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message 751: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I am right here but I get what you're saying and I will add her on in just a second

To EVERYONE:
We need more people to make guys for Dauntless so that our acceptance of Dauntless characters doesn't have to stop so please get on that



message 752: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Laura Anastasia is now approved please proceed to aptitude!


message 753: by Michaela (last edited Apr 18, 2014 08:26PM) (new)

Michaela (MichaelaJoCoraggio) | 1 comments Name: Mika Tarness
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i...
Personality: Feisty and stubborn. She's sassy and that often gets her into trouble.
History: Born in Candor she's always been taught to tell the truth, even when it hurts. Her father was one of the leading figures in society until he died in a shooting when she was 12. She lives with her Mom and two little sisters.
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She has thought about leaving her faction because it often bores her and she doesn't like life with her mom.
Divergent: No


message 754: by Isabella (new)

Isabella | 5 comments Okay! Thank you so Much!!


message 755: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 20, 2014 05:29PM) (new)

Name: Rut Sarai Leatliec
Gender: Female

Appearance:
She has glasses that tend to slide down her nose and can be seen constantly pushing them up. She has silvery-grey eyes and thick honey-brown hair that goes down to her waist. She is short for her age.

Personality:
She is very serious and composed until you get to know her better. Then, Rut is mostly happy and over talkative. She is very caring and empathetic towards people, and is always polite. She always tries to put other people's needs before her own. She is very loyal to her friends and family, and is extremely intelligent. She can be very sensitive at times.

History:
She grew up as the oldest of four girls. She was always very protective and loving of her sisters, and would lie to them sometimes to make them feel better, even if she got in trouble. Her father was a true Candor, and never lied. That would have been fine, but he was extremely cruel in the way he told the truth, especially with his daughters. Her mother was an Amity-born who hated Candor and felt she had made a mistake in choosing which faction. This made her very bitter. She ran off to join the factionless on Rut's twelfth birthday.
Current Faction: Candor

She is torn between staying for her sisters sake and leaving for herself.

She is Divergent


message 756: by Albert (new)

Albert Wilhelmy | 45 comments Name: Jade Jackson

Gender: Male

Appereance: Black slick hair, tan colored skin.
Personality: Stubborn persistent, calm, friendly, and annoying, and good under pressure.

History: His father and mother both are Librains in Euritide, but he doesn't fit in. He has not many friends in euritde, but likes the personality of dauntless.

Current Faction: Erutide

Wishes of going somewhere else: Yes

Divergent: Not that I know of.


message 757: by Albert (new)

Albert Wilhelmy | 45 comments Is it approved?


message 758: by [deleted user] (new)

How do I know if I am approved?


message 759: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, sorry! I will edit it. Thanks:)


message 760: by [deleted user] (new)

There, I edited it. Again, sorry!


message 761: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, sorry I did not know.


message 762: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Albert: you need more appearance, personality, and history please


message 763: by [deleted user] (new)

I edited again. I am very sorry:)


message 764: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay. Thank you.

((It's fine. ))


message 765: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (Thenerdypanda) | 1 comments Name: Elizabeth

Gender: Female

Appearance: Elizabeth has long red hair and is somewhat short (about 5'5'') small hands and feet and skinny, but still healthy weight. She has green eyes and light coloured skin.

Personality: Elizabeth can be somewhat shy but when it comes to defending other people she will do whatever she can verbally, and tends to avoid full on fights or physical contact. She is polite and tries to make everyone happy and she is also very clever.

History: Her family lives in Erudite and lives with her parents, Theresa and Ethan, she has one older sister named Loral who is three years older than her but has no other siblings. Loral chose to stay in Erudite at her ceremony and did extremely well in her initiation which left Elizabeth to be in her sister's shadow. She was never as good a student as others in her faction. She loved to read and learn but she didn't think in statistics like everyone else, she considered everyone and their emotions. She was still very intelligent but was below her faction's usual. Elizabeth was always protective of everyone, almost as if they were her little brother or sister but she didn't like fighting, she just knew that everyone was a person who deserved a right to be happy.

