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Discussion - Week One & Two - Mrs. Dalloway

Interesting idea about Joyce. I need to think about it. A few immediate thoughts: like Ulysses, Woolf is detailing the experience in a day of a person, using a stream of thoughts. Like Bloom (a Jew) and Stephen (an artist), the viewpoints are those of outsiders (a woman and a man on the edge of suicide). Unlike Ulysses, for me at least, the structure of the book is more fluid and less rigid.
Why are women compared to trees? Maybe because they are rooted in the body, in earth, unlike men who are more abstract (not my thoughts but maybe Woolf's-although I do think that because of biology, especially motherhood, women actually are more grounded in the body than many men). Also, trees are life-giving, especially in June when leaves and blossoms are filling them and women are as well.
I'll have to think about Elizabeth's "oriental" look.
It's such fun to revisit this Woolf. So much easier than The Waves, at least on the surface, but so much beneath that surface.


I've not read Ulysses so can't comment on the comparison, but it seems a great coincidence if there isn't some influence or response going on there.
The stream of consciousness style works beautifully here and of course fits in perfectly with a story that is very much about the juxtaposition of internal lives with external relationships and society. I felt it was an incredibly visual book; I could see it so clearly, including the physical 'jump' of the narration from one person to the next as it occurred.
I agree with Ellie that it is difficult to imagine this book without Septimus. He is so central to the ideas and themes that come through in the story - namely, the pressures of societal conformity and the struggle between inner and outer lives. Not to mention his incredibly relevant role in representing the damage of war and this particularly critical time for a changing English society.
I think that he and Clarissa have much in common - but war is the differentiator that has pushed him over the edge, quite literally. Clarissa has developed strategies for 'managing' her social responsibilities and external pressures; Septimus no longer has the ability to navigate the outside world.
The trees are an interesting metaphor and I'd love to hear other interpretations. Again, I recall it being Clarissa and Septimus who are particularly drawn to them and hold them in a sacred regard. Perhaps because trees are grounded / deeply rooted and live a solitary existence - the ideal, to be admired?
I couldn't put my finger on the oriental references, but it was repeated often enough to suggest some significance...perhaps it's a tool to distinguish the generations of women, but the symbolism is lost on me.

(and the second part of it http://modernism.research.yale.edu/wi... )
Make far more study of it than my feeble efforts ever could. My impression is that Ulysses had an effect, but certainly Proust and Dorothy Richardson did as well. I think it would be a mistake to think Ulysses played a central role. Certainly it clearly has some role though.
But if we just wanted to cause mischief, we could ask if Peter is a response to Stephen, or Septimus an answer to Bloom. It's fun to think about, but I personally won't indulge that too much.
Of particular interest to me is how the book began life as two stories, "Mrs Dalloway in Bond Street", and "The Prime Minister".
There's a great deal to write about Mrs. Dalloway, and I'm sure it will take me a great deal of time to write my review.
Suzanne wrote: "Mrs. Dalloway is indeed Woolf's response to Ulysses (and by extension The Odyssey) among many other things. If people are interested, I'll look up some links to secondary sources that do better than I would at fleshing out the ways MD follows the structure/themes of U..."
I picked up on the Ulysses connection on page 2 "For it was the middle of June." Considering how recently Ulysses had been published, this seemed like more than a coincidence.
I haven't done any secondary reading for this book, but if you find any links, please add them over in the "Questions, Resources..." thread here:
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
I picked up on the Ulysses connection on page 2 "For it was the middle of June." Considering how recently Ulysses had been published, this seemed like more than a coincidence.
I haven't done any secondary reading for this book, but if you find any links, please add them over in the "Questions, Resources..." thread here:
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
Jen wrote: "This was my first book of the year and what a place to start. I absolutely loved it. I find it hard to imagine how Woolf packs so many ideas and themes into such a small volume.
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The stream of consciousness style works beautifully here and of course fits in perfectly with a story that is very much about the juxtaposition of internal lives with external relationships and society. I felt it was an incredibly visual book; I could see it so clearly, including the physical 'jump' of the narration from one person to the next as it occurred..."
I'm glad you enjoyed the book. I agree the visuals are very strong, as well as sound and movement. One of my favorite images is of Big Ben ringing out the time and how "The leaden circles dissolved in the air." A marvelous multi-sensory picture forms from that.
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The stream of consciousness style works beautifully here and of course fits in perfectly with a story that is very much about the juxtaposition of internal lives with external relationships and society. I felt it was an incredibly visual book; I could see it so clearly, including the physical 'jump' of the narration from one person to the next as it occurred..."
I'm glad you enjoyed the book. I agree the visuals are very strong, as well as sound and movement. One of my favorite images is of Big Ben ringing out the time and how "The leaden circles dissolved in the air." A marvelous multi-sensory picture forms from that.
Will wrote: "But if we just wanted to cause mischief, we could ask if Peter is a response to Stephen, or Septimus an answer to Bloom. It's fun to think about, but I personally won't indulge that too much...."
I couldn't detect any one-to-one relations like that. For me it was simply the "day in the life of a Londoner/Dubliner" similarity and the challenging use of complex language/imagery and stream of consciousness prose.
PS. Will, did you like my mash-up poem?
I couldn't detect any one-to-one relations like that. For me it was simply the "day in the life of a Londoner/Dubliner" similarity and the challenging use of complex language/imagery and stream of consciousness prose.
PS. Will, did you like my mash-up poem?

