
Gwen walked over to Rife, "Come on, it's not that bad is it? I know this place is dark and confined and crowded and smells strongly of really good smelling cologne...yeah, this place is probably not someplace you like to be."
"Nope, But i just bought my stuff, so I can Take teh twins to their store. You want to come with me?" Rife said picking up his bag
"Sure, I need to buy this stuff first though," Gwen asked for a couple hundred then hurredly bought her stuff and took Lilly and Roses's hands as they walked out the door.
Rife smiled at the twins and Gwen and asked Rose and Lilly "Where do you want to go?"
They thought. They never really ben shopping before. They had worn the gray, white, and black uniform of the orphanage for as long ad they could remember. They looked down at their worn out Mary Janes. "Shoes." they decided. "Then clothes."
"Oh, there's a Payless over there," Gwen pointed out. "And a Childrens Place over there."
"Payless," Rife said "Is better, then we can get shoes too."
There was a small commotion at the entrance of Hollister as Danny and Jonah came bolting out. A teenager dressed in a dark t-shirt with the designed words "I need a hug" just happened to have been waiting in line behind Danny while Jonah was paying for the clothes. Apparently hugs counted as assualting these days. Jonah tripped over his own feet and went careening into Rife. (( Not sure if you meant for them to literally run into him. ))
((s'ok sounds fun))Rife stumbled back a few paces, as Emmy, Liv and Patrik came running out of the store. "What the hell?" Rife said
Jonah bounced off of him and landed on the ground. Danny lifted him off of the ground by his shoulders and placed him back on his feet while a group of teenagers made cat calls and a middle aged woman dramatically fainted. "Sorry," Jonah mumbled and looked back to realize no one was chasing them. He gave a sheepish smile and shrugged.
"S'ok man," Rife said "I just get on egde when people run into me,"
"Why's that?" Jonah asked absent mindedly while still checking behind his shoulder.
"No one's chasing you," Rife said rolling his eyes"But we tend to attract trouble," He shrugged
"We? Those your friends then?" Jonah nodded his head at Emmy, Liv, and Patrik. Danny looked nervously at the fainted lady as people continued to walk around her. He couldn't help but wonder who faints so easily. He smiled broadly as his mind wondered off to fainting goats.
(( I love fainting goats. God's joke for us all.))
Danny glanced at Jonah and realized this conversation was going nowhere. He nudged Jonah out of the way and stuck his hand out for someone to shake. "Hi," he said over enthusiastically, practically yelling.
Emmy practically yelled back "Hey!" she shook his hand
"I'm Danny, shorty here is Jonah," he continued, still almost yelling while he shook her hand a little too hard and was elbowed in the ribs by Jonah. The middle aged woman to the side finally got to her feet shakily and looked around in a daze.
"Emmy" She replied just as loudly "Thats Rife, Patrik and Liv," She pointed to each of them.
"And I'm Gwen," She inserted. "And Payless is just for shoes, we still have to go to both stores." She whispered to Rife.
"Just thought I'd let you know," She said, stiffling a laugh.
"Too many enclosed places," He muttered.
"It's ok, come on, they're kids it won't take long," Gwen squeezed his hand comfortingly then went off with the girls.
Danny grabbed Jonahs arm and followed them. "So where are you from?" he asked.
"Payless is a large group of torture chambers that keep the bodies they kill," Emmy said
(( I did it again. Looks like I'm not cut out for Rp. XD ))
"Naw, come on, you need new shoes. Hey Liz, matching shoes await," Gwen shouted back to them.
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Liv smiled "As long as you give me yours," she said holding up an armful of clothes.
Emmy walked out of the dressing room in the new jeans, almost walking into Gwen.
"Sorry, what do you guys think?" She asked turning.