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message 401: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I need your help..." I said walking over with the young girl in my arms. "I need help finding her mother. She's lost"


message 402: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adrianna looked at the other two girls that looked nothing alike.... Before she whimpered feeling herself slip... Just like with her mom.... The next second she was on the ground having feel straight through Astra's arms... Passed through them.
Estella gasped looking at Astra and the child, before back at Astra, "her powers are uncontrolled," she muttered before nodding as she bent down careful not to touch the girl, "we'll find your mommy okay?" She said softly before glancing at Astra, "don't try to touch her, it won't work and it'll stress her out more," she warned before she disappeared leaving Adrianna sitting on the ground curled up and Sabrina standing there in distraught.


message 403: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked around dumbfounded. "But" I said as my hands moved in confusion "b-but"


message 404: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina and Adrianna were now staring at each other, before Sabrina finally spoke, "she's gifted Astra, you ran into her while she was invisible, that is one of them, her other which she has no control over is passing through objects....." She stated and smiled wearily, "she's a demon child..."


message 405: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I don't understand what to do..." I admitted softly.


message 406: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Comfort her," Sabrina stated softly before the little girl, Adrianna yelped shivering before looking up at the two girls, "don't you hear them?" she asked.


message 407: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded to Sabrina before slowly kneeling near the girl. "Hear what, sweetheart?"


message 408: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The girl looked at Astra and looked terrified, "He's behind you," she flinched and looked away, "he isn't nice.... He's calling us dirty names...." she muttered and Sabrina looked in that direction and her eyes widened in realization, "She sees ghosts...."


message 409: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i instantly turned around and looked. "dirty names eh..." i stood up and glared though i couldnt see them. "skat! go away you...you...dead...ghost?" i said pushing air


message 410: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adriana flinched before she sighed in relief smiling at Astra, "thank you..."


message 411: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I turned back to the girl and smiled. "You are very welcome. Just remember if you need anyone to scare the ghosts away, I'm your girl!" i said soft giggle.


message 412: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adrianna grinned at her, "okay, thank you," she purred and giggled causing Sabrina to smile and scooped her into her arms luckily Adrianna didn't fall through her arms.


message 413: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled before it instantly frowned. "Sabrina..."


message 414: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina looked over at her, "yeah?" she asked.


message 415: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at her, an arrow sticking out of my torso and blood pooling everywhere. I blinked a few times, unable to keep them right open. I fell to my side, trying to get the arrow out.


message 416: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina screamed before she set Adrianna down before rushing to her cousin's side and ripped the arrow out... "dammit, heal... Don't you die on me too!"


message 417: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I winced when she ripped the arrow out, and clenched the grass.

A girl ran out of the forest, bow in hand and ran over to them. "I am so sorry!" She said with a softened tone. "I wasn't aiming for you, I shot at a guy and he vanished." she said before pulling something out of her side pouch and moved up my shirt, spreading the glaze like stuff across it. It burned which made me scream, tears running down my cheeks. But it also healed any internal damage.


message 418: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~~~~~~

Sabrina sat back with Adrianna, holding her close so she wouldn't freak out....


message 419: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) The girl fixed the shirt and looked at sabrina and Adrianna. "Again i am dearly sorry. My name is Layla."


message 420: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) They nodded but besides that said nothing..


message 421: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla placed the girl she helped softly down since she fell asleep. And she stood there awkwardly before she slowly walked towards the trees.


message 422: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Sorry parents egging me to do something and didn't put much into it...))

Sabrina watched the girl with a frown, "why the heck did you shoot the arrow?" She demanded laying Adrianna down besides Astra.

Sapphira stared at the spot she saw the mean women kill the nice man.... The mean girl left after that, leaving his corpse behind, and her stuck in there.... She knew that no one was coming for her, and she was to rot down here, well she would die sooner then that... She was already drying up... And a water nymph out of water was a dead nymph.


message 423: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla jumped in shock and put her bow over her shoulder. "I was hunting someone and they vanished. I just told you that"


message 424: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina frowned, course she missed that, course she forgot.... "Who? Who was it?" She asked.


message 425: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Not sure but on the project it said Dragar" she said softly.


message 426: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina froze and looked at her, "Dragar?" she questioned and in that moment Estella appeared by Sabrina's side and heard the name looking at Layla sharply, "Dragar, as in the demon?" estella said surprised.


