Initiates Creation

[Ashley]

NAME:Dylan matthew evans
GENDER:male
APPEARANCE: Dylan is 6'7 inches tall and has a lean and muscular figure.he has deep set blue eyes often shadowed and dark brown hair covering his forehead.he has angular and wide cheekbones and has a killer smirk.he prefers dull colours for choice of attire like black and grey.he has a tattoo of a samoan design covering his left arm and part of his chest.he has his right ear pierced and prefers black and red sneakers.

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PERSONALITY: Dylan has a rather brooding personality and comes off a little shy at making friends.His extremely skilled in the field of taekwondo and is a pretty dense fighter.he prefers the company of silent people and never associates himself with famous talk.he is rarely noticed by his peers as he prefers walking in the shadows.fighting is his passion,it delivers strength and power to his body.he is a little arrogant and doesnt like people bossing over him or commanding him.he can easily read people by their faces and see's them in a different light.

HISTORY:Dylan's parents mitchell and rebecca evans belong to the faction erudite and have committed their lifetime to their faction. dylan knows for sure he will choose erudite,though he had wanted to be in dauntless before.he is the only child and has little trouble with his dad now and then over his interest in fighting because his dad feels he should be learning something belonging to the virtue of intelligence and wisdom over any other ,but otherwise they all get along well.he has a lot of cousins in candor and meets up with them regularly for training in taekwondo. his daily life revolves around books and training.he is extremely knowledgeable and strives with curiosity.the only thing he doesn't like about his faction is that they have to wear blue the colour he hates all the time and the glasses even though he has perfect vision.he is currently working on a research on the simulation serum and he hopes to improve the field of technology in the faction.
current faction:erudite
dylan does not want to leave erudite as his family is there.he is not divergent

[Ashley]

i have edited it,can you please tell me what else is missing....

[Ashley]

how about it now?

[Ashley]

thankx:)

[Dibzee]

Name:Dylaine Blakewood
Gender:Female

Appearance:http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20...
Her standard dressing is a Turtle neck top,and black jeans with flat shoes and she always wears colours of blue.

Personality: Dylaine is a tough girl and she has always been independent throughout her life.As a child her parents had always taught her to be practical.Although she might look like someone that spends most of the time indoors just reading,she is quite a rebel and loves outdoors.She likes pushing her limits and she likes to lead than being led.She also is sarcastic and likes socializing,but she refrains from spending a lot of time outdoors,having long conversations about pointless or entertaining stuff with her neighbours as her family expects her to learn new things and do something productive.

History:
Her family are Erudites. Her father, Brian Blakewood is a famous doctor and her mother,Bethanny Blakewood is a high-school teacher. Both of them spend most of their time tending to people so she always felt lonely in her house,ever since she was small.This is one reason why she grew up to be highly independent as she was taught to do all her chores on her own.Being a single child her parents have quite pampered her.But she was never allowed to do what she liked and she had always worked tirelessly hard to satisfy her parent's wishes and make them proud.They always expected her to be perfect and show her best in her tests and hence at a very young age, books and periodicals became her world.Therefore liberation and being able to socialize with the outside world became her ultimate dream.

Current Faction:Erudite

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why:
She secretly wants to leave her faction as she likes a rebellious approach to life rather a practical one.She wants to do her things her way and not be latched on to the hopes of her parents.(before the aptitude test)

Divergent-Yes

[Warren]

Name: Nicole Fairchild
Gender: Female
Appearance: Nicole has long, slightly wavy brown hair, usually pulled into a high bun. She has bright blue eyes and a nose which is usually turned up
Personality: Nicole is a brilliant, straight A student, but has always had a more dark, and dangerous side. She has always kept this side hidden, but it will come out in a flash if needed. She is not afraid of protecting herself or anyone around her, and uses the underestimations about her to her advantage.
History: Nicole is a sixth-generation pure-bred Erudite. Her ancestors have always stayed in Erudite, *improving* the faction system. Her grandparents were on the higher end of Erudite, giving her parents a chance to work with Jeanine.
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on Leaving/Staying in Faction: However much Nicole loves Erudite and her parents, she know that her brave side is growing and she belongs in Dauntless. She plans on switching to Dauntless, but not telling her parents, for they would strongly disapprove.
Divergent: Yes! Nicole is, if you haven't picked up, Divergent. She will probably get both Erudite and Dauntless as answers on her Aptitude test.

