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The Year Is 2014
The Place Is The Demon Dimension Horcus
The Season Is Winter / Snowing
3rd Person
No Sex
Tongue/Kissing/Nudity/Hugging/Saying A Sexual Act Happened Is Fine And Generally Is Skipped
Teenage Years
Minor Characters
Posts Detailed And Three Four Five Sentences
They Do End Up Falling For Each Other
Plot Ideas And Twists Are Welcome


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Name: Hayden Joesph Mitchell
Age:17
Birthday: 9-22-1997
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Straight
Relationship satus:Tries to advoid relationships because he is never in the same place. He is also afarid of hurting the person who he would date.
Appearance: http://www.kinogallery.com/people/fot...
Full Physical Description: He stands at 6"2 and weighs approx. 200lbs/90kgs. He has is pale, but not two pale.He has muscles everywhere and a nice six pack. He has blue eyes. At times they turn colors. He is looks very weak.
Species: Werewolf/Vampire
Aliblites: Speed
Minor mind control
Super human strength
Keen sense of hearing and smell
Personality: He keeps to himself the majority of the time. Once someone gets to know him he is full of life. He is very protective over things. Some say he is clingy. He is very sarcastic and rude at times. Sometimes he is also very nice and pleasant. He has a very bad temper, but tries to keep it cool.
History: He was born a werewolf, but got in an accident and he some how got turned into a vampire but only half way. He keeps this a secret because he would be an outcast in his pack. His parents died at a young age. He was taken care of by his Aunt and Uncle who are the alphas of the pack. They moved around a lot because they didn't want people to catch on and find out what they were. He never really settle down and is still not use to sticking in one place for very long.
Other: He has a tattoo on his left arm. Which is the mark of the pack.


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Hayden Joseph Mitchell


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Eraden stood, hunched in her cage. It was winter and snowing. It was cold and she stood, cramped and completely naked. She tried to hide herself strategically with the bones of the cage. Everyone eyeing her and whistling. She felt so scared, sad and humiliated. But she stood, smiling and quiet, trying not to shiver as she knew doing any of that would earn her a beating. She hadn't slept or eaten in three days. The tradesman keeping her weak and compliant. She kept her gaze downcast as she had been taught. She sighed internally and wondered how this day was going to end.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Hayden gated the idea of s demon market. It was crowded and was dirty. Creatures came from all sides of him. They ran into him. It was hard to get throughout the crowd,but he manage to. He saw stands up full of goods. He came to the end of the row. He noticed a cage. In this cage appeared to be a vampire.How could anyone put someone in a cage?That is sickened him. He walked by quickly. Trying not to think about the girl vampire in the cage.


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Eraden saw someone slow down and stand by her cage for a moment before taking off again. She dared not look up but could see people's feet. Her skin was all goosebumps due to the snow, making her more self-conscious and men eyeing her like a piece of meat. Then her worst nightmare came true. A fat, horrible looking old man walked up to her cage, a real sick look in his eyes. He also had little to no teeth, and what remained was all yellow and rotten. She grimaced internally. Then she became sick to her stomach as the pervert said loudly, "Oi bucko, how much for the blood sucker here?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He couldn't help, but think that he could do something to help her. He didn't like an idea of a creep buying her. He turned around to see this fat old man was at her cage. He was the worst thing he ever saw. If he bought her he will let her free. He already decide that. He went up to the cage."How much for the lady?" He didn't know what else to say. He tried having his voice at a clam level.


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The pervert turned, "Oi! Don't ya see I am here first?!" He then turned to the tradesman, "So how much for da vamp, she's intended for sex right?"

The tradesman, a lazy old bum who was sitting nicely wrapped in a blanket stood up. "Yeah she's intended for sex, why ya think she's naked? To show off the goods. And she'll cost ya seven gold pieces." She was really worth five in all technicality. The tradesman a real sly old coot seeing two customers making him greedy and pushing up the price, hoping for a bidding war.

Eraden felt like she might throw up. But considering her stomach was empty she idly wondered what she would throw up, perhaps she would just dry heave. She was also feeling mixed emotions about the other man returning, she recognized him from his shoes. She didn't want to hope and didn't really know which was worse. The pervert or the stranger.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yes I did. There is no law about the highest bidder is there?" His voice was still calm, but he had hit of sarcasm. He had a feeling this dealer was greedy like most of them at this market. Seven gold pieces was a good amount of money he had more. He turned to the dealer."I will give you 20 gold pieces for her." He knew he wouldn't let this creep buy her.


