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The Monday Poem (old) > P.S. by Franz Wright (9/12/2013)

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message 1: by Jenny (last edited Dec 08, 2013 02:18PM) (new)

Jenny (jeoblivion) | 4893 comments P.S.


I close my eyes and see
a seagull in the desert,
high, against unbearably blue sky.

There is hope in the past.

I’m writing to you
all the time, I am writing

with both hands,
day and night.


Franz Wright


message 2: by Dhanaraj (new)

Dhanaraj Rajan | 2962 comments One of my favourite poems of Franz Wright. For time being I reserve my comments on the poem. And I know that it is from the poetry collection Walking to Martha's Vineyard.


message 3: by Leslie (new)

Leslie | 16369 comments I like it but I don't understand it. I sense some yearning but for a person in his past? past times (as in "days gone by"). Will think some more about it and return...


message 4: by Dhanaraj (new)

Dhanaraj Rajan | 2962 comments @ Leslie: A clue - Just go through Franz Wright's biography.


message 5: by LauraT (new)

LauraT (laurata) | 14356 comments Mod
A poet whom I don't know - not strange!!!!


message 6: by Helen (new)

Helen | 47 comments I like this too - need to read and think about it some more though


message 7: by Alannah (new)

Alannah Clarke (alannahclarke) | 14697 comments Mod
I really like this one.


message 8: by Sigourney (new)

Sigourney (psthebirdbites) | 226 comments Wow, I love this. Thanks for posting it Jenny!


message 9: by Leslie (new)

Leslie | 16369 comments Dhanaraj wrote: "One of my favourite poems of Franz Wright. For time being I reserve my comments on the poem. And I know that it is from the poetry collection Walking to Martha's Vineyard."

Ha ha! Clearly Wright & I are on different wavelengths! Because Martha's Vineyard is an island -- how can you walk to it?


message 10: by Dhanaraj (new)

Dhanaraj Rajan | 2962 comments @ Leslie: How can you walk to Martha's vineyard, an island? Franz Wright gives an answer in the titular poem of this collection and that is also a lovely poem.
Even then, you and Wright could very well be on different wavelengths. Lol...


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I agree, I like this poem but I don't understand it. I feel like I'm missing something, maybe in the back story. It's beautifully written though


message 12: by Dhanaraj (new)

Dhanaraj Rajan | 2962 comments I know that a poem should be read as it stands and should be left to the reader's imagination. But adding a biographical details can at times help in cherishing deeply the same poem.

If you think this is a spoiler, you can always avoid it.
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message 13: by Jenny (last edited Dec 11, 2013 03:16PM) (new)

Jenny (jeoblivion) | 4893 comments To be honest, I loved this poem before it made sense to me, and in all honesty I have no idea whether my reading of it is what has been intendend. The strongest image for me, and the one that somehow makes the rest of the poem resonate for me is the man writing with both hands. To me it's a poem about dedication. Writing with both hands brought two images to my mind. One of which was a man writing on a chalkboard with both hands simultaniously, the other one was a man praying. As in: addressing someone, with both hands. I know only a little of Franz Wright, I know he didn't have the happiest of childhoods, and he's struggled with addiction badly in the past. He didn't have the easiest relationship to his dead father who was also a poet, but whom he apparently loved and admired a lot. In my reading of it he adresses a Father when he says you. Be it his Father or God. I think 5 out of 7 times I imagine him writing for his Father the poet. And I imagine that finding hope in the past is an active decision to change the way you look back at things, to find peace.


message 14: by Jenny (new)

Jenny (jeoblivion) | 4893 comments Cross posting ;) And I didn't even 'spoiler' mine. Oops.


message 15: by Dhanaraj (new)

Dhanaraj Rajan | 2962 comments To me, it looks an act of praying. The images help a lot: A 'sea-gull in the desert' means a hope to pass over the sandy land to vastness of sea. It can fly over and the author is doing the same now - using his both 'wings' he hopes to fly over his past. He prays to be forgiven of his past continuously, for the desert (the terrible past) is relatively big. I am a believer and so my reading could have been prejudiced. But, what I admire in Wright is that he could present a lovely image of a repentent person's prayer in few sentences.


message 16: by Leslie (new)

Leslie | 16369 comments Jenny wrote: "To be honest, I loved this poem before it made sense to me, and in all honesty I have no idea whether my reading of it is what has been intendend. The strongest image for me, and the one that someh..."

I like the idea that "…I am writing / with both hands,…" could be praying or reaching out to someone. Thanks Dhanaraj & Jenny for the background info!


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