[Anna Beth]

Name: Danielle Josephine Freebush (Dani)
Gender:Female
Appearance:
5'7"
140 lbs
Strawberry blonde hair with auburn low lights
Freckles
Big, round, deep green eyes
Straight pearly whites
High cheek bones
Personality:She is incredibly sarcastic, sassy, witty, and independent. She is also the smartest girl in Amity, and is looked down upon for being intelligent. She questions everything and is very curious, and has an opinion on EVERY subject given. She is always smiling and is willing to lend a helping hand to anyone in need, but has a problem with needy people. She stands up for others, but believes that they must learn to defend themselves. She is very passionate and loving, but she is skeptical when it comes to trusting people and letting them into her heart. She is strong and brave, and pursues what she wants.
History: Her grandfather on her mother's side transferred to Amity from Erudite after catching a glimpse of the corruption that has become evident within the faction. Her father was a faction transfer from Abnegation and still embodied the beliefs of selflessness, but was seeking an escape from the oppression of the Abnegation. Her family insists on calling her Danielle, but Dani has always been a tomboy, and chose playing banjo and climbing trees over making flower bracelets with the other girls. She has always felt as if she didn't belong with Amity, and has had a problem with the "peace" serum since day 1. She doesn't like drugs, and definitely doesn't appreciate happy juice being pumped in through her water. She loves her family, but doesn't appreciate being treated like a child and having information hidden from her. Mostly, she has always wondered what it would be like to live farther inside of the fence, and to be able to speak freely without fearing how it would affect someone's feelings.
Current Faction:Amity
Thoughts on Staying: She would love nothing more than to stay with her familyt, but she knows that she can't be happy with the simple Amity life. The only thing that is swaying her decision is a young boy that she has loved for the past 3 years, but he is a die-hard Amity and she knows that he won't leave the faction even for her. So, if she follows her heart, she will probably be forced to leave the faction.
Divergent: Yes

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Beth, Dani is approved,
proceed to the aptitude test

[Warren]

Name: Nicole Fairchild ( She will change her name to Nikky if she switches to Dauntless)
Gender: Female
Appearance: Nicole has long, slightly wavy brown hair. She has startling blue eyes, and a nose that is always upturned.
Personality: Nicole is a brilliant straight A student, but has a darker, more dangerous side. She keeps this side hidden, but is not afraid to bring that out to keep herself and people around her safe.
History: Nicole is a pure bred Erudite. She was raised believing one of her ancestors was one of the original Erudite members. Her grandparents were high up in the Erudite systems and friends with Jeanine's parents, making sure that her parents could work with Jeanine. Nicole has always helped her parents with their jobs, generally either shredding papers or organizing them.
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on Leaving/Staying in Faction and Why: Nicole hopes to move to Dauntless on Choosing Day, for she knows her brave side is growing. She plans on not telling her parents about her decision, for they would strongly disapprove.
Divergent: Yes!

[Nicole]

NAME: Amaya
GENDER: female
APPEARENCE: https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/im...
PERSONALITY: she is kind an funny, but if you get her angry or put anyone she loves in danger she knows how to defend herself. She has street smarts that makes up for book smarts, an gets along great with people. She has yet to find true love and is still looking.
HISTORY: Mother was dauntless, father is amity she has one sister named maya who was born into Amity just like herself but she secretly trains for dauntless because that's where she was destine to go.
CURRENT FACTION: Amity
THOUGHTS ON LEAVING THE FACTIONS AND WHY: She tries to follow amity rules but she always had a knack for fighting and knows she does not belong.
DIVERGENT: Slightly

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Name:Alistar
Gender:female
Appearance:http://media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736...
Personality: Alistar is quiet and observant,she doesnt talk to you unless you either talk to her first or you interest her. She has a bit of a temper but she is loyal and caring and very brave.
History:Alistar's parents died when she was quite young. Luckily her parents had close friends whodecided to take her under their wing.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) no
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) yes

[Nicole]

okay mackenzie ill work on it, and post it again! thnx for the feedback!

