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message 2: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 10:25AM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Question: are we RPing the kidnapping, or we jumping to when the female character is on vacation...?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Um we going to do the kidnapping first then we will do the vacation.
Do you want to make charries or do just want to jump in?


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Make characters.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok simple or detail?


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) What age range where you looking at? Like mid teen, or late teens, or early 20s...?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Um late teens


message 9: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 10:50AM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Name: Sylar
Nickname: None
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Orientation: Straight

Appearance: Sylar stands at 6'0 has short black hair and piercing green eyes. His is of average build and has sharp facial features.
Personality: Charming, cunning, funny when he wants to be, unlucky a lot of the time when it comes to the law and has somewhat a short temper.
History: Sylar comes from a very dysfunctional background. When he was 5 years old he was taken from his parents for negligence and then when he was 8 years old his parents got him back after three years. As the years went on he was taken, then given back to his parents. With all this unbalanced childhood he didn't have many friends and when he was 15 he was arrested for theft.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Name:Vanessa Elredge
Nick Name: Nessa
Age:17
Sex:Straight
Apeareance: 5'5 long blonde hair that curls. Her body is kissed by the sun.
Personialty: Nice person. She is very smart. She has many friends. She never had a boyfriend. She doesn't like jocks. She hates bad boys. Most of the time is shy.
History: to be discover


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) All right who shall start us off; me, or shall you?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Can you? Please.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sure no problem :)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Thanks


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar could hear the sirens a few streets over. He let out a low growl and started to run a few more blocks over to the right. It lead him further and further away from the destination he had in mind, but it couldn't be helped. If he brought the cops to his "hideout" then he would be even more trouble with his parents then he already was. He jumped over a fence and into a yard that was cluttered with children's playground equipment.

"You've got to be kidding me!" He said then dodged the equipment and jumped out of the nightmarish backyard and continued on his way to losing the cops still a few streets behind him.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa hear the sirens. What happen? She was on her morning run. She loved the way running felt. She liked the breeze on her cheeks. It felt so right. Her feet whet pitter patter on the sidewalk. She was in short shorts. And a neon green top. Her heart was pumping fast. She ran through the alleyways. She ran through her neighbors backyard.

If you called it a backyard. It was full of kids toys. She didn't make one stumble. Since she was so used to it. She would of never notice the boy unless if she didn't stumble. "I'm so sorry." She said. "Are you alright?" She said helping the boy up.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar didn't notice the girl before it was to late. The next thing he knew was that he was on the ground, his heart pumping in his chest. As the girl asked if he was all right and helped him up he felt his anxiety spike. He glared at the girl his nerves razzled and his heart up in his throat. The sirens were no doubt closer then they were a few seconds before.

"Do I look all right?" He growled brushing off his pants of the dirty that billowed up when he fell. His mind was racing from one thought to another. If he didn't act fast their was no doubt in his mind that he was going to get arrested. Without thinking he grabbed the girls wrist and started to pull her away from the sound of the sirens that were now stopping on the street he just crossed.

"Come on." He growled and pulled her with him as he walked. He has no idea what he was doing, but it was the best thing he could think of at the moment.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Let go of me please." She said in a shy voice. She had many friends,but she was super shy. She didn't want to know where he was taking her. "May I at least change. I don't really like these short shorts in public." She whispered. Was she being kidnapped? He dragged her along. She didn't know what was happening. She hated people like this. Who show up and think just because she is a pretty little blonde means she will follow any guy who shows up.

"If your in any trouble maybe I could help?" She asked. Blinkly her blue eyes.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar completely ignored her. "You and I are the only ones out right now so there isn't anyone to see you in those shorts." He said as he peeked around a corner, but sat that the coast was clear. Sylar stepped out and started to cross the street heading farther and farther away from the sirens as he could.

He snorted at her comment, "What makes you think I'm in any trouble?" He asked, but knew it was a loaded question. It was clear that he was on the run as they put more distant from the police as he could.

"Just shut up. Quit asking questions and we'll get along just fine." He said.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded. She was being kidnapped. She understood what shutup meant. She will just listen to the crazy boy for now. When the next time she has a chance to leave she will. She enjoyed silence. She wasn't going to make him mad. No telling how crazy this boy could be. She kinda got used to holding his hand. Then her best friend came up. "Hi Vanessa can you introduced me to your friend here."

She smiled."Hi Emily this is my friend Zack."
"You have a boyfriend." Her faced went red."It's about time you had one. Thank you Zack for being her first boyfriend." Emily walked away.