I cross posted the links on Ulysses/Woolf on the appropriate thread. I've been mixing myself up while trying to write a very elaborate and detailed year long joke on another thread someplace.


Casceil wrote: " Clearly I will have to work harder at figuring out who is thinking any given thought..."
I wouldn't try too hard to decipher every thought on your first pass through the book. Abandon yourself to the flow during the rapids, then regroup in the eddies (see above). People who love this book return to again and again to shoot the rapids and enjoy the thrill of Woolf's language unleashed...
I wouldn't try too hard to decipher every thought on your first pass through the book. Abandon yourself to the flow during the rapids, then regroup in the eddies (see above). People who love this book return to again and again to shoot the rapids and enjoy the thrill of Woolf's language unleashed...


Of course, all should be reminded (IMHO) that fancy terms like the above, or the lovely sounding and horribly elitist "monologue intérieur" don't need to be given much attention to enjoy reading the book. They help us talk about it perhaps, but have little to do with reading them (again, just my little opinion)

A very helpful comment, Alex. Thx. I think you just enabled me to positively identify the "him" in this early passage, which I had stumbled over:
"She stiffened a little on the kerb, waiting for Durtnall's van to pass. A charming woman, Scrope Purvis thought her (knowing her as one does know people who live next door to one in Westminster); a touch of the bird about her, of the jay, blue-green, light, vivacious, though she was over fifty, and grown very white since her illness. There she perched, never seeing him, waiting to cross, very upright...."
Woolf, Virginia (2012-06-06). Mrs. Dalloway (Illustrated Edition) (p. 2). Dead Dodo Vintage. Kindle Edition.
Probably last read this in 1999, with a f2f group, along with Michael Cunningham's The Hours, which was based on V.W.'s style and M.D. May have revisited part of it briefly sometime since.
(Jim -- I hope passages from the text are okay here. Let me/us know, please. P.S., liked your mash-up poem.)

I wouldn't try too hard to decipher every thought on your first pass through the book. Aba..."
This is good advice!! I definitely enjoyed humming along without too much concern for who was narrating each line. Somehow it all works out and the effect is lyrical.

Coming back to it, I know that must have been the way I read M.D. the first time! And I did like it then -- more than our companion piece. Jen, I like your choice of words: "lyrical."


Casceil -- and to now guess that it isn't his own name on the truck he's driving!? :-) (I do still want to know about "Bourton" on the opening page, but I'll be patient.)