[Nicole]

NAME: Amaya

GENDER: female

APPEARENCE:https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/im...
standered clothes red dress, gray flats brown curly hair

PERSONALITY:Her friends taught her to be kind and very funny, she tries to fit in with Amity but her heart is with dauntless. she looks sweet an helpful, but dont let her looks fool you, she picks a fight easily and can fight well.she likes going outside her limits and likes to be lead instead of leading.she loves going places with her friends and socializing. She would rather be skydiving then working in amity feilds.

HISTORY: Her mother an father are Amity, her mom, sarah, works in amity feilds along with her father,dylan, they alwaya try to get her to see that amity is a great faction and she should just accept it, but she always wanted to leave her fsmily an join Dauntless. This is why she goes after school every day to watch the Dauntless jump on the trains, and get secret training from a Dauntless about fighting. But she still tried to please her parents and helped out in the Amity feilds, and even started to skip fighting training, but she longs to join Dauntless.

CURRENT FACTION: Amity

THOUGHTS ON LEAVING THE FACTIONS AND WHY: She tries to follow amity rules but she always had a knack for fighting and knows she does not belong.[before aptitude test]

DIVERGENT: Slightly
[P.S i changed the picture of my charector]

[Ricoss]

Name: Alachi Cadence

Gender: Female

Appearance: Alachi has brown hair that she keeps shaved close to her head so that it’s just a stubble, despite what her parents and the community demands. She has grey-green eyes and olive skin. She’s slender and flat chested with long legs. Her height is 5’7”. She has thin lips that make her look serious except when she smiles.

Personality: She has two main sides to her personality. At times she’s very calm and caring, taking feelings into account on decisions. Most people would call her friendly and helpful. When faced with a challenge or a problem she switches. If she finds a situation interesting but dangerous she takes on a somewhat detached attitude, becoming very calculating and emotionless. She likes danger because she finds life in her faction boring and sedentary. Anything that compromises her safety is thrilling to her, though when she’s caring she doesn’t like to risk other’s lives.

History: Her mother was born Abnegation but her father transferred from Amity. Both of them are incredibly calm, almost impossible to upset. It bothers her, and she is bored by most of her faction. She is friendly with many people but isn’t really close to anyone. For a little while she was friends with a Factionless boy, who had failed the Dauntless initiation. His stories were what first got her interested in Dauntless. After he left, she found that she was no longer content in her calm faction.

Current Faction: Abnegation

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She wants to leave her faction for Dauntless so that she can have the danger. Without danger she doesn’t feel like she’s alive. Even though she can behave like her parents and the rest of her faction she prefers to be courageous and loud. Protecting people appeals to her more than serving them.

Divergent: Yes.

[Nicole]

okay, i fixed my profile for my character! tell me if its okay....

[Ricoss]

Mackenzie wrote: "Nicole- your character is approved!

Ricoss- Please add more to history!"

Okay. I edited it.

[[deleted user]]

Name: Fairie(Faye) June Flitters
Gender: Female/Feminine
Appearance: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=b...
Personality: Fairie is very independent and quiet, but once you get to know her you'll realize that she rarely shuts up, because she always has something to say and she doesn't care what other people think when she says it. She is almost always looking for some person to fight in initiation and loves to do hand-on-hand combat. She is completely in love with the idea of love, and believes that every person has that one who was meant to be with them. Fairie is one of those girls that falls in love pretty easily and is not one to make the first move.
History: Fairie was born in Erudite, so of course she had a thing for reading and studying. And that's what she did, she studied fighting and hand-on-hand combat and any kind of techniques in fighting that she should know. Her father would always help her train in the line of fighting and she would almost always beat him even when he wasn't being easy on him. When her father died Fairie was completely torn apart and she didn't even look at her mother for almost a year, let alone speak to her. It took a long time but eventually the pain from her fathers death did fade and she was able to rebuild the relationship with her mother.
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Faye wants to go to Dauntless because she has heard about how there is a lot of fighting and training in that faction.
Divergent: Yes

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Macy, Cassidy needs more personlaity, history and appearance
Ivy, Fairie needs more history and personality

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Ricoss your character is approved!

[[deleted user]]

Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "Macy, Cassidy needs more personlaity, history and appearance
Ivy, Fairie needs more history and personality"

Better?

