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message 601: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Joanne needs a lot of work more on history appearance and personality please you can find a picture if you can't think of a good way to describe her.


message 602: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
natasha lacie needs more apearanc, try and find a picture


message 603: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
giulia still needs more history, and more personality sorry giulia


message 604: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Emma Natasha has a picture for Lacie you just can't see it from a phone or iPod


message 605: by Giuls (new)

Giuls (higiuls) Name: Giulia Hardy

Gender: Female

Appearance: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20...

Personality: She's mostly quiet, but impatient at the same time, sharp, but funny at the same time. When she says something it's because it's well thought and because she means it. She's stubborn and has a warm heart, but sometimes people misunderstand the reasons behind her actions. She hates crying, so she tries to avoid it as much as she can, also because she's emotionally strong, and would take any risk if required.

History: She was born in a really nice family, and has a younger sister. Her father was an Erudite, but was almost kind of obliged to leave his old faction, because his parents had died, the rest of his family was Abnegation, and he felt the duty to look after them. Her mother's always been Abnegation, and her parents had raised her in order to become one, so she couldn't disappoint them. Giulia's parents always made her feel comfortable with what she wanted to be, and they've always known in their hearts she was going to leave them eventually. Both her parents know what it means to have the weight of your family on your shoulders, and that is not what they wanted for their daughter: they've always wanted her to be free to make her own decisions, letting her know that they'd always support her, no matter what. Giulia's never had a good time at school, even though she was good at it. She has never had any good friends either, her family's always been all she has. Her life is pretty ordinary and she's always lived trying to figure out what she wants from her life and what decisions is best to make.

Current Faction: Abnegation

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She would probably leave her faction, because she needs freedom, experience and changes in her life. What she's afraid of is the thought of leaving her family. She loves her parents and does;t want to make them sad or to leave her younger sister behind, not being able to help her.

Divergent: yes


message 606: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Approved!


message 607: by Jasper (new)

Jasper Caede (thepersianlucifer) Name: Jasper Caede

Gender: Male

Appearance: [IMG]http://i60.tinypic.com/akjpli.jpg[/IMG] (Or my profile pic)

Personality: Jasper is more of a loner, not really one for a committed relationship. He has a short temper and can be set off rather easily. He is not the nicest, but is loyal to his word. He can be nice when he wants to.

History: Amity born and raised, Jasper sticks out like a sore thumb in his faction. He has never been a fan of being nice to everyone they meet and has always found himself amazed by the dauntless. His past has consisted of the normal faction life, nothing big that really happened. Or that I would like to reveal >:3

Current Faction: Amity

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Leaving the Amity faction due to the lack of courtesy and kindness to the other residents and inability to adapt to the faction's lifestyle. Planning to head to Dauntless.
Divergent: Slightly


message 608: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Emma Natasha has a picture for Lacie you just can't see it from a phone or iPod"

That makes sense :P


message 609: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Jasper needs more personality and history
and you can't know if he is divergent or not


message 610: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
(Actually, you're supposed to put that in the charrie sheet. :P)


message 611: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
((They can know if they are divergent they just can't know what that divergence is but how it's written is fine))


message 612: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
sorry, tired :P


message 613: by O (new)

O | 11 comments *retry*
Name: Cecile black
Gender:female
Appearance: dark hair to middle of the back, dark blue eyes, pale complexion, tall willowy but strong, graceful figure, topped with long eyelashes
Personality : sarcastic stubborn girl with an obsession of jello loyal but expects the worst of people curious an trouble making
History: ever since she learned what sarcasm was she has been fluent in that language which has been frowned upon considered lying, only had a few friends in her lifetime but they were constantly scolding her ever time she does something that was not appreciated by their current faction. Having been orphaned last year when her parents died in an accident she currently stands alone.
Current faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction: never quite belong and has been unwilling to spill her personal information unlike everybody else.
Divergent: yes


message 614: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 13, 2014 10:34AM) (new)

Name: Vincent Forte
Gender: Male
Appearance: Looks like his sister, Viola Forte, except he has dark brown eyes and blond streaks in his auburn hair. Has fair skin, opposite Viola. Tall. Almost had glaucoma, and now he is almost color blind, and almost blind as well.
Personality : Likes to laugh. Finds sister's presents endearing. He is tense, but willing to spill the truth. Vincent disagrees with Amity's ways of lying just to keep the peace. He is quiet, but not when it comes to speaking the truth. Star of Debate Team and his favorite color is white. (His sister says it isn't on the color wheel but he doesn't listen to her.) Voices his ideas and opinions freely, and only feels a little bad when he hurts someone's feelings telling the truth, because, after all, it's the truth.
History: He has lived a happy life with his annoying sister who had embarrasses him for many years, but still loves her and thinks his parents are loving and kind. He loves his sister, but he doesn't usual express that in public. He has a stable relationship with his sister, but he hurts her feelings sometimes with his truthful opinions. Star student, and doesn't not like any string instruments, all except the bass. He feels it is very reflective. He and his parents love each other, and they love Viola equally the same.
Current faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction: No. Loves Candor. Is his home, will always be his home.
Divergent: No. Head on Candor.


