My writing - Rissa

[[deleted user]]

I need a better name for the book but here is the link:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

(I have not edited any of it yet)

I also have an unedited second chapter, but I want to hear your feedback first.
Thanks! :)

[Katarina]

Its really, good. I usually don't read half of this stuff, but I love Dystopia, so I thought I would read this, and just say the usual, it could be better.
But, this is really good, I like the description, and how it doesn't describe tooooo much. I need a second chapter, ASAP! JK, but I am looking forward to it. ;)

[[deleted user]]

I just put up the second chapter. It is very rough literally just finished writing it.

[Katarina]

Yay! Its good, but new I have to wait a while to see what happens.

[[deleted user]]

Thanks for reading it so far

[[deleted user]]

Nice first two chapters!
you answered a couple of my questions but now I have even more!
Nice work!

[Katarina]

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

[[deleted user]]

Agreed!

[[deleted user]]

I have another chapter on my ipod. I will post it as soon as I have time (exams)

[[deleted user]]

Can't wait!