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message 1: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites)


message 2: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik hopped out of the car and looked around. "Wow," he breathed "This place is amazing. I'm surprised no one else is here." He smiled and walked toward the the beautiful body of water, the waterfall loud but not exceedingly so. "I'm going to go over there and change." He slipped into the bushes to change behind one, hiding himself the best that he could.


message 3: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "It's kind of a beachers only spot I think. Most others stay away and I think quite a few don't even know it's here." She told him. When he went to go change she called Apollo and went down to the edge of the water. Arianne took off her shirt, shorts and shoes and laid them all neatly on top of her bag. She walked into the water just up to her ankles and closed her eyes relishing the perfect temperature and the rush of the water fall.


message 4: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik dropped his clothes onto the beach then headed over to her. He stepped slowly into the water, expecting it to be cold but pleasantly surprised when it was just the right temperature. "This water is amazing," he said softly as his arms slipped around her bare waist. "And you look so incredibly stunning in that bikini that I can no longer be held responsible for my actions. All blame will be placed on you from here on out." He was only teasing of course, he wouldn't make any advances after that firs disaster.


message 5: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "I know isn't it." Arianne said with a sigh of contentment. She opened her eyes when he put his hands on her waist, a shiver running all over her body from the contact. "Well you're wrong about that." She told him. She laid both her hands against his chest and looked up at him. "I am not to be held responsible for my actions now that I've seen you with no shirt on. God, what was I thinking earlier." She gave him another smile. Now that she felt more secure with him she felt ridiculous for being so worried earlier.


message 6: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik laughed and picked her up so that her legs would wrap about his waist. He started to walk slowly deeper into the water. "I'll try to behave myself in front of Apollo but I make no promises." He knew he looked pretty good with his shirt off since he took care of his body, but she hadn't seen his scar yet. That wasn't so pleasant as his thick, well defined abs were.


message 7: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Oh I almost forgot. Apollo are you coming?" She called over his shoulder. The big dog bounded into the water after them sending water flying everywhere. Arianne squealed and buried her face in Vik's neck. "Apollo are you crazy the goal of swimming isn't to get wet." She joked. She wrapped her arms around Vik's neck and leaned in to give him a long kiss. "I love it out here and I'm so glad you came with me." She told him, in a whisper against his lips.


message 8: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik shivered a bit as her warm breath tickled over his lips after their kiss. "I'm glad you invited me. I really am honored that I get to spend time with you and you love me like I love you. This has been an amazing time and I hope it continues." He leaned forward and kissed her deeply once more. "I love you," he said before a devilish grin formed on his lips. He picked her up over his head and threw her into the water.


message 9: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne shrieked as she fell in the water. Apollo barked and quickly swam out to meet her. When she surfaced she rubbed his head and told him what a good dog he was then she turned to Vik. "Well that's a fine way to say I love you." She said before flashing a devilish grin and diving back into the water. She swam under the surface, mermaid style, fast towards the waterfall, Apollo hot on her tail. She really did look a lot like a mermaid when her auburn curls turned dark and flowed behind her as she moved.


message 10: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik simply stood there grinning, admiring the view for the time being. She looked absolutely gorgeous when she was swimming like that. It was so natural, the way she swam. He loved it. He watched a few more moments before he swam after her. His form wasn't as natural as hers. He swam for speed rather than fluidity and he couldn't match her grace no matter how hard he tried.


message 11: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne surfaced behind the waterfall and climbed up on the large ledge inside the cave that was hidden behind it. It was as long as a wide and twin bed and about as long. She puled Apollo up beside her and that waited. She sat with one knee pulled up to rest her chin on and her other leg dangling over the side in the water. Her free hand she swirled around the surface of the water. She loved the soft feel of water flowing over her skin. "I wonder how long it will take him to get here Apollo."


message 12: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik made it to them in no time at all, pulling himself up next to them in one swift movement. "Why hello there you two," he smiled before kissing Arianne then rolling Apollo over and rubbing his belly. He could get used to this. Being with her was like living in heaven and having a dog to spend time with would be nice too. He had never thought it possible to be so fulfilled in life.


