The Fault in Our Stars
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Am I the only one who hates this book with burning passion?

Wise decision, Aly.

Just because a lot of people love a book doesn't automatically mean that it's a masterpiece.

What if he were a murderer?

Yes. Mary-Sues, that-same-smokin-hot-guy, cliched plots, insta-love, abusive relationship etc. are aggravating. I feel that YA has got nothing new to offer especially in the dystopian genre.

Like I said in my review, it can be proved mathematically but when Hazel compares that quote to the days that Augustus gave her, it becomes absu..."
Just my 2 cents again, but I think she was referring to time and how people's perceptions of just how much time has passed or just how much time they have left can vary. Her perceptions on life have changed so much in a short period of time that when she is looking at pictures from the past, it seems like forever ago to her when they actually were not that long ago. A picture that was only taken a few months ago, seems like a lifetime ago to her.
I actually tried to explain that concept before when I talked about how far removed I was from my HS days when I was in my 20's even though the actual age difference was only a few years. Some infinities are bigger than other infinities.

Like I said in my review, it can be proved mathematically but when Hazel compares that quote to the days that Augustus gave her, ..."
I get your point.

The quote "My thoughts are stars I can't fathom into constellations" actually does make sense within the context ..."
The problem is that the phrase was completely unnecessary. He cluttered up his writing with "witty" sayings in nearly every paragraph. Had he limited it to a handful of flowery speeches they would have had a much stronger impact. He wasn't writing a book of poetry for crying out loud. Here's a quote from Mark Twain on the subject:
"I notice that you use plain, simple language, short words and brief sentences. That is the way to write English--it is the modern way and the best way. Stick to it; don't let fluff and flowers and verbosity creep in. When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don't mean utterly, but kill most of them--then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. An adjective habit, or a wordy, diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to get rid of as any other vice." - Mark Twain (Of course, Mr. Irony said this in the most wordy way possible.)

Nice :)

Hazel resumes at the end that even between small numbers like 2 and 3 there still is an infinite amount of numbers, she relates that to her time with Gus being short, but full of emotions and memories, so many in fact she can not count them either.
Ayesha wrote: "I found it disturbing when Hazel agrees to go to Augustus' house just few minutes after meeting him. I mean, you cannot fall for a stranger's words so easily.
What if he were a murderer?"
Well she knew that he was a friend of Isaacs. plus they met at a self help group for kids with cancer and he was of the same age. It is not toooo absurd
But I agree with what you said about the YA Distopia genre, Ayesha. All the Divergents and Deliriums of this world need to disappear, they offer nothing new

Yes. Mary-Sues, that-same-smokin-hot-guy, cliched plots, insta-love, abusive relationship etc. are aggravating. I feel tha..."
Especially in the dystopian genre. Most dystopian now are all the same.
(*cough* I'm talking to you, Cassandra Clare. Though it's not really 'dystopian' that you write, same concept.)

Not trying to be rude, but 'insta-love' does mean 'quick'.

I did read the second book and they didn't necessarily "stop" their relationship even though they knew it was incest. (yes, I know, in the 4th book they find out they're not related, blah blah blah, but still...)



Fair enough, there are those who like this book, and I don't blame them, because in itself, ..."
Ditto on the Hazel is obnoxious and self-centered part. John Green has a nice way of stringing words together but almost all the teen characters were unlikeable. Except Isaac. He might just singularly be this book's saving grace. I laughed when he cried and shed mirthful tears at his jokes.
Even though I had to trudge through the first 100 pages, I felt myself eventually warming up to their situation and the general feeling of helplessness maybe it's trying to convey.

I sometimes wonder if maybe John Green, because he has such a way with words, would've been better off as a poet."
I feel something similar. I thought that the sprinkling of nice one-liners would be better suited to tweets than to attempting to lend any kind of dept to a trashy romance novel.

Seriously! Thankfully I wasn't paying enough attention to know what the series was, but I have a sneaking suspicion it is one I want to read, so I'm going to pretend I didn't read that.
I also think John Green wouldn't make a very good poet. I see how one would think that, but even poets make sense where as his words were sparkly sounding filler.

Is that an attempt at being critical of Shakespeare?


Amen.

Eh and okay the kitten murderer thing u said was pretty funny hahahahah

Hahahah

Quick question who's valjean jk u don't have to answer that
Katie wrote: "Well if Green cant be a poet, he could be a bad pop songwriter."
OH HELL YES
OH HELL YES

Yeah, but no. People don't like this book because it is a godawful mess pretending to be something special. I can tell you that I've read a fair amount of YA and other lit on this subject, and, after A Walk to Remember, TFIOS is the absolute worst "cancer story" I've ever read. There are other books that do the same basic story much better -- and some of them don't even have to kill anybody off to get tears from readers.

I met him once, back when I first read Looking for Alaska and I aaked him, "Do you like your fans? "
And he said,"Only those who love my work. Not those who like..."
Wow, I hope he was just messing with you - trying to be witty, of course!! -- but it wouldn't surprise me at all if he actually meant it.

What if he were a murderer?"
The whole story was ridiculous, but what really jumped the shark for me was when she and Augustus went to meet van Houten, and after they got into it, didn't she slap the drink out of van Houten's hand or something??? And then he pops up in the back seat of he car later on? What in the actual fuck. Too bizarre even for this book.

Just a side note is a walk to remember a good book?

No, it was terrible; that's my point. :)


(*cough* I'm talking to you, Cassandra Clare. Though it's not really 'dystopian' that you write, same concept.)"
Don't get me started on TMI. I read the first 2 books in the series and I hated them not to mention that the whole series is plagiarised. Clare is milking the cash cow by releasing more and more books based on TMI with the repetitive concept every year. I mean, look at TID, Bane chronicles and now I've heard that she's going to release another shadowhunters series with the same-girl-finding-out-that-she's-a-shadowhunter storyline.

I'm talking about the similarities between TMI and TID...




That's true... I'm pretty sure it had a deep meaning to most of them, though.


I think their opinions would vary just as much as anyone else. Cancer does not take away a person's individuality.

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Like I said in my review, it can be proved mathematically but when Hazel compares that quote to the days that Augustus gave her, it becomes absurd.
Aly wrote: "@Emma: I like your interpretation. :)
imo though, the infinity thing really wasn't needed in the book. What did it lead to? What does it mean? Why is it in the story?"
Yes, my question exactly .