message 615: by Bitterblue (new)

Bitterblue  The Penguin Name: Katsa Bitterblue
Gender: Female
Appearance: Light brown shoulder length hair with dark brown eyes.
Personality: quiet( not shy) most of the time, but can be very feisty.
History: Only child, Mother died and father is grieving
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Staying because She loves dauntless
Divergent: Yes, she got Abnegation, Amity and Dauntless


message 616: by [deleted user] (new)

Are mods still approving charries? Been waiting for long time. :)


message 617: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Cecile needs just a little more on personality and there is a waiting list on Dauntless initiates, please read the last post on the announcements thread.

Maybe you should find Vincent an image I don't think people want to go look for Viola to figure out what he looks like and maybe give a bit more on personality and history please.

Katsa needs more on appearance, personality and history and I suggest you read the announcements thread there is a waiting list and you are at the bottom of it I'm sorry.

((Sorry for the delay I wanted to wait until I was on a computer which I haven't been for the past couple days))


message 618: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Could you edit that into the character please


message 619: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 08, 2014 05:43AM) (new)

Okay fixed that. :) I was on the iPad when I was fixing it and it didn't give me an edit button for a post so I couldn't put it into my original one.


message 620: by [deleted user] (new)

((So am I approved?))


message 621: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes please proceed to aptitude test


message 622: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay!


ϻαđίѕσи ~ I'm gonna be free, and I'm gonna be fine, but maybe not tonight Name: Kaylee Porter
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://pinterest.com/pin/502221795918...
Personality: Kaylee is not someone who likes to pick a fight. She tends to be peaceful and keep to herself and this makes life hard for her being born Dauntless. They are expected to fight and to be fearless, but Kaylee has always struggled with this. She'd much prefer a simply and quiet life. All she asks is to fall and love, have children and be happy. This is all that she wants in life.
History: Kaylee has never had a good relationship with her parents, who are both in her opinion perfectly Dauntless. They always urge her to be more like the other kids and she tends to just shut them out. She had an older sister who left Dauntless and joined Erudite and Kaylee hasn't seen her in over five years. She doesn't have any friends because even from when she was a child the other Dauntless kids thought that she was weird and a coward because she didn't enjoy doing things that normal Dauntless children did. She has never known friendship or love, but she is eager to find it somehow.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on Staying or Leaving: Kaylee cannot stand being born Dauntless. The faction does not suit her personality and she resents the fighting and the weapons. She wishes to join Amity for a more peaceful lifestyle.
Divergent?: No


message 624: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 625: by Nickole (new)

Nickole Rose (Emobarbie22) | 1 comments Name: Raven Alexandria Snow
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=h...
Personality: Raven is quite and shy but is very tough and can really defend herself when needed
History: her family died in a fire so she ended up living with her best friends family, her best friend father tells her all of the time how worthless she is and how she has long overstayed her welcome and so she decided to leave
Current Faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: she hates it there (before the aptitude test)
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) Yes


message 626: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
She needs more personality and if the guy is Abnegation at least make him seem like abnegation they are the selfless so I don't really see the guy telling her she's worthless and overstayed her welcome if anything it would be the complete opposite of that


message 627: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Name: Lizbeth Carrington
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has sparkling green eyes and her cheeks are speckled with freckles. She is quite young looking for 16. Her long brown waves fall loosely below her shoulders. She isn't particularly small. She is sort of between small and tall. She does not look like a fighter but she wants to prove everyone wrong.
Personality: She is quite easy going and light hearted most of the time put when she is pushed she lashes out. She is known for randomly yelling at people because she believes in standing up for what is right when others choose to ignore it. She is a bit of an outcast in her faction. She has always followed rules for the most part but her yelling gets her in trouble and she doesn't know when to shut up. She always seems quiet but really she isn't and once you get to know her you realize this.
History: Both of her parents are alive but neither understand her. She is always in the shadow of her loving kind perfect sister and has developed traits none of her family ever had.
Faction: Amity
Thoughts on staying/leaving the faction: She has always known she didn't really being in Amity. She had admired some aspects but often got into trouble for being outspoken when it comes to always being kind and forgiving no matter what because she believes that if something is WRONG she has to do something. She has always wanted to join Dauntless. She admired them from afar and always thought she'd be one of them. Now when it comes to choosing she's not sure she's brave enough to make that decision.
Divergent: Yes (Amity, Candor, Dauntless)


message 628: by O (new)

