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February 2014- A Moveable Feast by Ernest Hemingway

Published posthumously in 1964, and edited from his manuscripts and notes by his widow and fourth wife, Mary Hemingway, and then revised by his grandson Seán Hemingway, A Moveable Feast is a memoir by Ernest Hemingway about his years in Paris as part of a group of expatriate writers in the 1920s. The book includes references to, or meetings with, Gertrude Stein, Ford Madox Ford, Aleister Crowley, Ezra Pound, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Sylvia Beach, James Joyce amongst others, and details of how his first marriage deteriorated.
I found it interesting to read through the previous BYT debate which Jennifer links to above and which pretty much sums up my own feelings. I was completely underwhelmed by this book.
What really baffles me about this book, and what I hope we might explore in this discussion, is what it is about this book that so many people like. It's got an average rating of 4.03 on GoodReads - 71% of GR readers gave it 4 stars or 5 stars. I've been alive long enough to know there's no accounting for taste however, in this instance, I am really interested to find out what it is people who do like this book actually like about it.
Seems to me that if you are interested in the names and locations of bars, cafés and hotels in Paris, and the locations where Ernest Hemingway's friends and acquaintances lived, along with plenty of inconsequential dialogue and tedious detail then you're in luck. You will probably find much to love in this book - and, as I state, plenty of readers appear to find this content very agreeable.
To me, it read like a rather boring diary of someone who got progressively more tedious and objectionable the more I read. Was Ernest Hemingway really a crashing bore? Was he generally mean spirited about people who seem to regard him as a friend? I don't really care, however this is the strong impression I came away with having read this memoir.
I have only read one other book by Ernest Hemingway - "For Whom the Bell Tolls". It was much better that this. Much better. That's not to say it was wonderful but it was interesting and compelling and well worth reading if you are interested in The Spanish Civil War.
I will also be reading A Farewell to Arms as part of our BYT WW1 challenge and, despite this book, am looking forward to reading it. I suspect Ernest Hemingway is better in a more action orientated context.
A Moveable Feast, is really just very dull, unless you happen to be interested in the minutiae of Ernest Hemingway's day-to-day life in Paris in the 1920s.
There's a fascinating book to be written about this era in Paris - this is not it. For hardcore fans only.
2/5
I look forward to reading what the rest of you think about this book. Here's to an interesting discussion.

The library has a copy and I have reserved it, so I will be reading it again, but I am looking forward to reading A Farewell to Arms for the third time more than I am this one.

I loved the two pieces so far about Gertrude Stein, which give a rounded picture of her with many contradictions and really bring her alive. I also like his memories of being a hungry young writer, and the eagerness to win at the racetrack - I've read a short story of his called 'My Old Man', which he mentions in here, which is set in this world and it was also filmed as 'Under My Skin', starring John Garfield.
It's interesting to read the book straight after 'A Farewell to Arms', because this all happened only a few years after Hemingway had been through the war. He says he was offended when Stein said he and the other veterans were a lost generation, feeling it was an easy generalisation, but he must of course have been carrying the damage, just like Robert Graves in 'Goodbye to All That' which I've also just read.
I'm reading the restored edition and found it interesting to read the introduction by Hemingway's grandson, Sean Hemingway, which tells how Hemingway came to write it in the late 1950s after collecting two small trunks that he had left stored in Paris for almost 30 years, and discovering his old papers and memorabilia in them. He was depressed and in poor health and you can see this at times, in the melancholy tone and contrasts between his "then" and "now" - for instance at the end of Chapter 8, 'Hunger was Good Discipline', where he writes: "All I must do now was stay sound and good in my head until morning when I would start to work again. In those days we never thought that any of that could be difficult." This is surely Hemingway thinking about his present, where he was ill and finding it increasingly difficult to write.

I am looking forward to reading A Farewell to Arms sometime soon.
I also thought about Woody Allen's "Midnight In Paris" when I read this book. A very enjoyable film and I thought the depiction of Hemingway was just how I imagined him.
Gertrude Stein does indeed come out of it as a figure who I'd like to find out more about - I don't really understand why he ditches her and assume he was repelled by her sexuality.
I think Hemingway is quite unnecessary mean about Ford Madox Ford, and probably jealous of F. Scott Fitzgerald.
Anyway good to know you like it so far. I wish I could have summoned up the same level of enthusiasm.

I think I gave it 3★. I found most of the writing enjoyable but had certain problems with him bad mouthing just about every body he knew. But the joy is in the writing. It is gossipy.

I've also now read the piece about Ford Madox Ford, which is unkind, as you say, Nigeyb, though the physical description does sound very like the way Ford portrays the character based on himself in 'Parade's End'. Anyway I'm still enjoying the book, but am now getting on to some of the more spiteful gossip - I'm reading fast despite my intentions not to!



I share your distaste for the "bad mouthing".
"the joy is in the writing" - not for me. I found the writing bland and unexceptional. Almost like he was trying to be matter of fact & trying not to provide information on the sights, smells, and atmosphere of 20s Paris .
"It is gossipy" - yeees, but in a disparaging, slightly nasty way.

Would you recommend 'Parade's End'? How does it relate to Hemingway's observations about Ford Madox Ford?

He is not a modernist writer, he is wordier than Hemingway or Fitzgerald. I think you could see him as a transition between the wordy nineteenth and early twentieth century writers and the more concise post WWl writers.

Ford describes the hero, Christopher Tietjens, who is based on himself, as heavily overweight, wheezing and unfit, pretty much in line with Hemingway's observations, and he also seems obsessed with the question of who should be seen as a gentleman, as in the conversation with Hemingway in 'A Moveable Feast'.



I look forward to your thoughts Judy on this book too.