"I'm sorry about her." She muttered.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar took in a deep breath when she nodded and she was quiet. They walked a few minutes when they were stopped by a girl who must have known the girl that Sylar had taken hostage.

"H-Hi..." He said then shut his mouth so he wouldn't say anything that would tip of Emily that he had taken her friend against her will. He notched his brow, then looked back over at Vanessa.

"Zack?" He asked then chuckled, then continued to pull her along.

"That the best you could come up with?" He asked and then shrugged.

"Whatever, its fine." He said. A few minutes past when he decided that he should tell the girl his name because he wasn't looking forward to her calling him Zack.

"The name is Sylar by the way, but it would be better if you don't tell other people my real name." He said.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Hi Skylar." She said quietly afraid of what he will do. Her phone started buzzing off. "Oh no. Emily probably told everyone I have a boyfriend." She shook her head. She hated the idea of having a boyfriend. She didn't want this one to be known. "My parents are going to flip." She actually didn't mind. He was kind of cute in a bad boy way.

"Here have my phone. I can delete are the data and make it untraceable if you want me to." She was trying to be nice. She was a very nice person after all. Even to her captor. She handed him her phone. The pink covered sparkled in the sun. "Here's my keys to my car. It's a newer one. I was suppose to pick it up. I can make that untraceable as well." She smiled then she looked down. It wasn't against the law to runaway.


message 23: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 12:06PM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar chuckled, but didn't stop walking. "What you not allowed to date until your thirty?" He asked. When she offered him her phone and her car he got a little...suspicious.

"Why are you helping me...?" He asked, stopping and taking the phone, but didn't release her wrist.

"Making them untraceable won't be enough. If you go home and tell your parents what happen to your phone and your car they'll have every cop throughout the county on the look out for it." He said then pulled her along once again.

"Where is your car?" He asked.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No I can date." She paused. "I chose not to." She batted her eyes and smiled. He had pretty green eyes. She hoped she wasn't caught staring at them. "Well you see my parents wouldn't actually flipped. They wouldn't approve of you that's all. They didn't approve anyone except the geeks. Sad you know because I'm 17 and graduating a year early. And the whole tech department asked me out. " she caught herself because she started to babble.

She realized his question."Because I like helping." She didn't say because your cute bad boy. "Also because I never did anything bad once." She added in. "My life is pretty boring. I'm not allowed to go to parties or anything that involves people who my parents trust. One time when I was 14 my best friend Emily had a sleep over and when got home my parent had me tested for drugs crazy right?" She caught herself again.

"Not to far from here. If you need credit cards I have those too. I also know how to make fake IDs. I can make credit cards untraceable too." She smiled. "I'm sorry for talking so much."


message 25: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 12:21PM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) (I've got to go. I'll post the next time I am on.)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Awe bye ttyl))


message 27: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 07:52PM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) ((Back and posting))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Kk))


message 29: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 08:04PM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar rolled his eyes. "Uh, huh..." He said not truly buying it, but he didn't want to her pouting and making a scene. Their were a few senior citizens coming out with their cup coffee in hand to collect their morning paper. A few nodded at the seemingly "happy couple" even though there was nothing happy about it.

"If you've been asked out by all these guys," He said stopping as a car passed, then he started to walk again. "then why not just go out with them then...?" He asked half out of curiosity and half of boredom.

He snorted. "At least your parents care..." He said and dropped it right there. He was not going into the messed up life of his parents...ever.

"Its really nice of you to help, but you seemed to have not heard me earlier. I can't let you go, not yet anyway. I need to get out of town." He said then took in a deep breath.

"If I don't then...well lets just say I'll have a really wild welcome party when I get home later." He said and continued to walk on.

"How much further to your car?" He asked.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You don't believe me don't you?" She sounded shocked. She was going to prove a point. "Do you have a credit card that doesn't have any money one it. If not I do." She paused for second thinking about what to do next.

"First off the guys were all nerds you had buck teeth and snot coming out of there nose. All of the other guys were football players or bad boys." She smirked. "My parents don't care all it matters is I hold up the family name. She zoned out for most of his conversation. "They weren't right for me."

"Right there." Pointing to the car dealer. "Since we both agree not to get caught. I guess we will pretend to be dating." She stammered. She dragged him into the dealers. "Hello I'm here to pick up my car." She smiled.

"Whose this?"
"Oh he's my boyfriend Zach." She smiled.
"Has he kissed you yet." Her face grew pale.
"No."
"Then he isn't your boyfriend."


