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Diana's This will be my first Ella Dominguez read!
Can't wait...


♥Trish♥ Same here! Super psyched!


Ang C ready girl's??!


message 4: by Diana's (last edited Jan 03, 2014 05:41PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Diana's Ohh Yes!!! Here's to this lovely disclosure: Warning: Contains detailed sexual encounters, BDSM themes, oral, anal, ménage and profanity. Not for the closed-minded, prudish, sexually inhibited, easily offended, or faint-hearted..Love it when I see them...HEHEHE


♥Trish♥ Our kinda read.


♥Trish♥ I want to be that snowflake


Diana's Me too, Me too hahahha


Diana's OK is it just me or does Ella have a fetish with the letter S?
Sawyer
Serena
Sonya
Sarah
Snowflake
hummm just wondering =0)


♥Trish♥ BWAHAHAHA!!! I didn't notice


message 10: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy Sorry I'm late. I'm starting now!


Ang C I noticed the "s" fetish and I'm vexed (jk) hard time keeping the names straight


♥Trish♥ That chic is nuts to turn that down!


message 13: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy He's been studying Domology, is that really a word?? I guess I learned something new tonight!


message 14: by Ella (last edited Jan 03, 2014 08:00PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez Its funny you noticed the S thing. A beta reader brought it up, too. I didnt even realize I had done it. I was like, DOH! Or wait, I means DOH's! ;) and i totally made up Domology. :D


Ang C party what chick? turn what down?


Ang C *patty not party. I'm at 16%


Ang C glass dildo ;)


message 18: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy A munch? That *does* sound dirty! LOL!


message 19: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy I am loving "snowflake" as a term of endearment. So cute! And I've never heard it used before.


Diana's LOL..
Yeup if your talking about Sonya Trish..
And I was going to Google Domology LOL. I thought it was neat~
I'm at 28% and Liking so far.. has an erotic but humorous undertone


Diana's ~Ang~ wrote: "glass dildo ;)"

pink, cold, glass dildo (ooh yea)


♥Trish♥ I love that term 2! :) I'm loving the male lead in this book

Ang (view spoiler)


message 23: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy Sorry, I fell asleep early last night :) The weather here is dreadful, so I will be staying inside and reading all day! I'm at 17% and I really like Sarah. Not a big fan of Sonya though.


♥Trish♥ Same here Amy.... I'll be reading :)

I can't imagine how cold it is there.......BBBBBRRRRRRR!!


message 25: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy Ella, I just saw on your author page that you are "in Among the cornstalks and Huskers , The United States"... Where do you live? I'm in Omaha :)


message 26: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez Amy wrote: "Ella, I just saw on your author page that you are "in Among the cornstalks and Huskers , The United States"... Where do you live? I'm in Omaha :)"

Two hours northwest. :) I lived in Omaha for 15 years and go there often as my mother lives there.


Ang C now there's a chick nicknamed Sam. lmao. Ella, we are going to investigate your obsession with the letter 'S' ;)


message 28: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez ~Ang~ wrote: "now there's a chick nicknamed Sam. lmao. Ella, we are going to investigate your obsession with the letter 'S' ;)"

PerhapS itS SenSual, curvy and Sexy Shape of it. Or the way it rollS off my tongue. ItS juSSSt SSSuch a fantaSSStic letter. :p


Ang C hey guys. I'm in the dungeon with a bullwhip. where you be?


message 30: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy I'm at Kerian's estate for the weekend. (61%) Things just got a little more complicated for Sawyer ;)


message 31: by Flor (new)

Flor hey girls, I'm a little curious here. Can this be read as a stand-alone?


message 32: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy It can be read as a stand alone, but there are some spoilers as to what happens in The Art of D/s. I don't know if that's a big deal. Personally, I wouldn't let that stop me from reading this one.


message 33: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez Just when I thought I was done... I've decided to add a few more scenes to Becoming Sir since it feels like something is missing. I'm not sure what. I wanted Sawyer to be a bad arse and I'm just not feeling it. Thoughts?


Ang C Ella check it email for my thoughts :)


Ang C *your


Diana's I read as a stand alone and I was able to follow along just fine.. I now want to read about Dylan and Isa!


message 37: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez Diana wrote: "I read as a stand alone and I was able to follow along just fine.. I now want to read about Dylan and Isa!"

Thanks for sharing. I was concerned about that. :)


message 38: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez ~Ang~ wrote: "Ella check it email for my thoughts :)"

Thank you!


Diana's Ella wrote: "~Ang~ wrote: "now there's a chick nicknamed Sam. lmao. Ella, we are going to investigate your obsession with the letter 'S' ;)"

PerhapS itS SenSual, curvy and Sexy Shape of it. Or the way it rol..."


LMAO!!!


♥Trish♥ E I PM'ed you :)


Diana's I also sent my thoughts via email =0)


message 42: by Ella (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ella Dominguez ♥Trish♥ wrote: "E I PM'ed you :)"

I haven't received your PM, but I would like your input as I'm going to be adding some things tonight.

Thanks everyone for being so honest, its exactly what I need. Beta readers tend to be very hearts & flowers and all praise, but I need the hard stuff to help me write better. This particular round of beta readers was good for that and they forced me to add lots of things I never would've thought of. So again - THANK YOU for the feedback and of course for taking the time to read and review my work.

I'd be happy to send each of you the official version once it's published on the 10th.

xxElla


♥Trish♥ Awwww Ella thank you :) oxox


♥Trish♥ I resent the PM :)


Diana's Awesome...thank you :0)
Xoxoxo


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