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message 1: by Bree (new)

Bree The loser of the school went to the life of danger, beauty and much more. Now not so loser is trying to find her away around. She instantly falls for a football Jock. With a secret of being a vampire. Normal humans would stay away. She isn't human though. How can she fall in love with a jerk? She later discovers that he isn't a cold hearted vampire. He likes her. They develop a binding. The a person who wants to breaks the binding would do anything. Can they stop them before it's to late?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Simple or detail characters?


message 3: by Bree (new)

Bree I want to say detailed since we each are going to have only one character. My template might not be like your's though, so just to let you know..


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Here is mine:

Name of character: Clytie

Meaning of Name: Brightly and lovely name this honnor of her mother who abandoned her.

Age:15

Godly Parnet:Posiedon

Powers:
Water manulptation
Breathe Underwater
Talks to horses and sea creatures
Telekinesis
Makes water related storms

Enemies: Doctors , Foster parents,and school bullies. People who told that she was
nothing but crap and crazy. The monsters and minnions of Ursla. The people who
killed her adoptive parents and almost her.

Allies
Any magical being.( that will were good)

History

The same dream over and over. The same reaction every time. Her heart pumps harder
each time. This time it felt as real as it did whenit happen. The day her adoptive parents
died. They were on vacation and they were calling for a hurricane. She had an argument
with them before they talked to a stranger. A person who looked fimalialr, but she didn't
know. The person left and after that everything went blank.

She was awakened to the noise at the hostpial. She ask what happen and they told her.
This little girl cried herself to sleep. She blamed herself. She had a new family and new
school. Then the monsters started coming she told her foster parents what she was
seeing. They took her to the doctors. The diagnosed her with ADHD.

They gave her pills. She thought they would help her. Make her normal, but they didn't.
The monsters came to her bigger and more dangerous. She couldn't tell anyone about
it or they would think she was crazy. She kept it.

At school the kids made fun of her. She got into trouble more than other kids. People
got stuck into toilets. Kids came out of restrooms soaking we from facets exploding
all over them. She was never around, but she still got into trouble.

These haunting thoughts linger as she laid there awake in the darkness. She has a
new home a new life. She learned to forget most of her awful days from her past.
Sometimes they reappear. She gently falls back to sleep. Her old life is over, but she
will kill Ursla for killing her adoptive parents.


This memories of people came back to her when she met her Aunt.


message 6: by Bree (new)

Bree So a demigoddess and a vampire fall in love?... I can't say that I've seen that one before.


message 8: by Bree (last edited Feb 26, 2014 02:41PM) (new)

Bree ||▣|Full Name|▣|| Alucard Roman Black
|▫Nickname▫|Al

||▣|Age|▣|| 116 ( He has the appearance of a sixteen year old )
||▣|Date of Birth|▣|| January 3rd, 1898
|▫Place of Birth▫|Unknown
|▫Species▫| Half Vampire- Half Human

||▣|Gender|▣|| Male
|▫Sexuality▫|Heterosexual
|▫Relationship Status▫| Single

||▣|Appearance|▣||


|▫Hair▫|Brown
|▫Eyes▫|Brown
|▫Weight▫|145
|▫Height▫|6’2
|▫Face Details▫| None
|▫Body Type▫| Slender
|▫Blood Type▫| O Negative
|▫Distinguished Markings (If any)▫|

||▣|Backstory|▣|| Al has no prior knowledge of his family, or how he was conceived. He knows that he is part vampire, and part human. What he doesn’t know, is this: his mother was a prostitute in Boston. One night, she encountered a mysterious man who was unlike any other man that she had been before. He was otherworldly, even. He had only recently been made a vampire, and since he had a lack of control for his thirst for blood, he didn’t hesitate or think twice about pulling Al’s mother into an alley. He raped her, and fed from her neck while she screamed in pain and in pleasure. No one thought to look twice or get help when they saw a man having intercourse with a prostitute publically. If anything, they pretended that they saw nothing since this display was indecent. The vampire left the prostitute in the alley, with the endophorins of his bite still coursing through her veins. She was star struck from what had happened..she couldn’t have possibly known what was going to happen to her. Several months later, she discovered that she was pregnant with a child. When she went into labor, the baby torn itself from her stomach after he drank her dry. When the baby opened its eyes, they were blood red.