Hmmm! Okay, that's possible, too. I've not (yet?) spotted the evidence to discern between our readings, Casceil -- other than it was not his name on the truck and Purvis does live nearby. But this is getting bogged in the minutiae of craft and ignoring the flow -- sorry.
Lily wrote: "Casceil wrote: "I don't think Purvis was driving. I think he was standing nearby."
Hmmm! Okay, that's possible, too. I've not (yet?) spotted the evidence to discern between our readings, Cascei..."
This kind of ambiguity exists throughout the text. The fact that we don't know for certain if Scope Purvis was driving or standing nearby is reflected often with characters trying to recall names and events and not being certain exactly who is who, many times switching to a pronoun when the name would not come - in essence, letting go of details and letting life flow. To give meaning to every observed detail would lead to madness and inertia - much like what Septimus experiences sitting on a bench in the park. To make it through life - and this book - we are forced to let go and let things flow...
All that being said, the two important bits of info in that passage are her comparison to a bird, which, along with trees, women are often compared to, and, her appearance after recovering from her illness.
Generally, I don't like to make assumptions about how the author's personal life affects their work, but with Woolf, this is unavoidable given her well documented struggles with mental health problems. I couldn't help but see Septimus as a representation of that aspect of her life - her struggles with depression, her feelings about doctors and asylums, and even the fleeting moment where Septimus believes the birds are speaking to him in Greek, which is apparently something that Woolf herself experienced. Woolf was a deep thinker and intellectual and it is only logical that she would have examined her own condition and its effects. I'll stop this thought here, but do take a look at some of the biographical info about her life when time permits.
Hmmm! Okay, that's possible, too. I've not (yet?) spotted the evidence to discern between our readings, Cascei..."
This kind of ambiguity exists throughout the text. The fact that we don't know for certain if Scope Purvis was driving or standing nearby is reflected often with characters trying to recall names and events and not being certain exactly who is who, many times switching to a pronoun when the name would not come - in essence, letting go of details and letting life flow. To give meaning to every observed detail would lead to madness and inertia - much like what Septimus experiences sitting on a bench in the park. To make it through life - and this book - we are forced to let go and let things flow...
All that being said, the two important bits of info in that passage are her comparison to a bird, which, along with trees, women are often compared to, and, her appearance after recovering from her illness.
Generally, I don't like to make assumptions about how the author's personal life affects their work, but with Woolf, this is unavoidable given her well documented struggles with mental health problems. I couldn't help but see Septimus as a representation of that aspect of her life - her struggles with depression, her feelings about doctors and asylums, and even the fleeting moment where Septimus believes the birds are speaking to him in Greek, which is apparently something that Woolf herself experienced. Woolf was a deep thinker and intellectual and it is only logical that she would have examined her own condition and its effects. I'll stop this thought here, but do take a look at some of the biographical info about her life when time permits.
Ashley wrote: "It also, speaking of English Teachers, makes me think of bad writing. And I think it would be foolish to say Woolf invented this form, because well I think the history of both storytelling and punctuation might have something to say about that. I say this because before I'd read any Woolf, I saw Evelyn Waugh write her off as a moron and/or charlatan in a TV interview. It certainly does make me think about bad writing. And about the difficulty of editing such a manuscript. And about starting sentences with 'And.'.."
First, screw Evelyn Waugh and the horse he rode in on... (I feel better now, thank you)
With the contemporary interest in psychology stirred up by the work of William James and Sigmund Freud, the work of Proust, Joyce, Faulkner, and Woolf placed memory, consciousness, and the workings of the mind at the forefront of their formal experimentation. The "bad writing" was their attempt to represent these processes of the mind. The "Benjy" section of The Sound and the Fury is a great example of this experimentation with form and is certainly a major preoccupation of modernist writers and later, the surrealists of Paris, especially those associated with Breton.
Also, Dorothy Richardson is credited with developing the "stream of consciousness" style, but Woolf really grabbed the ball and ran with it...
First, screw Evelyn Waugh and the horse he rode in on... (I feel better now, thank you)
With the contemporary interest in psychology stirred up by the work of William James and Sigmund Freud, the work of Proust, Joyce, Faulkner, and Woolf placed memory, consciousness, and the workings of the mind at the forefront of their formal experimentation. The "bad writing" was their attempt to represent these processes of the mind. The "Benjy" section of The Sound and the Fury is a great example of this experimentation with form and is certainly a major preoccupation of modernist writers and later, the surrealists of Paris, especially those associated with Breton.
Also, Dorothy Richardson is credited with developing the "stream of consciousness" style, but Woolf really grabbed the ball and ran with it...