message 13: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Why hello stranger. What took you so long?" Arianne asked playfully as she watched him rub Apollo. How did I find a guy who loves me and my dog and my car and is this fricken hot? She thought to herself as she watched. That was when she noticed the long scar on his back. She reached out her hand to touch it, afraid that he might pull away from her. It made her want to cry thinking of what he must have gone through to get a scar like that.


message 14: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik shivered from head to toe, almost violently, when her finger touched his scar. It wasn't necessarily sensitive but no one had ever touched it before, thus when she touched it gave him a small shock. "Uh, sorry about that," he said, actually embarrassed about his scar. He turned his back away from her so that he was facing her instead.


message 15: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Sorry?" Arianne looked puzzled. "Sorry for what? That you have a scar?" Arianne laid a hand on his cheek. "What exactly happened to give you that?" She asked. She felt tears welling up in her own eyes. She had never felt so strongly for another person that she wanted to cry at the thought of them feeling pain of discomfort. "I'm sorry I touched it if that made you feel uncomfortable." She added. "I won't do it again if you don't want me to."


message 16: by Isis (new)

Isis "Oh no no," Vik smiled at her "It wasn't uncomfortable its just that it doesn't exactly get touched often. Just kind of gave me a little shock, if that makes sense. But don't cry." He pulled her close and wiped away the couple of tears that pricked her eyes. "I got it from a surgery I had when I was a kid. My mother was a drug addict and she kept up her habits when she was pregnant. It caused some underdevelopment of my nervous system and I had to be weened of the drugs myself when I was a baby. After the surgery I was fine. It saved my life."


message 17: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Doesn't get touched often?" She said in a questioning tone. She leaned into his touch when he wiped her tears away. "Vik, I can't even imagine some of the things you've had to live through, like that, whether it saved your life or not. I wish I could make some of those bad memories go away." She leaned closer to him. "I wish so badly." She couldn't even dream of the way he'd had to live his life, all while she grew up in a nice house with living parents even if they weren't much more than that most of the time.


message 18: by Isis (new)

Isis "I haven't had much occasion to take off my shirt in front of anyone and I've had two girls refuse to be with me because that scar creeped them out. It was kind of funny really," Vik shrugged. "But you don't need to feel bad Arianne. They're not all bad memories and the ones that are bad help me with my work. You don't need to wish anything but to live a long happy life, and I'll wish it's with me. Alright? And, you make the bad memories go away anyway. When I'm with you there is nothing bad in the world."


message 19: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "There is nothing funny about that." Arianne made a disgusted face. The idea that someone could feel less about him because of a scar made her sick. "How could someone be that shallow. That scar is part of the reason you're here today it's part of what made you who you are. It's part of you and I don't see how anyone could not love everything that makes you, you." She felt even closer to him than she had before and she hadn't thought that was possible until that moment. "I'm not scared anymore Vik." She whispered. "I love you."


message 20: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik pulled her into his arms very suddenly and kissed her with more passion than he had ever thought possible. When he pulled back he stared her straight in the eyes, his own eyes full of emotion. "I love you," he whispered softly "I love you without a shadow of a doubt and I'm not scared anymore either. Thank you so much for...for understanding." His hands caressed her face and stroked her hair, just wanting to touch her and be close to her. No one had ever said anything like this to him and he had never felt so loved and accepted in his life.


message 21: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne kissed him back, wrapping her arms around his neck and running them along his shoulders. "I love you without a doubt as well. I've never felt like I understood someone as well as I do you. Normally I would never be confident enough to say something like that for fear of sounding ridiculous." She ran her hands over his shoulders and his chest but her eyes never left his. "I feel different with you and that different is just me being myself for once." She gave a shocked laugh.


message 22: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik nuzzled her neck and held her as close to his body as he possibly could. "I love the exact way that you are. You are the woman of my dreams and more. I never, never thought I should be so lucky as to find someone like you. I'm never letting you go, not for my life." He kissed her face all over happily, over and over again.


message 23: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne laid back on the ledge pulling Vik down with her. "I didn't even know what I was looking for until I met you." She told him. "In my dreams I could never quite conjure up the right face or the right voice or the right laugh," She told him. "Until last night after the party when I went to sleep." She admitted.


message 24: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik ran his thumb up and down the side of her face, looking at her fondly. "Honestly, I never spent much time thinking about my perfect girl because I never thought it would happy. Then I saw you dancing and I kissed you and we ate lasagna together and I saw the real true you and you touched my scar. I'm just so in love with you." He was flustered simply because of how happy he was. He had to laugh at himself a bit.

