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Weekly Poetry Stuffage > Week 13 (June 29th- July 6th) Contest DONE!!

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message 1: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments Oh, goody! This is gonna be fun! :D


message 2: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) Waterfall
Rachel


The water rushes down
Pounding the rocks below
A thunderous roar reaches my ears
The water cascades over precipices
Races down the rive
Relentless
I stand
Mesmerized by the waters flow
It captures my mind
I love the water
It is anger and peace
Opposites together
Two things bound
I think on things lost
Chances, friends, lovers
My head hangs in sadness
I mourn for all I’ve lost
The now Brackish water flows
Down and over the falls
Cold and blissful
The waters calls me
I love the water
The way it swirls around me
I answer its call


message 3: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments Love it, Rachel!
Al, yours is great! Jellies and Rays! :D I think both are awesome, guys. I'll have to think of one sometime soon.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

The Wonderful Water
By Sarah M.

Come into the water
Come wash away the pain
Leave behind the troubles
That are driving you insane
Kneel beside the water
Drink of its cool stream
Let its healing fill you
Dream a hopeful dream
Dive into the water
Energize your mind
Float among the happy people
Refresh, relax, unwind
This water's not just water
It's marvelous, so don't wait!
This water can be your
For just $19.98!


message 5: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments Lol! Love it, Sarah!


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks, guys!XD


message 7: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments :D


message 8: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) Whoa, why is the water $19.98? That's a tad expensive....


message 9: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) But I love your poem!!! It's awesome!!!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Because it's marvelous water!


message 11: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) Ah. Of course, that makes all the difference, Sarah....


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