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar shrugged. "If I use one of your credit cards the police can easily trace me. Sylar chuckled.

"I bet they did. Sounds like your just really picky..." He said then stopped when they reached the car dealership where Vanessa's car was.

"Well man aren't you a lucky little girl. Getting a new car," He said then looked over at her. "your family rich, or something?" He asked.

When the dealer started to lecture her about how he couldn't be her "boyfriend" if he hadn't kissed her yet.

"That is such a lie. I can be her boyfriend and not have kissed her yet." He said growing annoyed with the dealer.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No they won't I will prove a point." She rolled her eyes. She was getting mad at him.

"No my family isn't rich I bought it myself." She said. This boy was getting on her nerves.

"I will give you the first year of payments free if you guys kiss." Her eyes widen.
"Mrs.Jenkins." What should she do? Free. If she got that she would be able to college. She smiled at the thought of that. "Deal." She smiled. She looked up at him."first I'm super sorry. I really am. I don't do this. I know you probably hate me more than you already do,but I could go to college with that money saved." She paused. "I don't really know how to kiss so you might need to do something about that." She was very nervous.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar stared at her dumfounded. "You've got to be kidding me..." He thought to himself. He couldn't believe that this was really happening to him.

"Your serious...?" He asked, but he knew without her confirming that she was serious; deadly serious it seemed. "Well...I guess I have no choice." He said, then sighed.

"Fine, but I don't like this..." He muttered so only she could hear. For her being the hostage and he the kidnaper it looked to him like she was getting control of the situation. Sylar closed his eyes and leaned down, pressing his lips gently to hers, then pulled away.

"There happy?" He asked the dealer with a dark look in his eyes. He did not like to be messed with and it really seemed to him that that was exactly what this dealer was doing...


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up. She smiled a deep red. "Yeah I um the deal." She nodded her head good luck. "You can drive. But please don't scratch it. I spent my college fund on this. My parents don't exactly know." She dropped the subject.

Her brand new mustang convert. "Beautiful." She wanted another kiss. It was nice. "Now if you need money. I will show you how to hack into ATMs without getting caught or traced." She touched the car. It was hers.

"Ah thank you for helping with the kiss." She muttered. She shut her mouth.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar laughed. "Well aren't you another Bonnie Parker. Next thing you'll know you'll be robbing banks and being chased by the cops." He said with a chuckle as he got into the driver seat of the mustang.

"Yeah it sure is a nice ride. So what made you go rogue and steal your college money to buy a car?" He asked as he started the car and then pulled out of the car lot.

"I'm gonna take a wild guess that you've done all this hacking into ATMs before I came along..." He said.

He shrugged. "No problem, but don't say I've never done anything for you." He said and winked at her, then wanted to slap himself. "Sylar, man what are you doing? You kidnapped this girl you can't be winking at her!" He scolded himself silently.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Hey it comes in handy." She smirked. "I'm just kidding. Just because I know how to hack doesn't me I do it." Her faced blushed. "Thanks I wanted this car for awhile now."

"Well my parents weren't going to let me go. They left there my account number out. So I memorize the information. Used there laptop. Made everything untraceable. Put it on a credit card. Since exceeded the limit I hacked the ATM machine easily. " She made it sound easy.

"You know what sad is. I never been to a party. I never wore a dress before. I barley got out of the house with this on. I just want to have some freedom. You know." She didn't mean to be babbling. "I'm sorry." She looked out the window.


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Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar laughed. "Of course you don't! Your to much of a goodie-two-shoes for that!" He said then stopped at a red light about a mile away from the dealership.

"So what do you mean when you say they weren't going to let you go?" He asked.

"To college, or something...?" He asked then smiled and glanced over at her a few times.

"They want their baby girl to stay and live at home...?" He asked, the humor seeable in his voice.

"Well why don't you go to a party and wear a dress?" He asked a little confused about it all. "What they tie you up when you utter the word party, or dress?" He asked.

"I mean my parents don't want me doing...what I'm known to do, but I still do it." He said.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You could say something like that, but they control everything. I mean if I were to go to college it would have to be Yale. I don't want there. I didn't even want to graduate. " she laughed.

"Me in a dress at a party." She shook her head. "Like I said before no invites to things because of parents." She smiled. "I'm not a good two shoes. I brought a brand new sports car. With a college fun. "

"Aren't you like suppose to have dates to parties and what not." She asked staring at the passing houses. "I'm sorry your probably mad at me for talking to much."