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Eraden nearly had a heart attack at hearing his words. She began to really get scared. Why would he pay so much for her? She wondered how sick and twisted he was and what he had in store for her.

The tradesman smiled. Everything was going his way.

The pervert gave the young man a raised eyebrow. "Know something I don't? She must be really something in the bedroom then. 50 gold pieces then, this little thing is coming home with me tonight and Ima show her what a real man can do." He licked his lips slowly and eyed her like a predator, a sick predator.

At this Eraden did gag. The tradesman shot her a dirty look and got up immediately and got his whip. He whipped her twice and shouted, "What did I say?! No talking you dumb slut!" Eraden swayed slightly but managed to stay on her feet. She made no sound. If she did he would just whip her more. She screamed inside and felt two deep cuts appear on her back, blood starting to drip down.

The tradesman looked at his customers and said apologetically, "Sorry about the damage but it needs to be kept in check ya know."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yes I know." That was the biggest lie ever told. He didn't know anything about what he was talking about. What did the dealer do to her? He heard the creepy old man say 50. "I will give you 100 gold pieces." He sounded more confident. He didn't like losing. He wouldn't lose to this old man either. Something was different about this vampire. Something made him want to buy her. Beside the fact of putting creature or humans in a cage. When he buys her he will give her some clothes and some money to start over.


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The tradesman looked back and forth and finally said eagerly and with a wide grin, 200 and she's yours."

The old pervert look quiet disappointed. He said spitefully and with hatred, "I better not see you on the street cow, or Ima take you right there and then." He patted at his crotch to show his meaning before walking away.

Eraden felt real terror. She watched the pervert's retreating feet. She wanted to actually vomit now. Her heart galloping in her chest.

The dealer looked at the young man expectantly. "The price remains the same, 200 or no deal."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments That is a lot of money for someone's freedom he thought. Then freedom is something that everybody deserves to have."Deal." He grabbed a small pouch out of his pocket. Each little pouch he had contain 200. It was always easy to count that way. "Here you go." He handed it to him. He wonder what she was thinking about him? She probably was nervous that a complete stranger bought her.


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Eraden swallowed. She felt sick to her stomach.

The tradesman caught the pouch and eagerly counted the money. He gave a bright toothy grin and got the key out of his pocket. He opened the cage door and then put a dog leash around Eraden's neck. It was much too tight. He gave it a yank and Eraden came out. She was still hunched as she had been standing like that for two days already. Now her naked body was fully visible and all the men whistled. She blushed and looked down, humiliated thoroughly.

The tradesman gave the end of the leash to the boy and said proudly, "Enjoy your wh***e."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He pretended not to here the dealers last comment. He grabbed the leash. Who could put a person on a leash? He will get the leash off as soon as he gets her some clothes for her."So my name is Hayden and yours?" He thought it would be nice to ask what her name is. He stopped to look for a clothing booth.


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Eraden hugged her arms over her chest, trying to hide as much of herself as possible. She moved slowly because of her limp. She kept her gaze downcast. She tried to move faster but the cold weather making her limb protest with a sharp stabbing pain. She watched his feet and stopped when he did. She was very scared, she tried to comply and say her name but it had been decades since she last spoke. But luckily that problem had been solved for her. She tugged on a piece of paper hanging from her ear. It was attached to a metal hook like earring, like one might find on cattle. It merely read 'Era'. The full length of her name lost some time ago.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He didn't notice the tag that was on her ear at first. "So your name is Era?" He knew she was probably scared of him. Whatever he thought. He soon found a clothing booth. He grabbed the leash and started walking towards the clothing booth. "Buy anything you want?" He simply said. He was being really nice to her. He wasn't going to get mad at her because he was probably the only one who has ever been nice to her. The booth had all sorts of clothing to chose from.


