Beta Readers needed for first part to a Short Story

[Madison]

I've done novel work but am currently working on a short story. I need some beta readers to review the first part and give me pointers I can use for the rest. Feel free to tear it apart, I want to grow! It is fiction suspense!

[Zach]

I'm doing something similar and would be happy to beta for you. I'd appreciate a swap but if you're busy and don't have time to read I understand and I'm still happy to read for you.

My email is ssgttyo@gmail.com

Zach

[Madison]

Zach wrote: "I'm doing something similar and would be happy to beta for you. I'd appreciate a swap but if you're busy and don't have time to read I understand and I'm still happy to read for you.

My email is s..."
Thank you Zach! I emailed it and I would be happy to do a swap.
Madison

[Melissa]

I'll read it, but if it is gripping, promise I get to read the end??

[Steve]

what genre is your story

[Madison]

Melissa wrote: "I'll read it, but if it is gripping, promise I get to read the end??"

Of course Melissa! What is your email and I'll send it!

[Madison]

Steve wrote: "what genre is your story"

Suspense!

[Steve]

i would be interested but i haven't got anything to share. send your info to pandaproof47@gmail.com

[Melissa]

Sure, melissapikul@hotmail.com. Can't wait.

[Madison]

Hello all, thank you so much for beta reading for me! I have more written that I would love for y'all to read if you can! Again, thank you so much, it was all very helpful! Let me know if you would like me to email you the entirety of part one.