||▣|Family|▣||
Elizabeth Anne McGregor- ( Mother: deceased )
Richard Thomas Black- ( Father: unknown )

|▫Weaknesses▫|
Blood
Being expressive of his emotions
Holding back his tongue
Keeping his thoughts to himself
Not using his vampire abilities

|▫Strengths▫|
Immortality
Enhanced Agility
Enhanced Combat
Enhanced Durability
Enhanced Endurance
Enhanced Senses
Night Vision
Enhanced Speed
Enhanced Strength
Regenerative Healing Factor


||▣|Other|▣|| I haven’t made a vampire character in a while.


message 9: by Bree (new)

Bree (( I added his appearance. ))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Nice


message 11: by Bree (new)

Bree Ladies first with starting us off.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok. :)
How detail are you?


message 13: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Mar 06, 2014 06:08AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Never mind about the detail))

She hated this. People giving her stares. She hated it. She was just like everyone else. Why couldn't things be the way before she became a goddess. She is on a mission to save the world. This doesn't sound fun at all. She is suppose to find a one true love here on the football team. Yeah she would rather date a rat then one of these football jocks. She sat and watch their practice. She appeared to be a human. Which was good and bad. Depends what magical beings your dealing with. She wasn't afraid of much. She some of the players got distracted by her. She just sat there and smiled. She gave up here. No matter what her aunt said about her one true love being here she couldn't since it. All of these people were human. Or at least she thought.

She saw something out of a corner of her eye. Not another one. There is a large bounty on here head. So monsters come out after every so often. She got up and flashed a smile to the football players. She got out and flashed into a leather suit. She took out her sword. She is excellent at using it. She didn't think the humans would notice and all with the mist.

The creature hissed at her. She took a fireball at it. She prayed there was no one who could see all this. She would have some serious explaining to do. Like she needed that. She killed a creature. Soon after a few more appeared. She need help. She couldn't call anyone. She went back to the bleachers and watch. The monsters followed.

She froze time. The magical beings or humans with sight would be able to remain as is. She didn't think any would be there. She threw another fireball without thinking. She didn't bother to look to see if any still stood.


message 14: by Bree (new)

Bree (( I can match whatever kind of detail you'd like. ))

"Alright guys! Hustle! Hustle! Get those feet moving and those legs burning cuz we're not leaving this field until you boys can get this play down!" Coach Depue yelled from the sideline of the Tri-City High football field. All the guys on the football team had a mutual agreement- Coach was annoying as hell, loud as hell, and mean as hell, but he always knew what he was doing. The team never usually liked what he had in mind, but coach's advise had brought them to sectionals last year. This year was going to be different. They were going to make it to the championship, and bring back gold to Tri-City.

Al jogged off of the field when the Coach pulled him off and put another player in his place. Al slipped his helmet off his head, then felt the cool breeze waft through his wet with sweat hair and help him relax. Coach gave Al a hard slap on his shoulder blade, which was his way of saying 'good job'. Al made his way over to the benches and picked up his water canteen from the metal seating. He brought his jug to his lips after flipping the cap open with his finger, then he took a long drink of water. True, water wasn't as important as blood, so to speak, but since he was only half vampire, he still had human needs.

When he brought his jug down, Al looked up to the bleachers where the fans usually sat and he saw the familiar face of Clytie. He'd seen her around campus a lot, and he'd always thought that she was attractive. Yeah, a lot of the girls at Tri-City High were attractive, but they seemed to look the same and have the same qualities. Clytie was a bit different.

Being a vampire, or half vampire, Al was used to different.

Time began to slow down as Al watched an inhuman and ugly ass looking creature come to Clytie. Al was ready to drop his canteen, and sprint over to her to protect her from it, but much to his surprise, he witnessed Clytie kill the creature with not only a sword, ( girls with weapons are pretty hot in his mind ), but with fire that she had literally created from her hands.

"This is new.." Al thought to himself when he felt his lips form a smirk.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She killed the creature with ease. She laughed. The sword disappear from her hands. She smiled. She turned around to see Al standing there. So her first idea on mine he was another monster. Or he just saw everything she just did. "You didn't see anything." Making sure she used the most powerful charmspeak she had. She unfroze time and went back inside to go to practice. She was safe.

When she got to the band room. Something kept bothering her with great length. Something was off. She didn't know how much he saw. She hoped he forgotten. Well he would if there wasn't another monster. She rolled her eyes. She froze time again. She blinked to the football field to see a hydra. "What's with all the monsters." She shouted.


message 16: by Bree (new)

Bree Even though Al was on the football field, and Clytie was in the bleachers, he could hear her wind chime like laughter after she had succeeded in killing off the creature that had attacked her. It was a nice laugh, he thought to himself, and he felt the sudden urge to go up to her and meet her officially. They had seen each other in the hallway several times, and even shared some classes together, but they'd never really held a conversation.