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Ivy, your character is approved
Macy, slightly more history

[Madison]

*sorry it's kind of short...*


Name: Alyx Sara doom

Gender: female

Appearance: http://i41.tinypic.com/2hzmh43.jpg

Personality: she is very nice and sweet and love nature but has a very short temper, she's pretty smart, considering she is erudite.

History: well she hasn't always been the I guess you could say the sharpest tool in the shed but she is sharper than others it's just not what she wants to be, and she isn't who her parents want her to be who are both have been erudite since they were born. She is very honest and doesn't lie much unless it is to protect someone from being hurt.

Current faction: erudite.

Thoughts on leaving faction and why: like it says in history it isn't what she wants to be or be like. It isn't her future.

Divergent: yes.

[Madison]

Can someone approve this please? Sorry to be such a nag.

[Madison]

Hello?

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Macy, Cassidy is approved
Madison, Alyx needs more personality and history, sorry for the wait

[Madison]

It's okay. And I will fix it.

[Madison]

Name: Alyx Sara doom

Gender: female

Appearance: http://i41.tinypic.com/2hzmh43.jpg

Personality: she is very nice and sweet and loves nature but has a very short temper, she's pretty smart, considering she is erudite. She doesn't like showing off she's smart because she feels rude, and some people call her a know it all but that's just how she is. She can be a bit daring sometimes but not really. Her short temper is definalty a fatal flaw in her but she can't help it. She has no patience at all.

History: well she hasn't always been the I guess you could say the sharpest tool in the shed but she is sharper than others it's just not what she wants to be, and she isn't who her parents want her to be who are both have been erudite since they were born. She is very honest and doesn't lie much unless it is to protect someone from being hurt. Her brother left two years ago and went to dauntless but she's afraid if she leaves her parents are going to get a bad reputation. They would still have her little sister, but she already knew her sister was gonna go to candor or amity. She really wants to go to amity but she also wants to be with her brother in dauntless.

Current faction: erudite.

Thoughts on leaving faction and why: like it says in history it isn't what she wants to be or be like. It isn't her future.

Divergent: yes.


Is this better or do I need more

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

Madison, personality is okay, but could you make the history more concise and worded a bit less confusingly???
if you don't know what I mean just say

[Madison]

Wait so I know what's confusing about it what part do you not get?

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

the first bit, it sounds a bit long, and you need moe i history more about her childhood

[Madison]

Okay thanks

[DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging]

its okay :P

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Name: Blake Hawthorne
Gender: Male
Appearance: [image error]Tall and spindly, skinny with lean muscles, he has a head of wavy, messy black hair, a slightly sharp face with a slightly big nose, thick eyelashes and stormy gray eyes. He also has pale skin, usually seen with a cigarette in his mouth.
Personality: He’s pretty mellow, but with a disdainful look on life. Everything’s a drag for him. His fight or flight response leans heavily towards fight, believing that if someone wants to ruin his day, he might as well put them in their place. He’s rather dark and cynical, often remarking creepy thoughts or insulting people even when he isn’t trying to. He’s not nice or mean, really his whole life is more of a gray area between one thing and another. But he has fast reflexes, a sharp eye, and can hang out just like any other teenager. He also has a bad smoking habit, and gets a bit temper mental when people try to stop him from smoking.
History: Blake had an average life. He grew up in Candor, his father a lawyer, his mother staying at home to be a housewife. He has a little sister named Carol and a dog he named Buffy, a female King Charles Spaniard. His father was a stern, no nonsense man, who pushed Blake to be perfect. His mother was a frail woman who did everything his father said. Blake, of course, had to be rebellious. He smoked, he wore his clothes always slightly rumpled, he always had his hair messy. He lied constantly, skipped school, used a pocket knife to carve into the maple dining table. Things that his parents didn’t like. By the time he reached sixteen, his dad practically was telling him to choose another faction, that he didn’t belong in Candor, and that’s exactly what he intends to do.
Current Faction: Candor.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He’s leaving. He already knows it. He just needs to decide where to go, but that isn’t much of a hard choice. To him, it’s simple. He doesn’t belong in Candor. He doesn’t like Candor. Why stay?
Divergent: No.