Current faction: Erudite

Thoughts on leaving: would like to transfer to Amity

Divergent: yes (Erudite, Amity, Abnegation)


message 766: by AC (last edited Apr 26, 2014 09:34AM) (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Name: Daniel
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://www.animecharactersdatabase.co...
Personality: almost always in danger or trouble, kind toward others, but ready to fight at the first sign of danger. Dangerously smart but has trouble paying attention. Rarely says anything but when he does it's worth hearing. Semi-shy, always alert and has an eagle eye, modest, humorous, and friendly. Not really into social media, but has a factionchat.
History: His father died when he was 14 and his brothers all died from a disease (but erudite had grudge against family so possibly death serum) isolated from rest of faction because of his thirst for adventure. His brothers's death brought him closer to the meaning of life and how precious it really is. Although most people think that he will choose dauntless, he feels he has a connection to abnrgation because of his tragic childhood experience, so he wants to want other people's lives happier and to help factionless children to have a better first 12 years of life than he had had. Daniel has participated in numerous outreach groups, but he still needs to quench his thirst for adventure. And anyway, he's seen a hot girl in dauntless in school a couple times.
Current faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving or staying and why: wants to leave because he feels like he does not fit in with abnegation.
Divergent: yes


message 767: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments I meant to say daniel


message 768: by Edit~A (new)

Edit~A (edit-a) Name: ElfitA
Gender: Female
Appearance: description
Personality: Brave, challenging, romantic, funny, active, athletic
History: She's from wealthy family, and everyone thinks that she's a spoiled bitch, but her friends know, that for close people she will do everything, even out her life on the line.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Never thought about leaving her faction, because she knows, there is where she does belong.
Divergent: Yes


message 769: by Annelise (last edited Apr 25, 2014 07:29PM) (new)

Annelise Cummings Name:Lexi Everleigh Hope

Gender:Female

Appearance: http://aweebitirish.com/tumblr-girls-...
She has long brown hair and blue eyes. She is super skinny(even though she eats like crazy). She has freckles all over her face, she has got long legs but is only about 4'6". She is very pale, but not too pale. She isn't very muscular.

Personality:Lexi Everleigh is quiet,a little shy, well-behaved, kind(but she'd never be abnegation because she is not very selfless), always happy, always smiling, and gets As and Bs on her school work. She is very peaceful and loves anything to do with the arts(vocals, dance, theatre, art, instruments). She loves fiction books.

History:she grew up as the oldest of 3 kids(a sister and a brother).Every time her faction held a sing-a-long, play, or musical, you can bet your bottom dollar that Lexi Everleigh was participating. Her mom was in amity her whole life, but her dad transferred from Erudite . She has many friends and has never met anyone who doesn't like her.She's always done well in school, but never as well as the Erudite kids in her classes.

Current Faction:Amity

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: The idea of leaving Amity revolts Lexi Everliegh. She feels as though she fits in nowhere else. She would never be smart enough for the "all As" Erudites, she feels that what's her's is her's so she can't be abnegation, she can't be Dauntless because even the dark scares her, and though she tries not to lie she can't be Candor because there are times when the truth is impossible.

Divergent:Not even slightly. She is completely loyal to Amity and Amity only.


message 770: by Mila (new)

Mila | 2 comments Name: Rowan Louise Roberts

Personality: quite funny courageous inquisitive

History: born in Candor but not good at telling the truth parents where from erudite and abnegation watches erudite at school has a little brother and a gold fish

Divergent: yes

Thinking of: changing to dauntless


message 771: by Kobi (new)

