Tessa
Description: " Regret was for people with nothing to defend, people who had no water.
Lynn knows every threat to her pond: drought, a snowless winter, coyotes, and, most importantly, people looking for a drink. She makes sure anyone who comes near the pond leaves thirsty, or doesn't leave at all.
Confident in her own abilities, Lynn has no use for the world beyond the nearby fields and forest. Having a life means dedicating it to survival, and the constant work of gathering wood and water. Having a pond requires the fortitude to protect it, something Mother taught her well during their quiet hours on the rooftop, rifles in hand.
But wisps of smoke on the horizon mean one thing: strangers. The mysterious footprints by the pond, nighttime threats, and gunshots make it all too clear Lynn has exactly what they want, and they won’t stop until they get it….
With evocative, spare language and incredible drama, danger, and romance, debut author Mindy McGinnis depicts one girl’s journey in a barren world not so different than our own."
Me and Nicolas will be reading this book soon, fell free to join us :) .
Tessa
I started reading this a little earlier. Was in search for a good book and since this one was really praised. Chapter 1-8 (view spoiler)[So far it's a good survival book. I would like to know more about the reason why water is so scarce. I liked her mother, she was a fighter. I'm sorry she got killed so soon in the book. Curious what Lynn will do next. (hide spoiler)]
Nicolas Fernandez
I read the first three chapters last night--I was really tired--and, so far, I've loved it. It's really fast-paced and easy and interesting to read. But I'll read more today, and I will talk more specific about it.
Tessa
Face-peaced? Yeah, you could say that. To me it feels a little fast and disconnected because it concentrates on the action and how Lynn should survive, but not that much on the world building. Maybe it's just me, but I'm a little disappointed... and a little bored. I'll put this aside for now and wait for you to catch up. I'm at ch 10 now :) .
TessaSarah wrote: "Chapter 2 [spoilers removed]" Yeah, her mother was a wierd cookie. Kinda harden by the life she had to lead in order to protect her daughter.
TessaAbbie wrote: "Chapter 9 - [spoilers removed]" Yeah. Prepare for a character driven story. This doesn't have much of the world building material, but the characters were enjoyable. :)
This turned out to be pretty predictable. Chapter 16: (view spoiler)[I just have a feeling her father is among the bad guys who are coming for them... (hide spoiler)]
Nicolas Fernandez
I'm in chapter 13 now. Okay, I like the story and characters, but sometimes I hate Lynn's attitude, though I know that what she does, she does it to protect herself and others.
Tessa
I'm done with this and I must admit I'm quite disappointed :( . (view spoiler)[Reasons why I didn't like this book: - We find nothing about why there is no water left. - For a place with short supply of water they sure manage to have ponds, wells and even a river. I don't know, but to me it seems that they were fighting because they were misinformed. They knew water might become scarce in the time to come so they went all caveman on their water supply and refused to share it with anyone. - For a world with so little supply, they sure had a lot of bullets... - No climax to this story, yet so many die. Just like that, you die, because we need a dramatic scene, but the death itself was so fast and descriptive that I had to blink a little before it registered what just happened. - I said this is a character based story. Scratch that. This is a survival story and nothing else. The sacrifices and kills you must make in order to be the strongest caveman of them all. I'm not against survival stories, but if they have no proper world building and undeveloped characters it can become a boring read quite fast. - this was boring, even if all the above would have not prickle me like a needle under my nails I would have still find this story boring. (hide spoiler)]
In short: ["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>
Sarah Elizabeth
Chapter 15 (view spoiler)[ what do they use for a toilet? I don't remember them saying, and if they stay in the basement for days? I'm wondering. (hide spoiler)]
Sophie
I'm 26% in and so far I am not really feeling this. (view spoiler)[ But they just met a guy so hopefully it gets better and picks up a bit since so far it's just the day-to-day basic survival stuff. I also wish there was more world building, more of SOMETHING. I would not mind the lack of a world-building if the characters were more interesting but so far they're kinda bland. (hide spoiler)]
Tessa
"it's just the day-to-day basic survival stuff." If you're expecting more, you'll just be disappointed. This is just a survival story, nothing else.
Sophie
I get that, but I guess I was still expecting a bit more than (view spoiler)[ "let's shoot the coyotes! Let's gather the water!" (hide spoiler)]
TessaSarah wrote: "Chapter 19 [spoilers removed]" I was totally expecting that, ever since (view spoiler)[ Stebbs told her he left them for glory. I was sure he will be back as the main bad guy. He was far less entertaining than I was hoping him to be. (hide spoiler)]
@Sophie: it's going to be a little more than that, some new characters will apear and she's going to open up a little, but not by much and the story will remained concentrated on daily tasks rather than world building or character development.
Sarah Elizabeth
I think that's a real issue with this book - the world building. We're not really told why there's this water shortage, and its not exciting as the blurb makes it sound. I think if we had more world building and more information this would be much better, but there are just these huge gaps and its annoying.
Tessa
Yup, like I said in the spoiler after finishing this book: "For a place with short supply of water they sure manage to have ponds, wells and even a river. I don't know, but to me it seems that they were fighting because they were misinformed. They knew water might become scarce in the time to come so they went all caveman on their water supply and refused to share it with anyone."
Sarah Elizabeth
yeah, its certainly lacking in world building.
the end (view spoiler)[ I'm sad that Eli died! their plan was a little lacking though. how does lynn sleep after shooting all these people? i mean she shot her own father through the head. is she a robot? (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[ I was wondering that too. It must have only been the mother that got it up there if they moved it while Lynn was young. Would have been hard! (hide spoiler)]
Sarah Elizabeth
pretty darn impossible if you ask me. even if she set up a pully system or something - those things weigh a tonne! what sort of flooring have they got in the attic if it can bear the weight of a piano?!
TessaSarah wrote: "yeah, its certainly lacking in world building.
the end [spoilers removed]"
If you take a closer look at the story this book ends the same way it starts. At the beginning we have Lynn and her mother sitting atop the house protecting the pond and in the end (view spoiler)[we have Lucy and Lynn (now adoptive mother) sitting atop the house protecting the pond. She even claims to have never let another living male soul into her house, after what happened with Eli. She's back to being exactly like her mother: distrustful, wild and pretty crazy and she's teaching Lucy the same thing her mother thought her. So, in the end this story had no meaning, because the only thing Lynn accomplished was to end up exactly like her mother. (hide spoiler)]
TessaAbbie wrote: "I'm really interested to read book two now, because i just read the blurb and it's about Lucy!"
I'm not. Was bored to death by this author. I'm pretty sure it will be the same regardless of the character who's telling the story. I hope you do enjoy it :). This is just... not for me.