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Here's Blake

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Darn it the image won't work

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Oh well. I have more coming. I'm doing two for each faction, if that's okay.

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My character pics will be in my library

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Name: Allison Jagger
Gender: Female
Appearance: Average height and slightly curvey, she’s petite and although she looks weak, growing up in Dauntless gave her a lot of lean muscle. She has nice hips and b-cup breasts. She used to have dark hair but she dyed it blonde, a very light blonde that is almost white, though occasionally she dyes the tips a different color like pink, purple, or blue. It’s cut to her neck in a bob, always free and often she pushes her long bangs back from one side to another, or pushes her hair behind her ears. She has beautiful big blue eyes, and thick black eyelashes, often gunked up with eyeliner and mascara. She usually wears lipgloss or lipstick to light up her face, her trademark style along with edgy, model like clothes. She doesn’t have any tattoos yet, wanting to wait until after her choosing ceremony.
Personality: For a pretty girl, she packs a lot of punch in her personality alone. Loud, smart mouthed, proud, stubborn, daring, brave. She’s a firecracker waiting to explode. She listens to music too loud, she’s always the first wanting to be Dauntless brave, and if someone of authority says anything to her, she’ll talk right back to them regardless of what the consequences are. She stands up for what she believes and she doesn’t let anyone walk over her. She’s spunky and dominant without being arrogant or obnoxious. She is sassy and playful too, and quite clever, often scheming to sneak away from the compound and set up a late night war game with the other initiates.
History: She grew up Dauntless proud. With two older brothers, she had her hands full. Her dad died from a skyline malfunction when Allison was eight, and her mom is a working guard who isn’t at home often. Two brothers stayed in Dauntless, their names are Luke and Riley. She’s really close to her brothers, and they’re really protective of her. She’s always been the princess of her family, and if she wasn’t Dauntless she would be pampered, but Dauntless kids never get pampered, it’s not in their nature. Instead she learned to fight and hold her own with the best of them. She loves her family, and her life, not overly girly and liking to hang with the guys, but she can be girly too.
Current Faction: Dauntless, of course.
Thoughts on leaving the faction or staying and why: She knows she wants to stay. She fits in, she has her family, she doesn’t fit in anywhere else. She wants to live a Dauntless life, she couldn’t imagine it any other way.
Divergent: Slightly, she has a few traits that aren’t very Dauntless, she’s close in her generation to being Divergent but unfortunately, not yet.

[Dae]

Blake

(doing it for summer)

[Dae]

Allison

[Dae]

Ball of floof

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Thanks Dae. The girl is Allison, the boy is Blake, and the puppy is Buffy, Blake's dog.

[Dae]

it says their names. right there. above their pics.

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Name: Stephanie Wilkins
Gender: Female
Appearance: She’s rocking the average nerdy girl look. Her body is plain, skinny and not muscled, long arms and long legs, too tall for her own good at 5’9. She has a small A-cup and no hips, so her body isn’t very sexually attractive, though she is pretty in her own way. She has olive skin that is too pale most of the time, and a rats nest of brown/ginger hair that she keeps in a ponytail, braid, or bun. She has big green eyes that are too big for her face, but they seem small behind her big, black framed nerd glasses. Her eyesight is terrible, take away her glasses and she’s as blind as a bat. She often wears jeans and t-shirts, sometimes baggy clothes, not really concerned with her appearance, but given the chance to dress up, she’ll be beautiful.
Personality: She’s quirky and upbeat, often trying to get ahead by putting in extra effort. She’s hardworking, dedicated, often giving up sleep and surviving on caffeine. Although caffeine makes her a little testy and stir crazy, so someone should probably stop her after her tenth cup of coffee. She’s quiet but not shy, easily making friends, and if asked about something that interests her, she can talk a mile a minute. She’s really clumsy, easily falling or losing items, sometimes described as scatterbrained. She’s really intelligent though, often thinking in odd ways and coming up with things other people wouldn’t normally think of. She enjoys trivia, crosswords, and things to challenge her, and she can’t stand being bored. She can be a bit highstrung sometimes, and pretty naïve. But otherwise, she’s great. She’s kind too, understanding, from her time in Amity, but she’s always preferred intelligence and she can’t stand how Amity dumbs people down with chemical bread. She avoids eating bread at Amity, which might be why she’s so skinny, since it makes up lots of their food. She’s also bluntly honest, knowing it saves time to be honest rather than lie. Really she’s an open book.
History: Stephanie was born and raised in Amity, the peace loving faction. And while she is kind and happy there, and she loves her parents, she has always known she didn’t quite fit in. Too smart, too idealistic, not content to just sit around singing songs. She doesn’t agree with Amity’s drug use in the bread, thinking it dumbs people down and that’s the only reason they’re so happy. She’d rather be smart and unhappy than happy and clueless. When she was twelve she discovered it by being in the right place, right time, and ever since she refused to eat bread. She kept the happiness, but she also grew in intelligence. Her parents are simple farmers who have always encouraged her to choose what makes her happy, even if it means leaving Amity. So, with an interest in higher learning, she readily approaches the test and choosing ceremony.
Current Faction: Amity
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She wants to leave. She loves Amity and her family, but she knows she can be a better person somewhere else.
Divergent: Yes.

