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message 1: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Idk what to call this story but it is about a girl who is a princess and a witch. She faces a world of newly found peace and growing chaos and the fact she is about to be a big sister and she will someday rule a kingdom and her two best friends will be by her side now matter what. Haven't come up with much else for this story but we will see how it comes.
;P


message 2: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Interested. It seems like it'd be a good story. Or should I say storie *Evil laugh* Wahahaha.

P.S. I'm having a thunder storm over here, so my evil laugh sounds totally more scary. Lol!


message 3: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
"Princess Alexandra! Princess Alexandra!" yelled a bell like voice, only shriller than usual. I awoke from my sleeping state, jumping up ready to attack with my feather quill only to find nothing but my etiquette teacher, Madam Bridas. "Wipe that filthy saliva off your face and sit down. Like a princess," she stated curtly pinning me with a nasty look. I nodded and sat down as princess like as I could and discreetly wiping my face.(Mined you I still had a terribly long way to go before I could be properly called a princess of the fan twiddling, gossiping, lip stick wearing, and fainting type everyone wanted me to be.) Madam Bridas pinned me under gaze and I could see the lecture coming and the gears turning in her head. Her normal high bun was lopsided and frazzled making her head look kinda like a golden cotton ball. Her cheeks were speckled red in frustration and I am pretty sure I saw smoke coming from her ears. Plus try as she might I could tell she was near her wits end with me.

We had been going about this lesson all morning. She was in the middle of a lecture of how I have a duty to full fill as the heir to the throne and how I must be ready by the ball next month and blah blah blah ....(This is the point were I dozed off and had a quite pleasant dream of sorts.) As she continued to glare at me her foot started tapping and I knew exactly what this lecture would be. Madam Bridas would start by lecturing about the ball next month (Again) then she would lead into how I must be ready to meet the Prince of Drother, a kingdom to the west of us, at the ball and how he might be a possible marriage candidate. While he was a fine swordsman and had some looks, he was not my type at all. Not to mention he was horribly stuck up and hated to lose, especially to a girl.

Just as I finished thinking of how her lecture would go, she started say exactly what I predicted, so I zoned out for a while and found myself hoping the good weather stays for a bit longer. I tuned back in when Madam Bridas was going on and on about how it was high time I married and when she was my age half the girls in her village were married and had a kid and blah blah blah. She was so into her speech that Bridas didn't notice the maid who had shown up and knocked. I think her name was Sophie. "Ahem!" I said rather loudly stopping Bridas mid-rant. Which led her to say, "A princess doesn't say "Ahem", she says....."

"Excuse me miss," Sophie said tentatively.

"See! Even a maid makes a better princess then you!" Madam Bridas exclaimed with a flourish of her hand to the maid. I felt my face redden at the comment and twist into a scowl.

"Get on with it, maid," Madam Bridas order Sophie looming impatient to get back to her lecture.

" The Princess is to be excised of the rest of her lesson for the queen wishes to see her." Sophie said with a curtsy then left.

I don't think I got out of the stuffy room fast enough, even Bridas looked happier at me leaving. I started walking down the hall, well more like sprinting. It wasn't until I was halfway down the hall did I realize I was being tailed. I looked back to see Sophie following me, by how pale and distressed she looked I got the feeling that something wasn't right.


message 4: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
You are a dork Ravanna and AHHH!!!! *Moves hands into strangle position*


message 5: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Oops forgot to revise the story. Oh well *Shrug*


message 6: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (last edited Sep 05, 2015 10:11PM) (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
What! What happens next. Oh no. This can't be good. *Bites nails down to stubs* Cliff hangers....Ugh... ;P


message 7: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (last edited Sep 05, 2015 10:13PM) (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Very good! Your writing is marvelous.!!!!!.... I'm so proud. *Dabs under eyes with fake tissues*


message 8: by Molly (new)

Molly W That's really good, I was getting right into the story when you stopped! Have you got any more?


message 9: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yes I have more to come! Thxs guys! I am SO glad I hooked you!! And I am so happy I made you proud Ravanna! ;P Jk but seriously hlad you guys liked it! If you liked this one you should also check out the story I just posted too.


message 10: by Molly (new)

Molly W Which one is that?


message 11: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
A Fairytale from another world also called Lost Memories.


message 12: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
I mean Memories Long Forgotten


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