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message 1: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:07PM) (new)

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message 2: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
OOoooooooh!


message 3: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:07PM) (new)

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message 4: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Love it!!!


message 5: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Yes!!! #Rube-approved


message 6: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Wow. Is it just me, or isn't when you read others peoples work you feel like your own work is insignificant. Because you and Ruby's work is amazing. You really you how to draw a reader in. XP


message 7: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thank you so much! And yes I feel that way a lot, but such is the life of a perfectionist. I already find myself critiquing this! Noticing the way the narrative flow is interrupted occasionally, and some grammar things I need to correct. Unfortunately my perfectionism is dying down and I am simply too lazy to edit. But I'm glad you like it and find it engaging (literally the two best compliments a writer could ever get!)


message 8: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Lol!!!


message 9: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:08PM) (new)

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message 10: by Ravanna Dee (last edited Aug 17, 2015 12:05PM) (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Hmm....I likey, likey. :) Can't wait to read more.


message 11: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh I love how you got the language so...that..yeah


message 12: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thanks guys!!!!! I appreciate you checking it out. I plan on adding more soon. ^__^


message 13: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:08PM) (new)

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message 14: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooooooooooh keep it up it's awesome!!! :D:D:D:D


message 15: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:09PM) (new)

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message 16: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
OOooooooooooooooh amazing! Really well written! Can't wait for more!!


message 17: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thanks Ruby!


message 18: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Yeah totally get you! I do that all the time! But then someone comments, and I'm like...Well maybe I should keep going and see were this leads.

But anyway I see what your saying.

I've recently started working on a book called The New Generation Project or (T.N.G.P) it's in the creative writing page on goodreads. And I'm debating on whether or not I should continue.


message 19: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Ravanna wrote: "Yeah totally get you! I do that all the time! But then someone comments, and I'm like...Well maybe I should keep going and see were this leads.

But anyway I see what your saying.

I've recently st..."


You should! I'll have to check it out, I don't think I've read it yet...


message 20: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Love it!

And yeah its new so hardly anyone has read it yet! Only two chapters so far. :/


message 21: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooooh Heeennnnrrriiiiii

XDXD


message 22: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooooh Heeennnnrrriiiiii

XDXD


message 23: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Ravanna wrote: "Love it!

And yeah its new so hardly anyone has read it yet! Only two chapters so far. :/"


Where is it?


message 24: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) It's in that creative writing thing on Goodreads. Or if you just go to my page, and scroll down to Ravanna's writing, It should be either above or below Ravanna's groups. I hope that makes sense!


message 25: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Sounds good!


message 26: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:10PM) (new)

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message 27: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooh


message 28: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) And here I thought my writing was good! *Swats hand through the air* Nope. No where as good, and as descriptive as yours! You make a reader intrigued, and your details are admire worthy. You always hold my attention! Love it!


message 29: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Ravanna wrote: "And here I thought my writing was good! *Swats hand through the air* Nope. No where as good, and as descriptive as yours! You make a reader intrigued, and your details are admire worthy. You always..."


Nonsense. You're writing is brilliant. I'm actually still trying to work on being more descriptive so it seems less of a dialogue. HOWEVER---- I'm glad you guys are liking it so far. I don't know if you guys can see it, but it's a loosely based on a fairy tale....

hehe


message 30: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) lol


message 31: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:10PM) (new)

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message 32: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
First of all, YAY LOVE IT AS ALWAYS

and, is it Cinderella?


message 33: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "First of all, YAY LOVE IT AS ALWAYS

and, is it Cinderella?"


Nope.


message 34: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Should I tell you? Or would that ruin it? haha!


message 35: by em_panada (new)

em_panada NOTICE: Henri's name is being changed to... *drum roll* Willem.


message 36: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Rlly?? Hmm...

Haha, but I liked HENRI


...SIGH, I suppose I'll manage....


message 37: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Well, I mean I guess I could still do Henri.... I'm rather fond of it.

Might as well.


message 38: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
YES


message 39: by em_panada (new)

em_panada NOTICE: Ok. I'm switching this up so it can go better with the fairy tale version I'm basing it on--- So make sure you check to see if anything has been updated, lest it doesn't make sense.


message 40: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.o


message 41: by em_panada (new)

em_panada It shouldn't be too bad, but I think it will show more character development in certain characters than there was before. (I know they tell you to write and then edit, but this would drive me crazy).


message 42: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Dec 15, 2015 04:34PM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Haha, kay-o


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