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Name: Peter Donahue
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has styled pale blonde hair with big bangs, and baby blue eyes. He’s short for his age, often being teased for it. He wears big black framed glasses, though they aren’t overly needed, he lied and said he needed them so his parents would let him wear them. He has pale skin, a scrawny body, not overly manly and no facial hair. He’s well groomed, wears good clothes, kind of good looking if you like a boyish boy.
Personality: He’s quiet and meek, not really courageous or brave. He’s not overly truthful, telling little white lies every now and then. He’s kind and modest, fairly selfless but only because he was raised to be. He has a hard time trusting people, since he’s never really had a close friend, and he’s pretty in the closet. He doesn’t like to cause fights so he just stays out of the way, using the flight response rather than fight. He knows that the ones who use wit to stay away from danger usually live longer. He’s really quite intelligent, always having random facts to tell you. Otherwise, his personality is rather average.
History: He grew up a single child. His parents divorced, which is rare for Abnegation, and he lives with his dad. But his dad doesn’t really understand him so they aren’t close. He was quite lonely as a child, never really having any close friends, playing the perfect selfless Abnegation boy with half smiles and polite words. But he wasn’t really content, he kind of was just there, not really living. His favorite moments was when he could sneak a book home and escape, hiding in his room. There he wasn’t bullied or looked down on. He also is fabulously gay, which doesn’t make things easier. He’s the bottom, with his submissive personality, but he’s never found a relationship or guy he liked. He got picked on a lot, mostly.
Current Faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He definitely wants to leave, he just doesn’t know if it’s the right thing to do.
Divergent: No.

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I have more and the pics are in my library (I can't master the pic thing)

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Name: Andrew Grey
Gender: Male
Appearance: He’s quite tall at 6’2 and skinny with some baby fat left in him, looking soft and cuddly. With a head of brown hair, styled bangs in a swoop across his forehead, he’s quite cute. He had big, bushy eyebrows that is mainly hidden under his bangs. He has big lips and a slightly big nose, but otherwise his face is quite good. He also has dull blue eyes that on rare occasions, in the right light, are as bright as the afternoon sky.
Personality: He’s kind of laid back. Quiet, keeps to himself, only really talkative with close friends. He’s polite, sweet, thoughtful. Often he hangs out at home. He’s not the most selfless person in the world, but he tries his best. He often tries but he doesn’t have much enthusiasm. However sometimes he gets really energetic about things, like a little kid in a candy shop, though he tries to keep that on the down low to be respectful to others. He’s kind of shy when it comes to romance, like most Abnegations, he doesn’t quite know how to show affection, since Abnegation isn’t big on it.
History: Andrew grew up in Abnegation, with his mom and dad. He was an only child, and that was okay since he’s pretty independent. He was a good Abnegation boy, plain, helpful, though he isn’t totally selfless. When his test approached, he thought he’d want to stay in Abnegation with his family. He didn’t think he’d fit in anywhere else. He wasn’t brainy or all about peace, he wasn’t totally honest or brave. But he knew Abnegation like the back of his hand. He wasn’t sure if he fit in there, but he could try.
Current Faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He thinks he’d be good with staying, but he isn’t sure until the test.
Divergent: No.

