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message 1: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
These are for the ideas for the start of a new story I thought of and want to know if you guys think I should follow them and see what else I could squeeze out of my brain for more. Also this will help me keep track of all my ideas of stories that come through. I have a LOT! ;P


message 2: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idea #1

A girl plagued with insanity but still sane enough to go to regular school. New school and there is a completely sane boy and he is drawn to her and falls in love with her and he becomes a little insane himself (Maybe?). It would be told from the boy's POV and the girl would be named Alyssa and she has startling light brown eyes to the point of almost a golden. She isn't fully insane, she has enough to know she is an outcast and she needs to get a better handle on it.

Here is where I stump on the idea. Should it be a love story of insanity and life or should it be some curse put in by a witch and it has plagued the girl's family since Salem. Or what supernatural factor should it be or non at all?


message 3: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
I think it'd be cool if it was a curse. that'd be awesome :)


message 4: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
What do you think of the Salem Witch Trails having to deal with it too?


message 5: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
Salem Witch Trails?


message 6: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Back in the 1800s when the piligrams came over to america and such, there was the whole who was a witch and not and they had these trials that led to the burnings of many innocent people. That is a general briefing. Try looking it up you will get more on it.


message 7: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
oh yeah. I didn't know the name, but yeah. sure! that would be interesting if you added it.


message 8: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Kay. I will work more on that idea is


message 9: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
great!


message 10: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
I like it. And the witch trials are a good idea. Although I was wondering, why her? Why did the she get a curse put on her? Why is she on the witch's hit list? You should put her in some kind of thing, where maybe shes being punished for something her parents did, or something like that. Maybe.


message 11: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
lets skip the sister cliche, or bad parents. wait, it could be her mom that was a witch and was burned when the girl was about 2. then, years later, she's suspected because her mom was. her father could help her run away, and that could be her story or something.


message 12: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Oh.... those are both awesome ideas. I will think on them. I was actually thinking that it takes place now times and her whole family on one of her parent's side was cursed by burning a witch and the insanity was the curse. Make sense?


message 13: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
ooh, thats a great idea too! so, the family would have burned the witch, and she cursed them for eternity or whatever?


message 14: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Something like that I haven't got it all figured out yet.


message 15: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
cool :) tell me when you do


message 16: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idea #2

Land of Fairy tales. Of all the ones to occur. The daughter of Jack (from Jack and the beanstalk story) is a treasure hunter following her father's footsteps and she hears the tale of Aurora's kingdom and how it never woke up and the prince to this day is still hunting for Aurora though he too is stuck in a sleep in Maleficent's dungeon. So Jack's daughter goes in search of the prince and free Aurora and her kingdom a happily ever after. I was thinking she also meets a boy from another beloved fairytale and a gang of misfits that all help her. She originally starts the journey off to find the hidden treasure of Aurora's kingdom which would be a spindle that was the cause of all the trouble. Also the land where all the fairy tales occur not all the fairy tales went according to the story and Jack's Daughter scavenges the lost tales and the tales gone right for treasure.

I was also thinking she could either be Jack From the Beanstalk Daughter or be Robin Hood's daughter.


message 17: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Humm....I like the Jack in the Beanstalk daughter idea. Can you imagine the stories she would have grown up hearing it could explain her reason for being a treasure hunter.


message 18: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yup. And I have been wanting to draw up a story with Jack's daughter in it and watching Sleeping Beauty gave me the perfect idea on how to make it a story.


message 19: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
I think it's a great idea!


message 20: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Thxs :)


message 21: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
:)


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments SmilingDork wrote: "Back in the 1800s when the piligrams came over to america and such, there was the whole who was a witch and not and they had these trials that led to the burnings of many innocent people. That is a..."

1600s, not 1800s

HISTORICAL ACCURACY POLICE STRIKES AGAIN! (evil laugh)


message 23: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
lol...You've just been burned KitKat! :)

Anyway are you keeping on this subject Smiley, or do you have new writing ideas? Do tell! XD


message 24: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Lol! I didn't even realize I put 1800s! I will take this humbling burn and cry later... ;P

No new ideas yet........ though I have been thinking up more of my zombie one and editing that. Also I am gonna start transferring more onto my flashdrive.

Have I told you guys about the Grim Knight idea?


message 25: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
I don't know! *Winces* You might have, but I probably forgot!


