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message 251: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Wait what? Was she at home or school?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((She was at home heading to school))


message 253: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach came up by her again then, looking as if he;d come in the direction of his house. He was thinking about skipping school today, taking Tess with him. with the full moon tonight....who knew what would happen. Seeing the cheerleaders he glared in their direction. "Go on. Leave her alone."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Zach I'm losing control really easily today. I feel like I can snap someone's head off." She said turning around slowly.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Hey why don't we head out to the woods. Forget school. The woods might calm you down a bit. they do me." He wrapped his arms protectively around her. "I won't let anything happen tonight."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him and nodded. Her eyes were a still a bright blue. Then as they got to the woods the hunter. "Hi wolf boy." He said looking at Zach.
"Go away or I will snap your neck off."
"First change tonight?"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He growled when he saw the hunter, this close to the full moon his eyes also flashed to their wolves. "Get out of here." He snarled. "I'll make sure she doesn't hurt anyone tonight. Just get out of here and leave us alone."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him. The hunter left. "You should of let me snap his head off." She snarled. She smelt a little bunny. It smelled so good. Meat. She licked her lips. She could taste it in her mouth.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He sighed as the hunter disappeared once again. "Look. I'd like him dead as much as you, but tonight's the full moon. There will be more hunters out than normal. I know ways of avoiding most of them, but if one ends up dead tonight they won't stop chasing us until they kill us."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She smelt the rabbit. She nodded slowly she wanted it. "I'm starving," she said looking at the rabbit.


message 261: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He frowned a bit. "Can you shift yet?" He asked her. Just concentrate on being a wolf. I'll help youbthrough it. The first few times will be painful remember, but it gets easier."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head. She thought about being a wolf. She let her wolf come out. It needed out. She wanted to scream. She started to scream. "It hurts" she rolled over curling into a ball.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He stayed human at first, shifting a bit at a time like she was. He put a hand on her shoulder at first, encouraging her. He still felt guility about thia. That it was his fault she was like this now.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her screaming turned into yowls which turned into howls. She felt her body shift. She had a white coat she saw the rabbit. She slowly stalked and pounced on but it got away.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach chased it, catching it before it got far from either of them and brought it back over to her . 'Ot takes practice but You'll get it."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She ate the rabbit nodding her head. She smelt a hiker. It smelt good. She followed the scent.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Before they could et too close he cut in front ofbrhe, giving a small, warning growl. ' No Tess. We can't go after humans.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at Zach and growled at him.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "No Tess." He repeated firmly. He knew a lot of werewolves lost control the first time. that's one things packs did. they made sure no one gt hurt the first time a new wolf shifted. He was going to let her hurt anyone. not like he had.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was confused on a lot of things. She knew the other wolf was Zach. She went near him and rubbed her head on his fur. She was trying not to lose control. She wanted to snap someone's head off.


message 271: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) It'll be alright. He assured her. You'll get the hang of this. Now come on, let's get away from the humans.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments But I'm fineShe wasn't to sure of herself. She wanted to go over there and snap the humans head off. It seemed so easy to do. She wanted to do it. She wanted to let the wolf out that she had held in for what seemed like forever.


message 273: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) No your not. He told her. Tess please, snap out of it. Get control of yourself. Let's go. I know a place humans rarely go to.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Yes i am.She watched the human came closer. She growled at him.


message 275: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Tess. Snap out of it. He let out a growl of his own, hoping that might get her to back down. If nothing else worked he might have to pin her down until the humans were gone.


message 276: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Mar 26, 2014 08:00AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him and growled again. She looked at the human as it walked away. I want to go after him


message 277: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Can we change that maybe? I think Zach would have definitely done something to stop her before she could attack the human. And would it really come that close to two wolves anyway? I mean wouldn't a person try to avoid the animals?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah we can change that. Sorry my friend post that.))


message 279: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) (Okay. Just tell me when it's edited :) And sorry I've been gone a lot lately.))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Just edit it))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((If I'm slow or it's too short I sprained my wrist.))


message 282: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((yikes! How'd you do that?))


Tess! He growled a bit, snap out of it. We need to get you away from these humans. Come on. He gave her a bit of a nudge in the other direction.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Funny story really funny well I kinda did if during bad mitten))

She wanted to go after the human. The human though I want to chase it and then I want to play with it for a while and after I'm done I'll kill it She growled.


message 284: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((A couple years ago on the last day of gym I got hit in the head with a badminton racket! ))



No! He growled, more forcibly this time. We don't attack humans. That only gives the hunters more reason to hunt us down and kill us. Seeing no other option at the moment he moved to pin her down, hoping to hold her there until the humans were farther away.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Ouch I almost hit someone with the bride turns out I swing to hard))

She was pinned down. She started to whimper some. Please get off of me She couldn't move. They are getting away


message 286: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((I'm just really bad at sports.))


I know Tess...I can't let you hurt them though. You'd feel and about it tomorrow, trust me I know.....


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Depends volleyball ,softball,soccer and marching band are what I do. I guess I hit people with the volleyball too much))

Please let me goShe whimpered. She was confused about everything. She wanted to get free.


message 288: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((I just don't like sports at all really.))


Not until the humans are gone. He told her, then a little more gently. You'll thank me for this later.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I do hate football. I hit sitting watching the games when the only thing I know is a touchdown. Then basketball I don't like and other sports too. I'm a klutz so I either injure me or someone else int the process))

She looked at him. She didn't say anything. She heard kids. She heard her little brother. Her ears perked up.


message 290: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Tess no. He growled, pushing her a bit harder down, to discourage her from trying to get up and go after the kids.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments My brother. She growled. She was angry. They were picking on him.


message 292: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) I can't risk letting you up yet Tess. If you go over there you could lose control and end up hurting him. is that what you want?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She growled at him.


message 294: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Tess....I know you want to help your brother, but it's too dangerous until you learn control. Trust me. I hurt people the first ime I shifted because I didn't have anyone there to stop me...


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She whimpered again. She wanted to get up from his grip.


message 296: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) I'll let you go when they're gone. I just don't want you making the mistakes I did.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head. They were soon gone.


message 298: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) As soon as the scent faded he got off of her. I'm sorry but I had to. once you gain more control you'll be fine.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head. She saw a butterfly. She tried jumping on it but missed. She was wagging her tail and jumped up again and missed.


message 300: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((What should happen now? sorry but I'm getting a bit bored with this.))


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