[Sυммer Rαιɴ || Wrιтιɴɢ ιѕ α cαllιɴɢ, ɴoт α cнoιce.]

Name: Jasper Caede
Gender: Male.
Appearance: Jasper is the typical good looking popular guy. Tall and strong, with muscles from working out every day, he has messy brown hair and big, bright green eyes. His face is quite nice too, good lips and nose and not too big ears. He’s surprisingly not tan for an Amity boy, sitting under shade a lot. But he really is strikingly handsome for a sixteen year old.
Personality: He’s kind, generous, giving, selfless, all the good qualities. He’s really good natured, outgoing. The kind of guy that opens doors and carries luggage for people without being asked. His parents instilled good values in him, and he lives by them. Still, he has his flaws. He’s a shameless flirt, and can be as charming as a snake. Though at heart, he means well.
History: Living with his parents and four little brothers, he had a good life. Sure they weren’t rich, but they had a roof over their head and food to eat. They lived on a farm, so he learned how to ride horses and take care of cattle and farm animals, not to mention gardening. He wasn’t quite content with life in Amity though, wishing to spend time helping more. So he knows he hopes for Abnegation. There he can really make a difference. Even though he’ll be leaving his family, he can still see them on visiting day. So he goes to his test hoping his life will change.
Current faction: Amity
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He wants to leave and go to Abnegation, so he can make a difference.
Divergent: No.

[Sυммer Rαιɴ || Wrιтιɴɢ ιѕ α cαllιɴɢ, ɴoт α cнoιce.]

Name: Mason Pedley
Gender: Male
Appearance: Average height, with broad shoulders and quite a bit of muscle. Mason has deep brown eyes and neatly combed ginger hair, with a bit of a tan. He’s fairly average, but good looking too.
Personality: He’s kind of the funny guy. Always making jokes, always making people smile, always being a smartass. He’s comic relief, the good natured boy next door, the best friend instead of boyfriend. He’s always been the one who is there, in the background, good but not good enough. And he doesn’t mind, watching from the sidelines. He enjoys a good time, with good friends. He’s… that guy.
History: His mom raised him as a single mom, his dad never really around. Once in a while his dad would show up, but only briefly, and he wasn’t really a good dad. Mason was never close to him, so he was a momma’s boy. He got fairly good grades in school, when he didn’t skip. He had a couple crushes, one girlfriend who broke his heart by choosing another guy. His life was okay. He loves going fishing and running track through the Amity fields, even though he’s Candor born. He looks great in a suit, but he always considered Candor boring. In Amity, people are free. He used to like watching as the Amity kids arrived in the trucks, with their songs and laughter, not paying any attention to the serious, stern Candor kids. Someday, he’d be free too. He knew it.
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He just doesn’t want to be a boring Lawyer, so he wants to leave.
Divergent: No.

[Sυммer Rαιɴ || Wrιтιɴɢ ιѕ α cαllιɴɢ, ɴoт α cнoιce.]

Name: Stiles Washington
Gender: Male
Appearance: Average height, build, brown hair, brown eyes. He has an adorable almost puppy like expression, and tends to be smiling. He has a tatoo on his side that says ‘Everyone finds where they belong, in the end’
Personality: Stiles is funny, charming, kind. He’s a hopeless flirt, and will bend over backwards to impress pretty girls. He often is running late somewhere, always on the move, always talkative. He also tends to be daring and brave, like the faction he was born in. Really he’s a good guy, but he has a knack for getting into trouble and being in the wrong place, wrong time.
History: He never met his mom or dad, being born factionless. His mother, who had friends in Dauntless, gave him to them in hopes he’d have a better life. So he grew up Dauntless, ingraining the traits of bravery and daring stupidity into him. However, he never wanted to be in Dauntless. He always felt like he should be somewhere else. He liked climbing high up and diving in water and stuff like that, but he doesn’t care for the loud attitude that is Dauntless, and he doesn’t like tattoos or piercings a lot, even though he has a tattoo. He always was running off or getting into trouble, always causing the Dauntless crowd to be upset with him. So, when test day came, he was itching to see where he belonged.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He wants to belong… and he doesn’t in Dauntless.
Divergent: Slightly Divergent.