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar shrugged. "I could really careless if you talk. And why would I have dates to parties and what not?" He asked.

"If you haven't realized I'm pretty much a total screw up. I mean I was running from the cops. Don't you think that would put a damper on my love life?" He asked, but then shook his head. "I really need to shut up." He thought to himself.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "First off your a hot bad boy." Her face blushed. "Second off you might find a
pretty girl?" She felt her face hot and flushed. "So what if your on the run from the cops. You kidnaped a girl who could cover for you because she is nice." She told herself to be quite. "I'm so sorry. I babble when I'm nervous. Especially around super hot bad boys." She felt like she would curled up in a ball. She turned on the radio. Pretending the conversation never happen.


message 41: by Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (last edited Mar 06, 2014 09:27PM) (new)

Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) (Got to go, sleepy ~.~ Night, night -wave- Will post when I am on next...)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Ttyl *waves* night night.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar laughed. "A hot bad boy, huh?" He asked and turned right when the light turned green. "Let me tell you something; pretty girls want nothing to do with a delinquent like me." He said.

"Yes, you do babble but I think its kind of cute." He said, then cleared his throat and tapped his fingers on the steering wheel.

"And besides, you could get in a lot of trouble helping me, Vanessa." He said, then stopped at another red light.

"We're going to have to drive to the next town over so you'd better get prepared." He said and drove straight as the light turned green, making his way out of town.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Well to bad for those pretty girls they don't know what they are missing." She blushed. "What I mean is.." She shook her head. "Never mind." She thought she should shut up before she said something she regretted.

"Thank you" She looked at him. She really wanted to jump up and down. She contained herself. She was staring now. She couldn't take her eyes off of him. She was having a conversation with him.

"So I can deny everything. I can also teach you how to mess with lie dectors. Besides that I want to help. You kidnapped me. So why can't I have some fun without getting caught by my parents." She smiled.

"Ok can I have my phone to do this. It's fine if you don't trust me,but it would make things quicker." She shrugged her shoulders and looked out the window. She was falling hard for him.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar sighed. "Thats nice of you to say, but they aren't missing much." He said, then handed over her phone.

"Here." He said, then placed his hand back on the steering wheel when she took the phone.

"I know how to cheat a lie detecter test. So no worries there." He said then past over the city limits.

"The next two is two hours away. Well one that is big enough to where we won't be easily drawn out as someone breaking the law." He said.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yeah they are. Your super hot bad boy. Who thinks he is a criminal, but nice. Who just happened to kidnapped a girl who would be willing to help him break the law. Who happens to have to life at all." She smiled.

"Thanks. No worries." She smiled and laid her head back. "I'm just going to take a nap. She closed her eyes and soon fell asleep. She trying to get into a comfortable position. She unbuckled her seat belt without knowing it. She found her head on his shoulder.

She snapped awake at sound of honking horn. "Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry for using your shoulder as a pillow. I'm so sorry." She slid back over to her seat. "I'm so sorry. I really am." She whispered.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar chuckled. "Sure, whatever you say." He said and then paid more attention to the road in front of him. As he drove Vanessa's head somehow appeared on his shoulder. At first it was a little uncomfortable, but after awhile he grew use to it. When she bolted up and started to apologize to him he shrugged.

"Its fine so no need to flip out, calm down." He said to her as he honked the horn for the cars in front of him to go because the light was green.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm not flipping out." She looked at the road. She was still tired. A job had to be done. She looked through her phone. She found the nearest ATM. She clicked on it. She started hacking through there systems. "You would think banks would put up more protection."

She broke through the systems. "If you see a ATM. All you have to do is put the card in press it's pin in. Which is 1234. Then I press the button. As soon as I press this button the money will come out. It will also delete everything we took and act like it never happened."

"Have you ever been to a party?" She asked looking at him with curiosity.


Lura (The Life of Serendipity) (xthelifeofserendipityx) Sylar chuckled. "Sure your not, but anyway I just go and insert a car and press in the pin and you press a button?" He asked memorizing the pin, which was not hard.

"They do, but I guess the protection is easy to get past for you." He said. He drove to the bank, then parked the car a few blocks from the ATM.

"Yeah I have, why?" He asked.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yeah pretty much that's all you have to do." She said looking at him. "How much do you need so I can program it to give you how much." She smiled and then blushed.

"You must be right very easy for me. Second to the schools system this was pretty unprotected. They are updating that make things easier." She looked out the window.

"Are parties fun?"


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