I will get around to reading it eventually and your recommendation moves it up the priority list Judy. It needs a bit more time and attention devoted to it than I could manage at the time.

It makes me forgive him all his sins.
Shelley
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eta: I think I might read this tonight instead of Careless People (which I am really enjoying, but I'd like to be able to participate better here!).



All the place names and cafe names don't bother me. I just kind of skim over them as I've never been to Paris and they mean nothing to me, much like I'm sure my telling a story about Kaya Cafe or The Grand would mean nothing to most people since they wouldn't be familiar with places I've lived.
This book is more about the feeling of a particular place and time rather than a true memoir or anything. I think much of the dialogue is probably half remembered and otherwise made up based on who the person is. It's the feeling of it all, and I love it. It's also more interesting to me this time around since I have recently finished the book on Hadley.

Was that The Paris Wife or Paris Without End: The True Story of Hemingway's First Wife by Gioia Diliberto? I've been reading the first one but think I might actually find more interest in the second.

Can't say I'm particularly looking forward to attempting A Farewell to Arms now!

And, as I said in my original post (message 2 above), I am still baffled what it is that the readers who love this book actually love about it. I guess it is quite hard to analyse the reasons for a positive response to a book - far more so that a negative response.
I sincerely hope that A Farewell to Arms will be an improvement - I think it will.


I do find this a bit disjointed, but I can't say I terribly mind. It almost reminds me of the vignette type books of L. M. Montgomery's. Not the writing, but that it's just a collection of stories. I don't mind that. I don't really like memoirs overall, and so having a book like this is nice.
I am looking forward to reading A Farewell to Arms now (if we do have it, I still haven't checked...). I believe it was in Paris Without End that said that A Moveable Feast got back to his original writing style, that some of the in between books lacked. That makes me look forward to it.

Because I certainly remember enjoying MF. I thought it was kind of catty and yet good.


Great news. It's currently the discussion with the most posts and most views of everything that we're reading for the BYT 2014 WWI Reading Challenge. Come and get involved. I look forward to seeing you and the other participants posting there soon.

An endorsement, of sorts, from Val too...
Val wrote: "I am looking forward to reading A Farewell to Arms for the third time more than I am this one."

It starts well, with a nice description of a couple of cafes, but then it gets more rambling. I think I thought much the same last time I read it.
I can also remember a lot of unnecessary bitching about other writers, stuff he could not say when he was a young struggling writer and wanted them to help him, but could and should not when he was a famous one who did not need them any more.

I thought the scene where Hemingway and Fitzgerald were talking about sex was interesting because one of Zelda's hysteria's centered on the idea that the pair had a relationship.

I think Hemingway was interested in Scott's writing not his body, although he does describe him in some detail. I'm not sure whether Zelda really thought they were having a relationship, even at her most deranged, or whether accusing Hemingway of being gay was just the most insulting thing she could think of to say to him; he was very homophobic.
I now remember why I did not think I would ever want to read this again.
www.goodreads.com/review/show/847762991

I don't often bother to write reviews of books I find disappointing on the principle that I have already wasted enough time reading them. There are some bits of this one which I liked and I decided to make an exception in this case as I am a fan of Hemingway's writing (although rather less of Hemingway himself).

I think you're probably right when you say..
I don't think he (Ernest Hemingway) would have thought this ready for publication.
...and also with this conclusion...
There is a good book to be written about Hemingway's early writing career and his first marriage and Paris. It is a pity that Hemingway never got to write it.

I agree this is a great point you make in your review Val and something that I hadn't really considered. It certainly goes a long way to explaining why it felt so disjointed and some parts more worthy of inclusion than others. I understand there is a newer more restored version with different entries recently available, so i suppose other people had the same thoughts that this wasn't quite the finished work it should have been.

www.goodreads.com/review/show/832507044

I wish I had felt half as enthusiastic as you. I feel like we've read two separate books. Still that's part of what makes these discussions so interesting and enjoyable.

I think I gave a lower rating because he ended with the bits on Fitzgerald. That left more of a sour note for me.
Years ago I read A. E. Hotchner's Papa Hemingway. I think he became a little too close to his subject. A little too friendly. Most of my knowledge of Hemingway came from this and other books where authors wrote memoirs and mentioned stories about their relationships with EH. Getting ready to read Martha Gellhorn's Travels with Myself and Another.

Part of the reason I was more disappointed with this book is not that we have read different books, but that I wanted to read a different book - the one he might have written.
Hemingway did drink quite a lot, but he also worked on his writing, so to him this meant his drinking was under control. Fitzgerald was not working, or not writing as he could do. Both Hemingway and Fitzgerald himself felt that way. I don't know what share of the blame for this it was fair to give Zelda or was due to alcohol and Scott's lack of self-discipline or confidence. (It has been debated with some acrimony over the years.)

http://www.nytimes.com/2014/02/11/boo...

I think the title 'Papa Hemingway' puts me off Hotchner's book a bit - it sounds "too friendly", as you say the book itself is, Jan! I'm not sure if I'd prefer to read a book about him or one about the whole group in Paris at that time... decisions, decisions. I have read a novel by Martha Gellhorn, A Stricken Field but it was a long time ago and I don't really remember it, just that I thought it was powerfully written.


Although he doesn't name them, it is obvious he is referring to them. They were incredibly supportive giving him lots of money, time, free holidays etc. He blamed them (the rich people) for corrupting him and for most of the bad things that happened to him (divorces etc.).
Like many great artists he was a poor human being. As I was reading about their upset I was reminded about the unkind words he wrote about Ford Maddox Ford and Gertrude Stein.

http://topdocumentaryfilms.com/stephe...
Hoarding evidence that there are times when he could deal with everyday life may have been a strategy to help him cope with those times when he could not.
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