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message 51: by Caru (new)

Caru I am now!


message 53: by Caru (new)

Caru yes I am!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments I'm winning now evil laugh.


message 56: by Caru (new)

Caru NO!!!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Me!!!


message 60: by Caru (new)

Caru ME!!!!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments I'm winning


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) ABC DEFGH I J KLM and LP QRS TUVWXY and Z


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments LALALA
SINGING
Name of character: Clytie

Meaning of Name: Brightly and lovely name this honnor of her mother who abandoned her.

Age:15

Godly Parnet:Posiedon

Powers:
Water manulptation
Breathe Underwater
Talks to horses and sea creatures
Telekinesis
Makes water related storms

Enemies: Doctors , Foster parents,and school bullies. People who told that she was
nothing but crap and crazy. The monsters and minnions of Ursla. The people who
killed her adoptive parents and almost her.

Allies: Her friends Liala ,Bloom and Jules. Her vampire boyfriend and his friends.
Any magical being.( that will were good)

Example Rp

The same dream over and over. The same reaction every time. Her heart pumps harder
each time. This time it felt as real as it did whenit happen. The day her adoptive parents
died. They were on vacation and they were calling for a hurricane. She had an argument
with them before they talked to a stranger. A person who looked fimalialr, but she didn't
know. The person left and after that everything went blank.

She was awakened to the noise at the hostpial. She ask what happen and they told her.
This little girl cried herself to sleep. She blamed herself. She had a new family and new
school. Then the monsters started coming she told her foster parents what she was
seeing. They took her to the doctors. The diagnosed her with ADHD.

They gave her pills. She thought they would help her. Make her normal, but they didn't.
The monsters came to her bigger and more dangerous. She couldn't tell anyone about
it or they would think she was crazy. She kept it.

At school the kids made fun of her. She got into trouble more than other kids. People
got stuck into toilets. Kids came out of restrooms soaking we from facets exploding
all over them. She was never around, but she still got into trouble.

These haunting thoughts linger as she laid there awake in the darkness. She has a
new home a new life. She learned to forget most of her awful days from her past.
Sometimes they reappear. She gently falls back to sleep. Her old life is over, but she
will kill Ursla for killing her adoptive parents.


message 64: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
Hi :)


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments I'm winning. :)


message 66: by Caru (new)

Caru I'm winning :)


message 67: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
No, I am the winner!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments No I'm winning.


message 69: by Caru (new)

Caru no!


message 70: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments This will not stop. Lets all agree that I'm the winner and the game doesn't have to go on forever. ;)


message 71: by Caru (new)

Caru I'm not gonna agree to that!


message 72: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Why not?! I'm clearly the winner anyways so might as well give me the prize! ;)


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) **pushes politely** I am the winner!!! ** looks down, and blushes. Oops did I do that?**


message 74: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
*steps over Hansrox, who has just been pushed* looks like I am the winner!


message 75: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Ouch. *rubs heads* don't need to push guys! Anyways I'm the winner.


message 76: by Trinity (new)

Trinity Now I am :P *pushes Hansrox back down*


message 77: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Wow. Just wow. *gets back up* ok fine u guys have it ur way. U win. Lol. :)


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) * Turns around and says sorry* however... I am winning!


message 79: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Lol. It ok. But I think u r mistaken. I am the winner of this game.


message 80: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
Ahem-it is is me who is the winner!


message 81: by Trinity (new)

Trinity Not for long Gabs! I am now =}


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments You are all wrong I'm winning.


message 83: by Trinity (new)

Trinity Now I am :P


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments No I'm winning. :)


message 85: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Now I am


message 86: by Trinity (new)

Trinity You can keep saying that but we all know it's me who is going to win!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Noooooooooo
Immmmmmm
Wiiiinnniiinnng


message 88: by Trinity (new)

Trinity Never!!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments I would say the same thing
Right back at you. :)


message 90: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
W-i-n-n-i-n-g


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Um not now


message 92: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments In ur dreams


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Right back at you.
I wouldn't be talking because I'm winning.


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Noooooooooooo
Yooouuuurrrr
Nooottt


message 95: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (hansrox) | 140 comments Ya! Ur not winning I am!


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) Winning!!!!!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Y'all aren't winning I'm winning.


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Right back at ya.


message 99: by Gabs (new)

Gabs  | 975 comments Mod
I must be getting a chicken dinner then, because I am the winner!


onceuponatimeareview | 204 comments Where is my chicken dinner? I am winning after all.


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