Suddenly he heard her speak. Not only were her lips moving, her voice filled his ears and his mind. Her words rang through his ears like a gong, and he felt what he saw begin to be pried from his mind. "It's my memory to keep...Back the hell off," Al thought angrily then he felt Clytie's words vanish from his mind like the wind.

"Black! Get your ass back on the field!" Coach yelled interrupting Al's thoughts. He tore his gaze away from Clytie after giving her a wink then he jogged back onto the field and put his helmet back on his head. After several more trials and errors, and sprints and push-ups in between to motivate the team, the play was finally executed correctly. The team finally got to leave the field and hit the showers. After the showers and after getting dressed, Al realized that he left his backpack on the field somehow. Al jogged back up to the field, only to discover Clytie there, and yet another ugly ass looking creature was with her.

Al smirked at what she shouted to herself. "I was going to ask you the same thing," he yelled back to her from the sideline.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments First off she could do things on her own. She gave him a death glare. She wasn't going to pay any attention to him. Her charmspeak didn't work. That may her wonder. What he was. She summoned some fire and threw one at it. Really all she was doing right now was blowing of some steam. "I don't know what your talking about."

She felt something from him. He was a jerk. That's all he was. He wasn't her one true love. She wouldn't let that happened. She cursed to her aunt. Why him? Of all people in school him? She notice the Hydra got up.

She jumped up and tried stabbing it. It threw her to the ground and knocked her sword out of her hands. She summoned the sword. She teleported near its stomach and stabbed it in the heart. The ashes came down on her like snow. She collapsed to her knees. "I don't know why there is so much monsters." She was telling half of the truth.


message 18: by Bree (last edited Mar 13, 2014 03:22PM) (new)

Bree "So you're going to tell me that that thing that you just turned to ash wasn't there then and that I'm seeing things? Maybe you'll refer me to a mental institution, then sign a form explaining how insane I am for claiming that you create fire from your hands, and that you've been carrying a weapon on campus for God knows how long?" Al asked with a smirk. "I don't think so," he added then he walked over to the bench and picked up his backpack then slung it onto his shoulder and held onto its strap while he looked over at Clytie who was on her knees.

"My advice? Take a little break from the fighting, otherwise you're going to eventually lose since you have no energy," Al said then he walked away from her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She rolled her eyes and mumbled jerk. She was just a little weak. She would be more powerful if she kissed him. She shook that out of her mind. Her sword was gone. She got up weakly. The least he could of done was help her out. She walked over to the bench and unfroze time. Practice was over. She walked through the magic entrance to where she lived.

She threw her things on the ground. What was he? she didn't get enough time to pick up his energy. She slumped on the couch. She didn't need him or her one true love. She wasn't going to fall in love with him. She smirked at the thought of that.

She wonder if she should go to the back to school dance. After awhile she decided to go. She found a nice blue dress. That match her blue eyes. She slipped on a beautiful necklace made out of diamonds. Her blonde hair flow effortlessly. She looked like a brand new person.

She walked to the line to get in. She finally got in there. All eyes were on her. She rolled her eyes at that. She didn't want no one here. She had to find her one true love. She refused to think it would be Al.


message 20: by Bree (new)

Bree Al had returned back on campus after he had retrieved his backpack from the football field. While he continued on with the rest of his classes that day with several players from the football team meeting up with him to talk about who they were going to the dance with, Al's mind wandered frequently to Clytie. Now more than ever, he was beginning to really see her and think about her.

What was different now? Al was still the same half vampire that he was yesterday. School progressed as it normally did for Al, and afterward as he drove him in his car, he realized that he had no after school plans. "Well damn," he thought to himself as he pulled into his garage. Al lived alone since his parents were never around, considering that they were dead as far as he knew, so he was free to literally do whatever the hell he wanted. The school never questioned why his parents were never around since he had the power of compulsion over their weak minds.

Al finished off his homework that he was assigned that night, after adding in a few extra workouts while he watched a baseball game, he decided that he would go to the dance after he showered. He wasn't much of a suit kind of guy, so he decided to dress himself up with black dress pants, black shoes, and a button down collared black shirt. He didn't have a date or anything to go with him, so when he pulled up to the school to get in line, several of the single girls flocked over to him and batted their eyes while they hoped that he would ask one of them to go with them.