Kobi Russell | 3 comments Name: Alex "Axe" Wiley Jr
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://tinyurl.com/nyjk5vv
Personality: Quiet but thoughtful, loyal, socially awkward, fairly strong, troubled family life, zones out sometimes, don't want to get on his bad side but he will forgive you if you deserve to be forgiven, will save you from danger but doesn't want to be thought of as the hero,
History: Alex Wiley Sr (his father) was a past Dauntless leader, a man revered by many, and his son was always in his shadow, learning the ways of the Dauntless faction. His older sister broke away from the family, choosing a different faction after a debacle with teen pregnancy, and became factionless. She was never spoken of again. Alex Jr has seen many things a child his age should never have had to witness, including his mother being killed during combat. He lives alone with his father, and anxiously awaits the day that he can become a fully fledged member of society and break away from what is left of the Wiley family.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Dauntless blood runs in the Wiley family. It would be almost sacrilegious for Alex to choose a different faction. Alex from a very early age was brought up in the ways of Dauntless, seeing all sides of his faction, the good, the bad, and the ugly. Still, he feels at home there, and wants to carry on his father's legacy while building a legacy of his own.
Divergent: No


message 772: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Sarah: Elizabeth needs something else in personality, and appearance

Aiden: Daniel needs more Appearance, Personality, and History please.

Edit-A: Elfita needs more History and Personality and there is a waiting list for Dauntless read Announcements for details on that please.

Annelise: can you revise this sentence it makes no sense "she feels that what's her's is her's so that crosses of Abnegation,"

Mila: You need appearance and more on personality and history please and add gender on the character. there is a waiting list for Dauntless it's shorter for guys than girls and can you add if Rowan is Divergent or not it's a simple yes or no or slightly meaning one answer on the test.

Kobi: Alex is approved please proceed to Aptitude there is a waiting list for Dauntless if you need more information please read the announcements thread the rule regarding Dauntless is posted there.


message 773: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Daniel: Appearance: http://www.animecharactersdatabase.co...

Personality: rarely says anything but when he does it's worth hearing. Semi-shy, always alert and has an eagle eye, modest, humorous, and friendly. Not really into social media, but has a factionchat.

History: his brothers's death brought him closer to the meaning of life and how precious it really is. Although most people think that he will choose dauntless, he feels he has a connection to abnrgation because of his tragic childhood experience, so he wants to want other people's lives happier and to help factionless children to have a better first 12 years of life than he had had. Daniel has participated in numerous outreach groups, but he still needs to quench his thirst for adventure. And anyway, he's seen a hot girl in dauntless in school a couple times.

((By the way, when I say "semi-shy" and "friendly" in the personality I mean that he's impartial. He's not biased or anything.))


message 774: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Aiden it's good could you please edit the add ins into the character and should I add him to the dauntless waiting list?


message 775: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments What do you mean by "addins"? Also, should I be on the dauntless waiting list if I want to become dauntless, or if I'm in dauntless already?


message 776: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
You added history, and personality which are add ins so just edit those into the actual character


message 777: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments So... I rewrite it with the add-ins?


message 778: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Are you on the app?


message 779: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments No. Why?


message 780: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Then there should be an edit button at the bottom of your comment so all you have to do is press it then add the add ins to your history appearance and personality.


message 781: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Thanks. Fixed it.


message 782: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Aidan wrote: "Also, should I be on the dauntless waiting list if I want to become dauntless, or if I'm in dauntless already?" should or should I not?


message 783: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
If you're okay with waiting then go for it but it will be a few weeks before you can use him.


message 784: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Even for boys?


message 785: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes it alternates between guys and girls if you need more information see the rules thread the rule regarding Dauntless is there.


message 786: by Sab (last edited Apr 25, 2014 07:42PM) (new)

Sab (unluckyducky) | 295 comments I'm just reposting my already approved character.