Melissa (ladybug) wrote: "I am only about 33 pages into the book, but have found it to be a little better than the half dozen times I have tried to read it before. :) I am struck by how Septimus is unable to find help from..."
It seems to be a 20th century trend that countries don't want to acknowledge the stress-related problems suffered by veterans. Validating Septimus's troubles would be an admission that war and killing cause wounds beyond the physical. Sad, really, but so is war.
It seems to be a 20th century trend that countries don't want to acknowledge the stress-related problems suffered by veterans. Validating Septimus's troubles would be an admission that war and killing cause wounds beyond the physical. Sad, really, but so is war.


Yes, appreciate the observations, Alex, and yet one of the things I noticed today is how VW sometimes seems to use change in SOC's as more traditional authorial transitions, with perhaps an humorous agent between, as when the little girl Elise facilitates the change in focus from Peter Walsh to Septimus's wife Lucrezia by running into her legs. (p. 65 in HBC pb)
I had a few questions I may not be able to resolve about this charming vignette -- the text says "the elderly nurse knitted over the sleeping baby," yet little Elise is picking up pebbles for the nursery mantel collection created with her brother. How many children are with the nurse in Regent Park: three, two, or only one? Of course, the answer probably doesn't matter to the story, but it may say something about this type of storytelling and its rules, or manipulation thereof, about relationships to reality.
Perhaps more interesting is what VW does with the interlude where Peter is snoring. That comes across to me as almost a bit of Greek chorus, touching the concerns of the populace among whom the actors are living their lives. But that may be a melodramatic and off-base interpretation.
Finally, in this passage, I was struck by the juxtaposition of Peter's and I'll say Septimus's stories, but maybe Peter's and Rezia's.




I'm appreciating everyone's thoughts and observations!

I finished this book earlier this afternoon – my favorite aspect of it are the outdoor scenes, where this is this sense of direction with the narrative voices. It’s like the third person omniscient voice is moving through the crowds, jumping in and out of the minds of those passing by, but also being distracted by the same things as the crowds (such as the car in the opening pages). So you end up with this jumble of voices, but it’s all propelled in certain directions, and really feels like your walking down a London street.
And, just caught up on reading this thread:
Jen wrote: "The trees are an interesting metaphor and I'd love to hear other interpretations. Again, I recall it being Clarissa and Septimus who are particularly drawn to them and hold them in a sacred regard. Perhaps because trees are grounded / deeply rooted and live a solitary existence - the ideal, to be admired?"
I came away with the focus on the trees being pretty central to Clarissa and Septimus as well – though there is at least one passage where Elizabeth is compared to a tree – and there seems to be some notion of the soul being tied into the tree images – “her soul rustled” “down in the depths of that leaf-encumbered forest, the soul” – or sometimes just the notion of self – “And the leaves being connected by millions of fibres with his own body”. Not that I know what any of it means, but it’s interesting how frequently trees show up in the narrative.
Suzanne wrote: "The observation about tree/women references is cool. I always notice how flowers appear (and seem to play a symbolic role) throughout."
One of the things I liked with the flower imagery is that there is this sheer volume of flowers referenced throughout the book, but, when they are mentioned in relation to Richard and Hugh – both characters representing a very certain class, a class in the book that is becoming antiquated and (possibly) obsolete – there are only roses and carnations, two very safe, very traditional choices of flowers.
And, just caught up on reading this thread:
Jen wrote: "The trees are an interesting metaphor and I'd love to hear other interpretations. Again, I recall it being Clarissa and Septimus who are particularly drawn to them and hold them in a sacred regard. Perhaps because trees are grounded / deeply rooted and live a solitary existence - the ideal, to be admired?"
I came away with the focus on the trees being pretty central to Clarissa and Septimus as well – though there is at least one passage where Elizabeth is compared to a tree – and there seems to be some notion of the soul being tied into the tree images – “her soul rustled” “down in the depths of that leaf-encumbered forest, the soul” – or sometimes just the notion of self – “And the leaves being connected by millions of fibres with his own body”. Not that I know what any of it means, but it’s interesting how frequently trees show up in the narrative.
Suzanne wrote: "The observation about tree/women references is cool. I always notice how flowers appear (and seem to play a symbolic role) throughout."
One of the things I liked with the flower imagery is that there is this sheer volume of flowers referenced throughout the book, but, when they are mentioned in relation to Richard and Hugh – both characters representing a very certain class, a class in the book that is becoming antiquated and (possibly) obsolete – there are only roses and carnations, two very safe, very traditional choices of flowers.
Jaye wrote: "Would that choice of narrative have been viewed as revolutionary or in vogue?.."
Revolutionary and avante garde among artists. I haven't read any critics from that era, but I imagine some would have found the work offensively incoherent... Some looked at Ulysses as pornographic, FWIW.
Much of the art and literature of the 1920's was a reaction to the horror of the Great War and its aftermath, and so the confusion and discord and chaos of the times are mirrored in the work.
Revolutionary and avante garde among artists. I haven't read any critics from that era, but I imagine some would have found the work offensively incoherent... Some looked at Ulysses as pornographic, FWIW.
Much of the art and literature of the 1920's was a reaction to the horror of the Great War and its aftermath, and so the confusion and discord and chaos of the times are mirrored in the work.