Why were humans so easily impressed by appearances? True, Al was like them, or at least, somewhat, but he never-- Al's train of thought was interrupted when he saw Clytie stand in line to get her ticket to the dance. She looked beautiful. His earlier words rang through his mind as he mentally cursed himself when he got in line with Clytie.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She turned around to see Al. She wasn't falling for him. She refused to except that. She wasn't going to fall in love with a jerk like him. She sighed and looked for her friends. Who wouldn't hang out with her because supposedly she was too cool for them. Wherever did they get that idea from. But yet she couldn't help from thinking about him.

She started dancing. With no one. Then the first slow song of the night came on. She went over to the seats to sit it out. All of her friends were dancing with someone. She sighed and rolled her eyes. She couldn't help but look for Al. Her eyes darted back and forth looking for him. She spotted him. She bit her lil from saying something.

She couldn't help but picture herself dance with him. She let a sigh out. She wanted to dance with him. She was beginning to like the idea of him and her. Her heart was started pumping. He was the one.


message 22: by Bree (new)

Bree When Clytie deliberately turned away from him after the two had made eye contact, he smirked. He bought his ticket into the dance, and was immediately greeted by his group of fellow football players who all had dates with them. They were like all the human girls that he had seen tonight. Their dresses were made to enlargen their breasts, their makeup was done in too great of an amount, and they had put on way too much perfume. Several of his friends joked around with Al that they were going to hook up him with a worthy hot and fine as hell chick. They didn't see that through when they all went to the dance floor as a group, and Al joined with them without a girl at his side.

The bass of the music being played made the floor under his feet shake, and the lights on the dance floor messed with Al's vision because of how bright and how wide in variety their colors were. Al had found that one human girl was very interest in Al because she had grabbed onto Al's hips and grinded herself along his lower body while the bass of the song rocked the house.

Once the slow song began, the girl he was with began to put her arms around Al, but Al had found Clytie standing by herself in one of the corners. Al removed the arms of the girl around him and made his way over to her. He soon stood before her, then realized that he could her heart beat at an abnormally fast rate. "Want to dance?" he asked her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She snapped out of her little vision. Dance with a the jerk she thought. No way would she. She could hear her aunt say that she was falling for him. She was. She nodded her head and smiled. Her hear that was racing was going haywire now. She wrapped her arms around his neck to dance to the slow song. She looked up in his eyes.

She batted her blue eyes and smiled. When she touched him. She felt so much power. She didn't feel weak. She could little tiny sparks fly all over her skin. She didn't know if he could feel it or not. She could and she liked it.

All of her pervious thoughts on how he was a jerk were gone. To her time to seemed to slow down while she was with him. The slow song was almost over. She knew that. She used some of her mind powers to get the soundtrack erased to all slow songs.

Most people didn't notice. She cursed herself for doing that. She didn't want to stop dancing with him though. She was acting like a little kid. She shouldn't worry. He was the one. She will end up with him some how,but she didn't want to wait.


message 24: by Bree (new)

Bree Al took hold of Clytie's hand and lead her onto the dance floor. He wrapped his arms around her waist, then pulled her close to him so her arms could rest comfortably on his shoulders while she held his neck. Their bodies gently swayed to the rhythm of the music. He couldn't take his eyes off of her. She was even more beautiful up close, and her smile seemed to shine even brighter than any of the lights at the dance.

Al wasn't sure how it was even possible, but he found himself wanting this girl even more now. That song that kept them together seemed to stretch out forever, and all the couples around him continued to dance together while all the single people stood awkwardly on the side. He didn't mind this at all. Al would've loved to have spent an eternity dancing with Clytie to this song, or any song really.

One of his hands that was holding her waist lifted up and caressed her soft cheek. He just needed to remind himself that she was really here, and that she was really dancing with him.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was so happy. She found him. She wonder if he was feeling something too. When his hand touched her face. She felt the fire crawl up. She couldn't help but smile. She felt like she need him. She wanted to say something,but she forgot everything. She forgot everything but him. Then a problem came up in her head.

What if he thinks she would be using him to get more power? He would think that right. she would ruin everything they have a chance becoming. Though now that she found him monsters would be coming around more often. She should tell him.

She couldn't find the words to say. She didn't want to say anything. She lean her head on his chest. She smiled. She felt like everything was perfect. This was a dream. She could do this and will get to do this forever with him. She hope he will know something about soul mates.


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