((night night))


message 25: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) ((Night))

Arianne smiled as he basically catalogued their relationship so far. "I'm so glad you never tried because if you had and had come up with something other than me I never would have caught your eye and I wouldn't be as supremely happy and in love as I am right now. From now on I want all of your dreams to be about me." She brought his face down towards her, droplets of water falling onto her from his hair. She kissed the side of his neck and his jaw because she knew he liked that and all she wanted to do was make him happy.


message 26: by Isis (new)

Isis "I don't think that will be a problem for me," Vik told her, giving a soft shiver and moan off when she began to kiss him. "All of my dreams will be about your beautiful face, your incredible body, that adorable laugh you hate so much, and the way you're mine and all mine. Well, mine and Apollo's. I can share a tiny bit."


message 27: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) At the sound of his name Apollo came over and laid his head on Arianne's hair that was splayed out over the rock. Arianne stopped kissing Vik for a second and gave a shocked look between her boyfriend and her dog. "He has never done that before." She said, amazed. "Normally I have to lock him out of whatever room I'm in because he will literally climb between me and whoever I'm with. Well that's it then, if Apollo truly approves this thing is destined for success." She kissed him again.


message 28: by Isis (new)

Isis "Well, you know what they say, dogs are the best judges of character. I must be amazing," Vik laughed before sitting up a bit, a sly smile on his lips and in his eyes. "You, on the other hand. You're terrible and you must be punished by tickles. Don't try to resist, it will only make things worse for you." His fingers went to work on her sides, tickling her intensely.


message 29: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Hmmm, you must be." Arianne mumbled before he started tickling her. She doubled over, curling into a ball to protect herself and laughing. She couldn't stop her embarrassing laugh and her laughing got Apollo all worked up who started jumping around and barking. "Vik, Vik!" Arianne squealed. "I surrender."


message 30: by Isis (new)

Isis Upon her words Vik stopped tickling and pulled her into a tight hug where he kissed her all over. "That's a good girl," he said as if he were talking to a baby "A good girl girl surrendering to Vik." He grinned and kissed her lips lovingly. "Mmmm, I still really love that laugh. I'll have to tickle it out of you more often."


message 31: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Oh no, please don't." She begged, trying to catch her breath. "If you want me to laugh tell me a cheesy joke or watch a romantic comedy with me." She continued. "I much prefer being out of breath when it's from kissing you or going on a long run." She told him. In a second she pushed on his chest and flipped them so that she was hovering over him a wicked smile on her face.


message 32: by Isis (new)

Isis "You can try, my dear, but I'm not ticklish at all," Vik said, and it was the truth. He had never been ticklish. He did, however, enjoy this view of her hovering over him in her little bikini. This was definitely something he could get used to, or, maybe not. Probably not. She would always have a power over him with her body.


message 33: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Who said you were?" She asked, pushing her hair behind her ear before placing both hands back on the rock on either side of his head. "Once again, not my style. Too simplistic." She leaned down and gave him a barely there kiss on his lips before pulling back. "I prefer to be a bit more cunning." She smiled again and leaned down to gently kiss the side of his jaw and then his neck, before pulling back and smiling again. She continued to tease him.


message 34: by Isis (new)

Isis "Ah, so you're not just mean you're pure evil. I understand now completely," Vik said, trying to hold back his moans and not enjoy what she was doing. He didn't want her to think she was winning, but she was. He had always loved a tease.


message 35: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Fallen angel, remember?" She reminded him as she continued to kiss down his neck and across his chest. "Just call angel whenever you surrender." She told him a low voice. "I'll stop whenever you want." She smiled against his skin.