I wonder if this style would be so unfamiliar to the experts. To me it's similar to poetry; the reader is exposed to a number of images and he/she has to consolidate the images to determine how they fit the story.


Also, what does everyone think about the references to ancient history and the Roman invasion? These seemed to stand out in sharp relief when juxtaposed to the jolting sounds and impressions of the rare motor car and Septimus's war recollections.


Tia -- Jim @24 mentions VW reported hearing the birds speak Greek, as happens for Septimus here. I felt a foreshadowing of VW's note that she left to her husband, absolving him of any blame and assuring him that he had provided for her to have what happiness she had experienced. But, it seems to me that we must remember that this was written ~16 years before VW's demise and in those ensuing years she produced several other master works, including To the Lighthouse, Orlando, A Room of One's Own, and Waves.

For example hearing the birds speak Greek is possible, while unlikely, but visually perceiving Evans somewhat less so. Woolf however, did experience visual hallucinations prior to writing MD, if memory serves, of her dead mother.
This is extremely understandable though, considering not only the author writing from her own experiences, but in that the subject matter was so little understood, partly why she was exploring it. Honestly we've only begun to even try to in the past 10 years... Read about the effects of the therapies used on Vietnam vets for a horror story, or imagine the societal neglect of mental health we gave to WW2 vets. No matter how off-target or accurate her portrayal, to my mind she did a great service for helping even make it part of the thinking of the time.
Also, in case there's even one of you still reading this, if you're interested in the topic, there's an excellent book, I believe "surviving survival".. When I next sit at a device not my phone, I'll post the link.
Edit: Surviving Survival: The Art and Science of Resilience, by Laurence Gonzales, which I recommend highly, btw.
/end preaching.

Goethe called flowers the soul expression of the plant, and though Virginia Woolf may not necessarily have read Goethe, it feels to me that she’s interested in the soul or psychological states of her characters. References to trees may evoke grounding/anchorage for the reader, the writer, the self in general (the reference seems to have caught the attention of a few readers in any case). We’re in the minds of the characters and we gain an intimacy with their thought fragments – thought flitting from one to another, or the way the thought flows out from one character’s mind to another, that it’s chaotic and at times it can become intolerable – particularly in the mind of Septimus, who has lost the capacity to feel and is not him self. He’s lost that centre that he can call a self (however illusory the idea of a ‘self’ may be). The soul or mind is not a unified whole but there must be something to keep the self from falling apart. What binds the parts together? Woolf is said to have been interested in what keeps the self together because of her own challenges with mental illness. How are Mrs Dalloway and Septimus different – Dalloway is planning a party while Septimus plans to kill himself? Clarissa has found ways to keep her self from falling apart.

