What's wrong

[Edward]

Hi everyone.
This is my book "Passion of an Angel: Shade of Light", very captivating and mystical story about the life before Earth.
It's got a lot of good reviews posted both on Goodreads and on Amazon, but my sales have stopped. This month I haven't sold a single copy and I can't understand why.
What's wrong with it, can you tell me?

[Emma]

The look inside section that I read was beautifully written, but the book is very short, only 30 or so pages. The initial description of the glade and the sun coming up lasts nearly a whole page, don't get me wrong, its very good, but I guess buyers are assuming they won't get much of a story in only 30 pages.
Its also marked as the first in a series, but there doesn't appear to be any more. People might be waiting to see if the story will continue before buying.
One other thing, that angel on the cover has bare nipples, a big amazon no-no. if it hasn't been picked up and banned yet, its likely it will at some point.

Good luck with it.

[Edward]

E. wrote: "The look inside section that I read was beautifully written, but the book is very short, only 30 or so pages. The initial description of the glade and the sun coming up lasts nearly a whole page, d..."

Thanks for trying to help me. The second story is on the way, editing. I hope you're right and when it is published on February the series will become more successful.
Thank you