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Eraden looked at him and then looked at the booth. Then back at him. She wasn't sure what to do. No one had ever asked her what she wanted. Normally clothes were bought for her and tossed into her face. She wore what she got. She knew he had paid a lot of money for her and didn't know if he could afford it. She was scared. But he had told her to pick so she slowly and tentatively looked up. There was a lot to choose from. After a minute or so, she decided quickly not knowing how much time she was allowed, she pointed a small white finger at a simple and plain beige dress. It was of a poor material and looked fit for a beggar. She also hadn't extended her arm too far. One she had to cover herself the second she really couldn't as she was still cramped into her hunched form.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You sure?" He asked hesitantly. She pointed to a beige dress that looked fit for a beggar."If your worried about money I have plenty of it." He told her reassuring her. Why doesn't she talk? "I understand if you don't want to talk, but you can talk." He didn't know if she wasn't allowed to talk around the other people who had her. Just one word at least to know someone is in there.


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Eraden nodded. She felt panicked, he expected her to speak. How on earth was she to tell him after years of abuse and being told to shut her trap she no longer spoke? After looking him in the eyes she just moved, for some reason she got some bravery again. She took her hand and placed it on her throat, then she closed her hand, symbolising her voice gone.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You either mean your afraid to talk or you can't talk." He shook his head. He wasn't going to push her to talk. If she didn't want to talk fine. "I'm going to let you know I'm not like any of those people who sold you and used you over and over." She wanted that beige dress. "Excuse me, can I buy that beige dress over there." He asked the dealer. The dealer handed him the dress for the exchange for some coins. He walked away."Here you go. I will find a nice place for you to change." He looked up and smiled.


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Eraden glanced at him and gave something that mimicked a smile. She hadn't smiled in years so the feeling and position her face needed was lost. She knew she must look ugly or deranged with what she came up with so she stopped and looked down. She watched her dirty and blistered feet, struggling to keep up.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments After a few minutes he found a place for her to change. "You can go in there to change." He let go of the leash for her to go change."Come right back though." He didn't want to sound bossy. He still had to give her some money before he let her go.


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Eraden nodded and quickly went into the room to change. She basically just threw the dress over her head and came back out. Less humiliated and more comfortable. She handed him back the leash and waited for his next instructions.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thank you." He grabbed the leash once again. He reached in his pockets and got another pouch of coins."Here have these." He gave her the pouch of coins. He took the collar off her neck."Your free to go." He smiled. He hope she will take her new freedom and do something with it.


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Eraden had a very surprised look on her face. She looked nervously back and forth between the pouch of coins and him. He couldn't be serious? She hadn't been free in decades. Didn't he understand that she didn't know all the portals? That if she ran into that pervert she was done for? That she could easily be taken back into slavery or robbed or killed? She didn't know freedom anymore. Her family where all long gone and she was a vampire now. Her eyes got wide and she started to hyperventilate. She gripped the small pouch as oxygen evaded her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Is everything ok? Did I say something wrong?" It didn't dawn on him until now that maybe she didn't know what freedom was. He felt bad for her. Not knowing what freedom was must be hard. Or maybe it has been so long she doesn't know how or what to do with freedom."If it makes you don't want to go right away you can stay with me for awhile." That would be a bad idea. His pack would never accept a vampire as himself. But a full vampire would be even worst.


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Eraden felt herself wash over with relief. She took a deep breath and calmed her breathing. She nodded fervently and actually, incredibly gave a proper happy smile. Her fangs making her seem cute and adorable. Even if they were deadly long due to starvation. She had no idea however about his home life. Since she was so starved she couldn't smell that he was a werewolf.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She seemed happy. Why would someone be happy without freedom? He didn't manage to think about this for long."Oh silly me I should ask if your hungry. Are you hungry?" She probably was starving for blood. He tried to not think about blood because if he did he would be afraid that his vampire half would kick in.


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Eraden was about to nod yes. But then she remembered her 'training'. "Never ask for blood! Never tell them your hungry! Your worthless! You don't need to feed!" They had shouted, no, screamed into her ears. She got a reserved look on her face and shook her head no, even if she hadn't fed in three days and was starving.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He was going to ask why? An idea popped into his head."You are hungry." He said this as more of command to get her to eat something. He knew it wasn't healthy for a vampire not to eat for awhile. He didn't like the idea to boss her around but if that was the only way to get her to do anything for herself then so be it.


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Eraden bit her lip. Was that a command? It sounded more like a statement? She was unsure how to react. He hadn't said she must eat, only that she was hungry. Her 'training' didn't include statements. It was either yes or no.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments This was getting him no where. Maybe it sounded a like a statement to her. He had know clue."I'm going to go get something to eat and you will eat something." That sounded like a command to him. Does she really have to get permission to eat or do anything?


