Book Idea and Grammar Editor

[Maria]

Hello! So I really want to write this story and I already have this amazing idea on it but don't have it thought out completely.

Basic idea is there is a small town isolated in the middle of no where everything was good until one day girls started disappearing. No one knows why or what is happening. Basically this girl tries to figure out what is going one.
Another important detail is. This town there is not much there but there is a mountain deep in a forest and people said that if you were able to make it up you could get 3 wishes and that this place was the center of magic and so he laws of magic didn't apply


That is only a bit of the story idea as I do not want to give away too much.

Also if anyone would like to edit my writing and check to errors in grammar that would also be very helpful to have a second pair of eyes checking over.

If you would like to help please email me at
peterpan.mgla@gmail.com

Thank You

[Nathan]

I would love to work with you on this. I love these kinds of stories. I'd be willing to help you with editing and grammar. I generally do a trade. I look over your stuff and you look over mine. Email me if you are interested nathanielkdoyle86@gmail.com

[Adnan]

nice plot.

[Feliks]

Not really a 'story', because its inherently too unrealistic. More like a throwback to a 'fable' type of tale; except set in the modern-day. A lot of people play with this kind of thing lately thanks to the bombardment of fantasy-type premises apparent everywhere in movies & media; the ominous tie-ins between computer gaming and movies; etc.

[Tammy]

There is a lot of things that people would not consider a story, and yet it has been made into a book. I say do whatever you feel is right in your heart.

[Michael]

Hey all,

I have three book ideas and I would like everyone's opinion on the best titles for each. See the below. If they are all crud then feel free to let me know! Thanks!

Idea 1: Relationship Advice for Men Book (Tim Ferriss’ Four Hour Work Week but for Relationships)

1. The Five Hour Relationship: 33 Hacks to Live the Relationship of Your Dreams With the Woman of Your Dreams

2. The Five Hour Love Affair: Five Relationship Hacks to Live the Relationship of Your Dreams with the Woman of Your Dreams

3. Five Principles for Living the Life of Your Dreams With the Woman of Your Dreams

4. The Greatest Mate: 33 Hacks to Optimize Your Relationship

5. The Greatest Mate: Five Principles to Achieve the Greatest You and the Greatest We

6. The Best Man: How to Optimize Your Time With the Woman of Your Dreams to Live the Relationship of Your Dreams

Idea 2: Fiction Crime Thriller Vigilante Justice (Former Prosecutor Goes After the Killers who went free to kill again)

1. The Devil’s Justice: When Bad Men Go Free Someone Must Pay

2. No Justice for Killers

3. The Prosecutor

4. Judge, Jury, and Executioner

5. The Burning Sword of Justice
6. The Flaming Sword of Justice
7. The Bloody Sword of Justice

8. Evil Never Stands Trial

9. The Devil on the Stand
10. Extreme Justice
11. Extreme Prejudice

Idea 3: Hiking Book Series - Stories of Personal Growth on the Hiking trails (Book 1: Camino de Santiago)

1. Lost and Found on the Camino de Santiago: A Story of Faith and Forgiveness on the Path

2. Lost Days: Hiking el Camino de Santiago

3. A Walk of Faith: Stories from Camino de Santiago

4. A Wild Life
5. A Wandering Life

6. The Vagabond’s Path
7. Slow and Steady: Hiking the Camino de Santiago