Beta reader for short story compilation

[Zach]

Hi,

I'm putting together a collection if short stories and wanted to see who/if anyone would be interested in reading a few short stories for me.

I have one completed and am almost finished with the second (I'm trying to get 21 individual stories 1000-1500 words a piece. Each story is separate but feeds a central plot)

I'm mainly looking for a critique but grammar isn't my forte so help with that won't be turned away. If anyone is interested let me know.

Thanks,

Zach

[Zach]

I just realized that I forgot a blurb,

While this is a collection of short stories, they follow a central theme and directly correlate to one another.

"The Devil's 7" follows 7 corrupted souls spanning thousands of years as they work to send more souls to the devil.

The story, without being biblical, sort of parallels the 7 deadly sins. I'm at a bit of a road block so currently I'm only asking for comment on the first story 875 words.

I will be acknowledging everyone who contributes to this in a section of the published work.

I'm pausing my own reviews for this work so I would be happy to beta read chapters, short stories or novellas for anyone who is willing to lend a hand.