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Eraden nodded. That was definitely a command. She looked at him expectantly. Not knowing where to go herself as she had never been in this particular market before and had arrived at night.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He looked around for a place to eat. He found a nice little place to eat. He got a nice booth for them to sit at."Anything you want in particular." That sounded really lame. Of course she will probably want blood. He felt stupid to ask her that question.


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Eraden merely shook her head no. She sat hunched but tried to stretch herself out of it. She wasn't really hungry, she was so used to being starving she long ago lost her craving for blood nor did she have a appetite. She looked around and then remembered her place and immediately looked down and became frozen.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The waitress came by and ask for his order."Yes I will like the some meat any kind would do. I will also like the finest human blood you have for the lady." The waitress nodded and went back to get there order."From now on I would surely be thankful if you could speak just once in awhile." This didn't really sound like a command, but a request.


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Eraden gave him a sad look. She really wasn't sure if she could speak anymore. She then realised she was looking directly at him and quickly turned away. Her body scrunching up a bit more and tensing, as if she were preparing herself to be hit.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments It look like she was afraid of him hitting her. "I'm not going to hit you." He said. He saw the waitress bring him his order."Thank you." She walked away. He put the meat on his plate."Now here is some blood. When you want more just ask me." He felt bad for her. She was afraid of everything. He guess he would be to if he went through what she did.


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Eraden kept looking down but nodded. She took the cup of blood and firstly took a whiff. Her eyes immediately shifted. She started to take small sips. Her body not used to food anymore and needing to take it slow. She took a five second break between each small sip before taking another. Before she was even half way done she pushed the cup aside. She was full now. Her body filling up quicker since her stomach was used to only small amounts here and there.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He smelled the blood from right there. It felt like he was drooling for it. This never happened to him before. He could normally control his vampire side very well. The waitress grab his plate and the blood. He quickly forgot about as soon as it was gone. Then he thought where will he stay. He has his own apartment for emergencies only. He couldn't take her home. So he guess this would be emergency.


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Eraden had watched him from the corner of her eye. Why does he look at the blood like that? From the raw meat he's a werewolf? Eraden wasn't sure what to think. She sighed and rubbed her arm. She was very tired. She hadn't slept for as long as she hadn't fed and her full belly was lulling her to sleep.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He got up to go pay for their meal. "We are going to my apartment." He left out the part of emergency. "So have you traveled in a portal before?" Asking weather or not she had. He just wanted to make sure. The first time he travel through a portal he got sick.


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Eraden grimaced and nodded. More than she would care to count. She got up and walked up to him, waiting for him to lead the way. Her limp visible.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He lead the way to the portal. He smiled and said "Ladies first." His aunt would be proud of him using his manners. This is first person he actually talked to in awhile. Most of the time he either gets mad at someone and hurts them. She seemed different. He hopes that she will become a new person instead of a someone who is afraid of everything.


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Eraden eyed the portal suspiciously and took a deep breath before jumping in and through. She landed on her back on the other side.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He jumped through the portal too. He didn't land on his back though. He took her hand and helped her up. "So can you control your self around humans?" He didn't want to be the cause of some type of mass murders. Throughout the city.


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Eraden nodded. She looked at his hand holding hers and blushed. She held back loosely, afraid she might just accidentally hurt him. She knew her skin would be roughed and calloused from years of hard work.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Ok good." He could tell that she was blushing. He lead her to her bedroom."Here is your bedroom down the hall on the left there is a bathroom so you can wash up. If you need anything I will be watching t.v." He went to the living room and sat down to watch t.v.


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For at least fifteen minutes Eraden just stood there and periodically blinked. She then shrugged and went down into the bathroom. She closed the door and took off her dress, she took a long hot shower. Her wounds were a little bit healed but still there. Dry blood washed itself off. She washed her hair and sponged her body, careful of her wounds. She then just stood and let the warm water ease her body into a more straight position. She finished and got out. She got dressed back in her gown and brushed her teeth and combed her hair. She looked beautiful again, radiant. She thought about what he had said, he hadn't given her a command, only that if she needed him he'de be watching television. She shrugged and thought it okay based on his words to go to her room for some 'me time'. Again she stood in the door way for a good amount of time. She'd never had a room before. She went and slowly laid down on the soft bed. She sighed as her weary body eased in appreciation. She rested her head on the pillow and immediately fell asleep. She naturally curled into a small ball. Breathing softly.


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