Beta Reader for a Novel

[Kris]

I'm looking to try my hand at beta-reading novels, rather than the shorter works I've done in the past. I'm not too picky about genre; the only exception is that I am not interested in erotica. I prefer to work in PDF format so I can make use of the highlight and note tools in Adobe Reader, among other advantages.

If you're interested, post here or message me privately. Please include a brief synopsis of your story and anything specific you want me to address with your request.

[Nathan]

Sent you a messge.

[Annette]

Kris, what is your email address, so that I can email you?

[Kris]

I've found a novel to beta read and will be busy with that for the time being. Thank you, everyone who showed interest!

[Merethe]

Hi Kris,

I have a soft sci-fi novel about a twenty-three-year-old woman smuggler trying to do one last job for a friend after a stint in prison so she can 'retire' to Earth. Things get off to a bumpy start when she runs into her ex-boyfriend--who was arrested with her--suddenly working as an Inspector, the 'spooks' of outer space. Soon, she finds herself in hot water and missing the item she's supposed to deliver to the buyer for her pay off, and she will stop at nothing to get it back, even if it means working with a man she can't trust, for a 'friend' who might have set her up to begin with.
It is approximately 113k words, features adult content (but nothing erotic), and some adult language. It is the first in a series.

Please let me know if you're interested! I appreciate your time, regardless.

Thanks!

[Ryan]

Kris,

My completed novel, Supernaturals - The Rising, a YA piece with some light sci-fi, could use some extra eyes. If you like Percy Jackson, X-men, or superheroes of any kind and works of similar nature/style, I believe you'll enjoy this book.

Here's a quick summary...

Ethan is just an ordinary teenage boy—infatuated with sports music and, of course, girls. Or so he thinks. Heading home on a rainy night from an amateur guitar gig, he finds his life turned completely upside down—literally. His car spins and flips out of control after what he believes to be a small animal jumps out in front of him. The horrific accident is only the beginning of a series of mysterious and seemingly unrelated events that will change his life forever.

After awaking in the hospital, and following an encounter with an enigmatic doctor, Ethan discovers that something that occurred during the wreck allows him to hear others' thoughts, and even more perplexing, move objects with his mind. While trying to wrap his head around this mystery, he realizes he’s not the only one, that there are others out there like him; those with special powers. Not long after learning of this new world, Ethan’s ever increasing lack of control places those around him at serious risk. In order to protect those he loves, he makes the difficult decision to leave and join with a group of other so called Supernaturals to learn how to master his abilities. Shortly after he is recruited, Ethan is sent on a mission to kidnap who he believes to be the enemy leader in a well concealed Supernaturals war. But the further he becomes embedded in this new world, the more he discovers things are not quite what they seem and doesn't know who can be trusted.

In this first installment of the Supernaturals series, Ethan discovers that super powers aren’t always so super, and is faced with difficult decisions that will not only affect his own life, but which may determine the life or death of his newfound companions and mentor.

Let me know if you'd be interested.

[Alexia]

Hi Kris!

I have a full-length 88k Sci-Fi, Fantasy novel

Here's a blurb/overview:

A natural gift for reading? Of course! A means of induction into a millennia-old society of thinker-readers? Lealla Holliday never would have guessed...
The year twenty thirty-three is part of the beginning of the end of independent thought. Thanks to a covert organization seeking to monopolize introspection and reflective thinking, people are beginning to read less and follow the status quo more. Their aim? To eliminate all materials that get minds working productively. All of this is destined to be challenged when Lealla Holliday ventures into the new Library in town. She learns that she is needed alongside other avid readers that are specially-equipped to use their literacy to create a tangible field of energy that can power a vast network. But is she willing to do die for it?

Brutal publishing world-quality feedback doesn't scare me. In fact, it fuels me!
- solid plot/presentation?
- characters real and three-dimensional?
- characters relatable?
- any holes in plot?
- anything about story that falls flat/is anti-climactic?
- layout? What to leave out/put in for querying process?

So far I have made 2 rounds of edits, but recognize the value of connecting with brilliant people.

Would you be willing to give it a go? Let's collaborate!
I can be reached at alexiaantoine@hotmail.com.

[T.C.]

Hello,

I'm trying to find a few beta readers to read my novel and provide feedback so I can proceed with a thorough revision. The book was originally published last year and has hit three Amazon best seller lists. It has had a profession edit so hopefull it won't be too rough to read. It is a young adult paranormal fantasy with a touch of romance. The manuscript is roughly 85,000 words.

Regards,

TC Michael
Here's the link to see it on Goodreads.
Secret of the Last Born