Name: Cleo Bane
Gender: Female
Appearance:

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Personality: Cleo''s quick to temper, and quicker in fighting back. Her tongue's like a serpent just waiting to strike out, and attack her opponent. Though she may have a tough exterior, she's soft and vulnerable on the inside. She's not easy to fool, but she falls for people too quick. She's intelligent, and doesn't really know what she wants to do with her future.
History: Cleo's past is dark, and murky. Her parents were never abusive, but nor were they warm, and close to her. She was raised as a stranger in her own house, and had no freedom to be who she really wanted to be. Raised beside her older, and apparently smarter brother she's felt as if she's lived in his shadows all her life. Her parents always preferred him to her anyway, he was more... Tamable whereas she asked too many questions. She also had a younger brother, who she was much closer to. Unfortunately, he took his own life a year before her 16th birthday. His illnesses finally became too much for him to handle
Current Faction: Dauntless.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) Cleo longs to be free, and choose her own future. She wants to break free of her parents leash, and write her own life. She's sick of always being forced into doing something, and reprimanded for being intelligent.
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) Yes


message 787: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Yes it alternates between guys and girls if you need more information see the rules thread the rule regarding Dauntless is there."

Thanks. I'll check it out.


message 788: by Annelise (new)

Annelise Cummings lol okay i fixed it


message 789: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Oh by the way where's the waiting list?


message 790: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Aidan wrote: "Oh by the way where's the waiting list?"

Katiana has it on her computer, I assume, if you want to know you message her


message 791: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
((Okay, haven't been on Thanks Mackenzie :P))


message 792: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
((:P))


message 793: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Name: Adrian Ivashkov

Gender: Male

Appearance: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia...

Personality: Adrian is a fun loving person, who hates violence unless necessary. He has a complex where he has to have closure at all times, which is why he is feeling nervous about the aptitude test and choosing ceremony. Adrian has no idea which faction he wants to choose, as an Amity he loves it, but doesn't like how they put the peace serum into the bread. (His father is one of the main 'leaders' in Amity)

History: Adrian was always the quiet child and his parents loved it, when he started school, he became more open to sharing his ideas, and saying what came to his mind, a Candor trait. His parents disciplined him and he learnt quickly to keep his thoughts to himself, unless he was asked. He became quiet again and started to do things recklessly and without thought, bringing back the disciplining that his parents gave him. Even though his parents hurt him, he still loved them, and didn't want to leave as he was scared of what he would find, he was going to.

Current Faction:
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) He wants to go, but he is afraid of what he will find outside of the Amity compound

Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) YES


message 794: by Mila (new)

Mila | 2 comments Name: Rowan Louis Roberts

Appearance: black hair grey eyes and pale skin 6'5 athletic hair is long goes down to mid back

History: I am a Candor born my parents are Julie and Mark Roberts I have a twin called Zoe who was born ten minutes after me we both have the same interests and dislikes which are running swimming writing and reading. I am 16 and I jog to school with my best friend jade we met my first week of school by bumping into each other in the hallway she is from Erudite but tells my she wants to go to dauntless

Current faction: Candor

Thoughts of changing faction: thinking of changing to dauntless with jade

Gender: female

Divergent: yes


message 795: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Mackenzie wrote: "((The dauntless waiting list is currently posted on page 8 of the chat thread))"

Thanks Mackenzie.


message 796: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Adrian is approved.

Rowan Louis Roberts needs a bit more work on history, as you only really mentioned his family and friends. What was his childhood like? How did his family treat him? Did he do well in school? As well as history, you also forgot to fill out his personality. Please do so as soon as possible. Just one more thing: judging by your history entry, I assume you will roleplay in first person; I'm just going to let you know now that this is a third person roleplay.

Please make any changes to your character by editing the existing post.


message 797: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Aiden it's good could you please edit the add ins into the character and should I add him to the dauntless waiting list?"

Please add him to the dauntless waiting list.


message 798: by AC (new)

AC (spooktun3) | 39 comments Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "Aidan wrote: "Oh by the way where's the waiting list?"

Katiana has it on her computer, I assume, if you want to know you message her"


How do I message her? Do you mean a feature on goodreads, or elsewhere such as email, ig, twitter, or kik?


message 799: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
It's a feature on goodreads. Go to jerk profile, and there should be a send message option.


message 800: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
*her profile. Not jerk profile. Autocorrect... :P


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