Clearly Clarissa exhibits signs of depression, whether as design of the character or bled over from it's author, but (page numbers from my edition, obviously, mileage varies..) by pg. 3, something awful..happen, pg. 8, dangerous to live even one day. There's even a chilling reference to death via wading early on.
There's some Clarissa/Septimus things I find fascinating, but they come later. Since many people sound like they're within the first 30-50 pages or so, I'll abstain for now, limiting myself to things from the first 15 or so.

Clearly Clarissa exhibits signs of depression, whether ..."
I would not have chosen shy to describe Clarissa. The novel opens with an assertion of her will, and I wouldn’t dismiss the ordinariness of it (i.e. getting the flowers). She is the ‘very temper of her house’. Her servants like her and they enable her to be kind and appreciate all the good in her life. Though of course that kindness does not extend towards the educated and independent history teacher Miss Kilman, who would like to bring Clarissa to her knees. Woolf is said to have been frightened of her cook Nellie but should we confuse Clarissa with Virginia?
Joni wrote: "Though of course that kindness does not extend towards the educated and independent history teacher Miss Kilman, who would like to bring Clarissa to her knees...."
Maybe more like Miss Kilman would like to go down on her knees for Elizabeth...
At first, I couldn't understand why Clarissa was so disturbed by Miss Kilman, but little by little it seems that the religious issue is a smokescreen for another fear - that Miss Kilman might seduce Elizabeth in a way similar to Sally Seton's kinda-seduction of Clarissa when they were young women. Wanting the best for her daughter, Clarissa didn't want Elizabeth to stray from the proscribed paths of marriage, family, position, but as Woolf writes the scenes, you have to peer beneath the surface complaints to connect the dots. A particularly genius scene is when Woolf has Elizabeth "get on board the bus" without a thought for Miss Kilman's barely contained desire.
Maybe more like Miss Kilman would like to go down on her knees for Elizabeth...
At first, I couldn't understand why Clarissa was so disturbed by Miss Kilman, but little by little it seems that the religious issue is a smokescreen for another fear - that Miss Kilman might seduce Elizabeth in a way similar to Sally Seton's kinda-seduction of Clarissa when they were young women. Wanting the best for her daughter, Clarissa didn't want Elizabeth to stray from the proscribed paths of marriage, family, position, but as Woolf writes the scenes, you have to peer beneath the surface complaints to connect the dots. A particularly genius scene is when Woolf has Elizabeth "get on board the bus" without a thought for Miss Kilman's barely contained desire.



Although Virginia Woolf gets compared to Joyce there is one big difference: I get the feeling that Joyce is trying to bamboozle the reader whereas Woolf is trying to enlighten the reader. I particularly like the shifting points-of-view; again Woolf gives clues to the reader to guide us through the maze.
Years ago I read my first Woolf novel, The Voyage Out and loved it but the only thing I can remember about it was the shifting points-of-view. As 'The Voyage Out' was published in 1915 is it possible that the Joyce-Woolf influence could have been a two-way process?


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Stream of consciousness more like a rushing river, with sights and sounds and thoughts public and private flowing freely through the streets and minds of mid-June London. Woolf takes us on a whitewater rafting trip with, thankfully, the occasional eddy to give us a breather and a bit of back-story. Then and now, now and then; in the moment, but not exactly; characters rush in and out of focus, some with names, others without, bumping and rushing and pausing and… well, you get the idea.
What is this mad, mid-June day in London all about? Possibly a response to an earlier mad, mid-June day in Dublin?
Septimus Warren Smith is suffering from Shell Shock. How does his story fit in with the rest of the book?
Elizabeth Dalloway is described several times as having an “oriental” look. Why is this detail mentioned so often?
Women are repeatedly compared to trees. Whadupwitdat?
(*apologies to Julie Andrews and The Grinch.)