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments did not mean for that to be a burn, just thought the historical accuracy police thing would be funny


message 27: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Yeah, she knows that. She's just being sarcastic! :)


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments so hard to tell on the internet.
speaking of the internet, I think I will stop posting my story because I'm afraid that, it being up and everything, someone will copy it, although it won't be mine because it'll have a bunch of historically inaccurate tropes.


message 29: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Okay that's fine!


message 30: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Give me a sec I am organizing my portfolio. I will tell you in a sec


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments SmilingDork wrote: "Idea #2

Land of Fairy tales. Of all the ones to occur. The daughter of Jack (from Jack and the beanstalk story) is a treasure hunter following her father's footsteps and she hears the tale of Aur..."


I have a story in a land of fairy tales too. Only it involves portals and a fictional revolution against the grand-nephew of the king in Beowulf because non-myth legends are also real.


message 32: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Wow! That is really cool! Do you got it up?


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments I have part of it up as Thawing Maria, I think, but I don't think I will post more, as I said a few posts before.


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments The universe I used is also the universe of my RP group, Warrior Princess Academy. Several of the characters are in it.


message 35: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yeah I saw the post you have up. That is really cool! I tried using people from a place or life or group in my stories but I just couldn't connect to them the way I do on a character or world entirely my own.


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments Warrior Princess Academy's universe came from Thawing Maria, so that is why I was.


Lyd's Archive (7/'15 to 6/'18) (violabelcik) | 52 comments your idea cloud inspired mine.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Marya *Prairie Empire Furrever* (formerly Grand Duchess Olga) wrote: "so hard to tell on the internet.
speaking of the internet, I think I will stop posting my story because I'm afraid that, it being up and everything, someone will copy it, although it won't be mine ..."


That's why I don't post my full stories online. Just the a little bit like a blurb or something and the inspirations.


message 39: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yes!! I am so glad it inspired you!!


message 40: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idea #3

Alex and Jack Denton are high top criminal masterminds. They were the best of the best...............well they were until a heist goes wrong and Alex is shot and Jack is caught. Jack assumes Alex is dead. But how could she? She was his twin, his best friend, and the best of them. She came up with the best raids and was the burning star that couldn't just go out. Jack took care of the technical stuff and was the guy happy in the shadows. Now in prison Jack has to survive without his twin and relive that day everything went wrong.


Here is where I need help. Should they have magical powers or just be a highly talented thieves. Should Jack be recruited by a top secret agency who need help with a case and the is how jack gets his new beginning? If I go this way I have a special twist to this but I need your guys help on. And your thoughts on it.


message 41: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Hmm...Well I think you should stick with the whole high talented thieves thing, it would seem to out there if they had magic, unless maybe that's how they steal and stuff, with magic I mean. Then that would seem really cool. Especially if the agency that hired him was like some sort of magic training place. (Does that make sense) I think that sound like a really interesting story!


message 42: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yeah that was along the lines I was thinking. That they got the powers during a raid or something or that in the future world they are in there are people with powers and not and Jack and Alex have two because they are twins and that makes them such great criminals plus they are just that cool.


message 43: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Makes sense! lol...Looking forward to seeing what you choose!


message 44: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Thxs!!!!


message 45: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
I FOUND IT! WaHahahah!


message 46: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yes!!!!


message 47: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idea #4

...........has yet to come! I have been. low on my creative ideas guys!!!!


message 48: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
can't wait to hear it when it comes!! I'm sure it'll be as amazing as the other ones :)


message 49: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idea #4

Wonderland is dying and the madness of Wonderland is gone. Hatteiretta, the daughter of the Mad Hatter, given the task to find Alice and bring back the madness that left with her. The Wonderland committee decide to send her into the modern world to look for Alice but Alice is long dead and her descendants caring on the madness. Alistair is Alice's descendant and his life was ordinary and awesome until Hatteiretta comes in with all her Wonderland insanity. The. more he denies Wonderland the more it dies. Hatteiretta is also sent to the modern world with a soldier from the Red and White Court to help her. And she has a dormouse pet that she is constantly talking to named Teassa.

It is still a pretty rough idea but. I was thinking about it last night. I will fine tune it later.


message 50: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
it's amazing!! I'd love to read a story about it :)


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