O | 11 comments Cecile personality retry: stubborn, sarcastic, troublemaker that is exceptionally wary of people especially ones with green hair she believes that makes them look like a evil leprechaun but notherless loves the dauntless but has always been afraid of being abandoned by the ones she loces


message 629: by O (new)

O | 11 comments *loves*i mean


message 630: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Lizbeth needs more history , you can't choose what her divergence is and please read the announcements page regarding the acceptance of Dauntless initiates there is a waiting list.


message 631: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments OMG sorry! I'm new to this! I'll give her some more history now! Does that mean I have to go to the aptitude test next?


message 632: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Joanne could you edit that into the character please


message 633: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Stocks (dauntless_brave) | 6 comments Name: Rosalynn Greenridge

Gender: Girl

Appearance: short. Short brown wavy hair. Not fat but not super skinny. Blue eyes. Very tan.

Personality: giggly, happy, fun, crazy, stylish, smart, friendly.

History: growing up Rosalynn was a stubborn toddler, always wanting to do whatever she said which made her not fit into her faction from the very beginning. She wanted to look in the mirror and run around with Dauntless children but her parents always limited her. She never liked helping people and was always very loud and loved to talk about herself. She knew her parents didn't like her.

Current Faction: Abnegation ^^^ obviously

Thoughts: Rosalynn definetly hates her current faction. Her faction hates her. She is no doubt changing to Dauntless no matter what aptitude test says. Her parents hate her and her siblings do too. She doesn't fit in anywhere with the Abnegation, they are to serious.

Divergent: yes, all the way but she doesn't let it get in the way. She definetly fits in Dauntless.


message 634: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes that would be the next step but you need to wait to be approved before that.


message 635: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Ok! Thank you! I'll do more history now! One sec


message 636: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments History: Her parents and sister were always very good to her. They were respected in Amity and had a reputation to protect. So when Lizbeth threatens this with her actions (while they are always forgiving) they feel she needs to clean up her act. Her sister loves her very much and Lizbeth loves her back but there is always a that little wedge between them that Lizbeth notices because her parents obviously prefer her sister (her sister is called Allya). It never occurred to her parents whose only option has been amity that Lizbeth could choose anything else. Her family had been in Amity for generations and everyone just assumed she wouldn't transfer.


message 637: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Is that alright?


message 638: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I am getting tired of repeating myself about Dauntless there is a waiting list one dauntless accepted per week alternating between male and female! There are at least 10 people ahead and there need to be some male dauntless made as well!


message 639: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Ok! I'm sorry I won't be in dauntless it's totally fine :)


message 640: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Stocks (dauntless_brave) | 6 comments I'm sorry I didn't see that about dauntless. I will be Amity then.


message 641: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Same I didn't see that I'll be candor or will I go to the aptitude test??


message 642: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Nicole your character needs more personality and appearance if you want you can use a picture for appearance.

And lily-ann that's fine but could you edit the history into the character please


message 643: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Yeah sure! Give me one sec!


message 644: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
It's in the announcements thread and yes you will still go to the aptitude test


message 645: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Lizbeth is approved


message 646: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Thank you! Should I keep editing my history into my character or just move on?


message 647: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Please do the editing but you can move on whenever you're ready


message 648: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Ok I'll keep doing it now


message 649: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Name: Lizbeth Carrington
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has sparkling green eyes and her cheeks are speckled with freckles. She is quite young looking for 16. Her long brown waves fall loosely below her shoulders. She isn't particularly small. She's kind of between small and tall. She doesn't look like a fighter but she wants to prove everyone wrong.
Personality: She is quite easy going and light hearted most of the time but when she is pushed she lashes out. She is known for randomly yelling at people because she believe in standing up for what is right when others choose to ignore it. She is a bit of an outcast in her faction. She has always followed the rules for the most part but her yelling gets her into trouble and she doesn't know when to shut up. She always seems quiet but when you get to know her you realize she isn't.
History: Her parents and her sister Allya were always very good to her. They were respected in amity and had a reputation to protect. So when Lizbeth threatens this with her actions (while they are always forgiving) they feel she needs to clean up her act. Allya loves Lizbeth very much and Lizbeth loves her back but there is always that wedge between them because Lizbeth knows her parents prefer Allya. It never occurred to her parents whose only option had been Amity that Lizbeth could or would choose anything else. Her family had been in Amity for generations so everyone assumed she wouldn't transfer.
Faction: Amity
Thoughts about staying/leaving: She has always known she never REALLY belonged in Amity. She admired some aspects but has often gotten into trouble for being so outspoken but when it comes to always being kind and forgiving no matter what even if something is wrong. She stands up for what is right. She also admires dauntless from afar for their bravery.


message 650: by Lily-ann (new)

Lily-ann Cunningham | 519 comments Ok! Finished! Aptitude test time!!


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