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Sep 22, 2009 03:31PM
ha ha okay guys!! lol
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i gtg now, ill ttyl! thanks for reading and commenting! :)
ok ummmm i love violet sky because its the greatest?
message 956:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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The chapter? Or my guess at her acronym?(which actually means i love violet sky becaus its so good or something i dont remember) lol
Ha ha lol thx!! I was actually pretty close! :P
Hehe:I love Violet Sky because It is too good....
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i love Violet Sky because it is the greatest
SOUNDS better!!:D
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Maryam_Music Lover wrote: "Uh-huh..Wait....*turns around*, "Huneeya did you like Moonlight..??"Huneeya's response:
*is reading Pretties*
Gasps for a while, in between gasps says...WAIT MARYAM!!Finishes whatever scene she..."
u just HAD 2 post that didnt u?
haha great, i now have abbreviations AND acronyms!! this writing stuff is better than i thought!!
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lol thats soooo great jess.....shes looooooooooosing it......
message 969:
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Wow. I knew Teddy was gonna die, I just... I don't know, it almost seemed to sudden. Too... fast. The ending kind of seemed a little rushed, if you know what I mean. It was good, but it just seemed... I don't know. Like one night he's proposing to her and everyone is so happy and it's like her bday and then in the morning, he's dead, his dad is dead, his mom is left w/o a family, and he's just... gone. That's great and everything, but it's a little rushed. It almost seems forced.
This is just some constructive criticism, though. Ignore it, change it, keep it, do whatever you want. But the ending is also kind of a cliffhanger. You leave the readers with questions, like you never explained why he was so hot all the time. It said his heart was singed, but other than that... Idk. It was a great story, I just... hm... idk. Anyway, it was awesome! Good job!
Ya i knw it was rushed, i wanted it to be that way so it would be sudden, like, unexpected u knw? and im still playing around with the idea of an epilogue for all those reasons, or just editing and putting in explanations and stuff. I think ill go with the latter cuz i like how it ended but i still feel like theres so much more i couldve done with it. We'll just have to c!!
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Catherine wrote: "haha great, i now have abbreviations AND acronyms!! this writing stuff is better than i thought!!"Heheh!!:D :D
Huneeya wrote: "Maryam_Music Lover wrote: "Uh-huh..Wait....*turns around*, "Huneeya did you like Moonlight..??"Huneeya's response:
*is reading Pretties*
Gasps for a while, in between gasps says...WAIT MARYAM!!...
u just HAD 2 post that didnt u? "
mnhm, How could I NOT!!??
a chapter of my story, Violet Sky
oohhh right.ive still gotta start reading that
heck ive got like 5 stories i wanna read
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haha theres no rush, actually id rather u wait it needs a lot o editing that im still working on...
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no seriously like i read thru the first half of it and im like OMFG THIS IS TERRIBLE Y DIDNT ANYBODY TELL ME?!?
so ya, lots of changes need to be made....
so ya, lots of changes need to be made....
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chapter 13 i think it was was cheesy as hell it was too embarrassing to read!! chap 22....lemme go check which one that is i dont remember...
ooohhh that one! im gonna have to tweak that a bit cuz it went with my old ending that i changed but i like it too i wanna keep it :P
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ya i liked the last line 2
it was sweet, but it was super duper cheesy and unrealistic. im like ya, no, gots to go. ill still have him say something sweet, just not as over-the-top, u knw?
it was sweet, but it was super duper cheesy and unrealistic. im like ya, no, gots to go. ill still have him say something sweet, just not as over-the-top, u knw?
message 987:
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ya, thats y im gng over it a lot. then....well then im not exactly sure what im gonna do! lol i guess then itll b nano time!
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omg doesnt friday seem like a month ago?? im like was it really only 3 days ago i had everybody over 4 pizza and we got soaked at the homecoming game??
So did we! Then on saturday I was in a parade and I got so soaked. It was so cold. uggg. The bad thing about my town is that both the high school football teams suck. So on Friday they played each other for last place it was pretty depressing. My highschool lost though.
awww ouch i left our homecoming game at half time cuz we were soaked to the bone and freezing but even then we were up 35-0! ah, well, our town usually wins everything! :p
message 995:
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haha ikr? we can suck it up if it means we win :P
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