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I would be happy to read and review aojtweety@hotmail.com
Angie **loves angst** wrote: "I would be happy to read and review aojtweety@hotmail.com"Emailed you :-)
I'm looking for a Beta reader to proof my debut novel Whirlwind. This story was a four year long affair and now I'm at the final stages for paperback production. That being said, I know there are still errors and would like some assistance in making my baby as perfect as I can.
Whirlwind contains explicit sexual content and language.
Synopsis - From the moment Nashville’s Dr. Molly Ryan and Hollywood’s newest British import, Richard T. Vaughan’s eyes meet it is lust at first sight. A shared instant was all it took. It was a look, and a benign touch mixed with racing heart beats and an urge to consume. And because the fleeting moment was a force of unparalleled desire, it’s a point in time neither will ever forget.
After weeks of yearning and abstinence neither can resist the other. And after one incredibly sensual night, when emotions and desires raged and were let loose in a whirlwind of incomparable passion, Richard is forced to return to London with no idea when he’ll return.
Though they struggle against lies, fear, distance and a shared tragedy which will haunt them for the rest of their lives, Molly and Richard fight to find if their love remains?
However, nothing is easy.
Will they give up? Will they move on, or will they give in to the whirlwind?
Please let me know if anyone is at all interested.
Whirlwind contains explicit sexual content and language.
Synopsis - From the moment Nashville’s Dr. Molly Ryan and Hollywood’s newest British import, Richard T. Vaughan’s eyes meet it is lust at first sight. A shared instant was all it took. It was a look, and a benign touch mixed with racing heart beats and an urge to consume. And because the fleeting moment was a force of unparalleled desire, it’s a point in time neither will ever forget.
After weeks of yearning and abstinence neither can resist the other. And after one incredibly sensual night, when emotions and desires raged and were let loose in a whirlwind of incomparable passion, Richard is forced to return to London with no idea when he’ll return.
Though they struggle against lies, fear, distance and a shared tragedy which will haunt them for the rest of their lives, Molly and Richard fight to find if their love remains?
However, nothing is easy.
Will they give up? Will they move on, or will they give in to the whirlwind?
Please let me know if anyone is at all interested.
Steve wrote: "send document to pandaproof47@gmail.com"
what can I expect for a turnaround?
what can I expect for a turnaround?
I can help if you want..suemahlerwein@yahoo.com
Sue wrote: "I can help if you want..suemahlerwein@yahoo.com"Hi, getting a little confused with which story people want lol. Sue do you want Elemental Fear or Whirlwind one? I originally posted the thread so not sure what is going on lol.
I would be interested in reading it for you and giving you an honest review. Please email me at amanda_craven@att.net.
Kirsty wrote: "K.L. wrote: "I'm looking for a Beta reader to proof my debut novel Whirlwind. This story was a four year long affair and now I'm at the final stages for paperback production. That being said, I kno..."
149,702 words. Yeah she's a beast.
149,702 words. Yeah she's a beast.
Amanda wrote: "I would be interested in reading it for you and giving you an honest review. Please email me at amanda_craven@att.net."
Will do.
Will do.
There is a synopsis posted.
I will say that it deals with domestic violence, rape and some scenes may be unsuitable for some audiences. I would suggest over 18's but I understand domestic violence is on the increase with younger teens and unfortunately is not age discriminate. So I recommend reader discretion.
Please message me your email if you are interested.
Thank you