beta Reader needed for 1st chapter

[Kevin]

Posted before, but wasn't very specific. Looking for a beta reader for the first chapter of my novel FALLEN.

here's the blurb:

Samael and Rael are brothers, who just happen to be Angels. Bitter ones. After their wandering eyes causes them to realize their own purposeless existence, their criticism of humanity forces them out of heaven where they fall into the streets of New Orleans. Abandoned in a city where the line between good and evil is unclear, Sam and Ray acquire very human qualities as well as the look, one having darker skin and the other being fair.

In their search for answers, they become self-appointed guardians over two Black kids. Street performers named Simon and Andrew. In their search for fulfillment, the brothers find love. Unfortunately for them, it is in the same woman, Eden, who has some hidden secrets of her own. Ray’s unrequited love and Sam’s blossoming relationship creates a volatile situation between them. With Sam and Ray’s energy and attention displaced, Simon and Andrew are abducted. The two children stand face to face with death, but their survival must come at a great cost to the fate of Samael and Rael.

Cheers

[Phyllis A.]

I'll help you out. Send your chapter to almondbranch@msn.com. Put your title/name in the subject box

[Steve]

need of a second reader count me in. I would be a great asset for I can provide proofreading as well as beta reading. send info to pandaproof47@gmail.com