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message 1: by S.L. (last edited Oct 04, 2015 10:58AM) (new)

S.L. (sabby34) I'm looking for a final beta read for the final draft of the book. Looking to find any missed errors and overall flow of the story before putting to print.

*Avery Snow the Medium*

Avery is a witch with clairvoyant powers. Since she was a child, she had always wanted to help people and with her abilities she now can. In the series Avery goes through supernatural situations that every day peope turn a blind eye to. Afer losing her last living relaiveS, she moves to a small town in Massachusettes called Belladonna Acres. in hopes for a fresh start. What Avery doesn't know is that Belladonna Acres is not just some ordinarty place. It has its magical elements . Soon she learns her ablities as a clairvoyant, among other powers, will come in handy more than ever before.

Book is 33,000 words long and is part of a series.
novella size book. first in the series.
format will be in pdf

Sabrina


message 2: by Michael (new)

Michael Mardel (michaelpmardel) | 181 comments PDF
michaelmardel98@gmail.com
thanks


message 3: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) awesome thx I will email it in the morning


message 4: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (goodgramie) | 64 comments I would love to read and review your book.goodgramie@yahoo.com


message 5: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) check ur emails I sent the file


message 6: by Michael (new)

Michael Mardel (michaelpmardel) | 181 comments received thanks


message 7: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) awesome can't wait to hear your feedback


message 8: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) Hey everyone

I have done a second draft after a few beta reads and am looking for readers again to see how the story is now.


message 9: by Michael (new)

Michael Mardel (michaelpmardel) | 181 comments if you want someone who has read it before, I can do it again.
michaelmardel98@gmail.com


message 10: by Alison (new)

Alison Brodie (alison_brodie) | 37 comments Sorry. I would love to be your beta reader (your story sounds really great!) but I'm up to my ears in promoting my debut. But, remember me for your next novel. I would love to get involved.


message 11: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) Alison wrote: "Sorry. I would love to be your beta reader (your story sounds really great!) but I'm up to my ears in promoting my debut. But, remember me for your next novel. I would love to get involved."


Ok sounds great thanks Alison :)


message 12: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) If anyone is interested in the final draft whether you have read it already or have not read it yet is fine. Looking to catch any remaining errors and over all flow of the story.


message 13: by Sandy (new)

Sandy (goodgramie) | 64 comments I will help you out.goodgramie@yahoo.com PFD


message 14: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) thanks Sandy


message 15: by S.L. (new)

S.L. (sabby34) Looking for reviews for book 2 for anyone who read book 1 already. i need 2 3-4 line reviews for fist page of the book


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