Lets start

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

My Rules
1) No fighting over things please!
2) Have fun
3) if you join you actually help out once in a while

SEEE simple!!!

Any Questions

[[deleted user]]

okay

[Bianca]

i dont totally get this group...

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

i'm making and publishing a book and i want you guys to give me some advise

[Bianca]

cool! is the starting on another topic? i think i read it

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

i'll start it soon hold on a sec...

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

Prologue rough draft i've got some of the story i've thought up for the prologue.

[Bianca]

ok

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

i don't know though give me ur advise

[Bianca]

ok i love it so far, but my advice is to use commas and punctuation like that. It seemed like the sentences were run-ons and i saw some good places where you could put a comma.

my advice, but i really want to know what will happen! :)

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

kk 6_6

[Bianca]

yay?

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

i'll start rough drafting c1 when i get back g2g

[Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind]

hmm