message 36: by Isis (new)

Isis "And if I don't call it? Then what?" Vik asked before a low moan escaped out of his lips. His chest had always been particularly sensitive for some reason and she had just managed to kiss it perfectly. "Are you going to continue to torture me forever?" He waited for her to reply in that low, hoarse tone she was using and he loved.


message 37: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne smiled again as he moaned. She was winning and she loved that he gave her so much power over him if only for the moment. Especially considering the power he had over her all the other times. "I might, or maybe I'll just stop all together. I'm not sure which is more punishment." She said leaning in to whisper the last part in his ear.


message 38: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik shivered lightly beneath her. "I'm not sure either to be honest," he replied to her through breathing that was getting a bit heavy. "Damn baby, you're driving me absolutely crazy. You're definitely the most evil fallen angel there ever was."


message 39: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) "Best words I ever heard." Arianne whispered in his ear. "You win then." Arianne leaned in and gave him one long kiss, running her tongue along his bottom lip. Them she rolled to the side and laid her head against his chest. "I love you Vik." She whispered to him.


message 40: by Isis (new)

Isis "I love you too," he replied a little shakily "Even if you tease me viciously." He let his hands slip slowly through her hair, tangling them in it and curling it about his various fingers. He loved her hair even when it was wet.


message 41: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne moaned as he tangled his hands in her hair. She loved that more than he would ever know. "Well if you hate it that much I'll promise never to do it ever again." She smiled and kissed his chest while his hands tangled in her hair. She felt perfectly content right where she was.


message 42: by Isis (new)

Isis "Well, I don't necessarily hate it and I wouldn't mind much if you wanted to continue," Vik chuckled "But I won't be pushing you into doing it." He sort of massaged her head and pull at her hair very lightly because it was something most girls seemed to like.


message 43: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne chuckled with him his own laughs shaking her as well. "No pushing required." She told him. "Did I ever tell you that there is nothing that turns me on more than when you play with my hair? Nothing." She whispered. It sent shivers all over her body when he did it.


message 44: by Isis (new)

Isis "Mmm, well in that case," he pulled her hair so that her mouth reached his and he was able to kiss her deeply and hungrily. He was glad that playing with her hair turned her on as much as it did him. Her hair was an incredibly sexy part of her, just as sexy as any part of her body.


message 45: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne moved with him and into the kiss so that she was laying on his chest again. She kissed him deeply and felt again as if all the power had shifted to him. She felt his stomach pressed against her and his chest and she wanted to be as close to him as she possibly could be.


message 46: by Isis (new)

Isis He moaned lightly against her mouth before continuing the kiss with even more passion. His hands wrapped around behind her and slipped all the way from her shoulders, down her back, over her bottom, and onto the backs of her thighs. She had mostly dried by now and he could feel how perfect her skin was once more. Every inch of her slipped against his fingers in just the right way.


message 47: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne moaned as his hands slipped over her skin. It felt like he had touched every inch of her. It felt like he appreciated everything he saw and everything he touched and she loved him for that. She heard Apollo whimper nearby and she looked up. The sun had set, the stars were out and the moon was up. She looked back down at Vik and grinned. "How do you feel about a moonlight swim?" She asked.


message 48: by Isis (new)

Isis "I would love a moonlight swim, as long as you're coming with me," Vik replied to her before sitting up and setting her next to him. "Last one in's a rotten egg," he said calmly after a moment. He flew out of the little cave and down into the water.


message 49: by Hennessy (new)

Hennessy (Angel_of_Wyrd) (goodreadscomangelofwyrd) Arianne rolled her eyes before diving cleanly into the water after him. She felt the splash as Apollo jumped in after her. Soon she surface, a broad grin on her face. The moon was out and the stars were sparkling, their reflections winking back at her as she appeared to hover above the surface of the water, only her shoulders visible.


message 50: by Isis (new)

Isis Vik roughhoused with Apollo a few feet away from her, kind of ruining the serenity of the moment. "You're the rotten egg Apollo," he splashed the big dog, laughing "What a loser." He continued to grin and laugh and play with the dog for some time.


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