message 427: by Nightmare (last edited Apr 25, 2014 04:02AM) (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla nodded. "Yes. That Dragar, he's loose and all he's doing is causing chaos"


message 428: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella pursed her lips before nodding, "i'm surprised it isn't Calix, she muttered before looking back at Adrianna, "you mother is waiting for you, be off," she said gently. Adrianna smiled wearily waving goodbye before she dashed off...


message 429: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla looked down at the girl.
I groaned sitting up before I looked at her. "Maybe I can help...chaos is my specialty and I much rather get away from Kyle right now so why not. should be fun" i grinned. Layla smirked, "Okay." she turned to Estella and Sabrina. "What about you two?"


message 430: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina and Estella exchanged looks before Sabrina looked back at Layla, "i will, but Estella has other business' to attend to," she stated just as she disappeared.


message 431: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gave them an odd look before I stood. "Lead the way layla"

She nodded before turning around and walking off.

"Sabrina? Where has my sister run off too?" I asked


message 432: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina followed, seeing, on the outside, less troubled over her mates death.. She looked at Astra and smiled, "I haven't a clue, you know your sister... She does as she pleases," she stated shrugging.


message 433: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) There was a swift movement before layla crouched. Her bow coming out as quick as a breeze, arrow docked. She looked around and waited.


message 434: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina was instantly on guard, going silent.


message 435: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) There was a chuckle and I jumped, whipping around but saw nothing. "What was that!?"

"Demons...two...males...there" she said as her arrows whistled through the air and hit a tree. she docked another and listened.


message 436: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina crouched down pulling Astra with her, "shhh..." she told her before looking at Layla, "What do they look like?"


message 437: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Hard to say, I can't exactly see them." she said softly before she pulled her arm back holding her bow still as she looked around. "They're fast"


message 438: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina nodded and tried to get a look...


message 439: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) A shadow whipped by and layla shot. There was a hissing before a blonde girl collapsed on the ground. Layla smiled. "One down and two to g-" before she could finish her sentence she was thrown into a tree, a man over the young girl his eyes black.


message 440: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Before Sabrina could react and help anyone another man she knew very well appeared and grabbed the man who had threw Layla and lifted him up pulling him away, "Don't Dragar," the man grumbled, his voice demanded obedience.

Sabrina finally out of her frozen state ran over to the girl gasping, "oh lord!" she said and pulled out the arrow as she placed both hands to her wound, "Any bad reaction to blood," she questioned the girl...


message 441: by Nightmare (last edited May 10, 2014 03:58PM) (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Dragar growled and whipped his gaze at the man. "YOU saw it Malik! You saw what they did! She could be dying! And do you not care!?" his gaze went to the girls. "I'm gonna kill them" he hissed and went to get up.

the girl was shaking as she tried to keep her eyes opened. She was slightly hypervenalating and she shook her head no.


message 442: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik kept him down, "yes the girl did, and she will be punished but not by you, calm down," he commanded..

((Sabrina was talking to Brooke.......))


message 443: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((the fail part was i knew that...i have no clue why i wrote layla. xD but i edited it))

dragar growled, keeping still but anger still rolled off him.


message 444: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((kk thanks))

Malik nodded, "better, now get lost i will deal with this," he stated.

Sabrina nodded, "Good, this may hurt, but i wouldn't know," she said and sliced her wrist before pressing it to her wound...


message 445: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Dragar growled. "I am older, you do not tell me what to do! But for the sake of our sister i will leave, but I'm warning you malik, if you fail to deal with this i will kill them, all of them!" and with that he was gone.

The girl groaned before she winced. Her eyes clenching as she grasped the ground.


message 446: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik rolled his eyes before he looked at the girl who attacked his sister and glared, "you hurt an innocent, any words of defense?" he growled.

Sabrina kept the pressure until her wound healed and she pulled away, soon the girl's wound began healing...


message 447: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla swallowed. "I'm sorry, I didnt mean to harm her." she said getting up. "I was among for the man, dragar"

The girl shakily sat up. "T-thank you"


message 448: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik glared, "yet you still shot knowing there was more then one and couldn't identify either, what if it were foolish humans? you would have killed an innocent," he hissed stepping closer to her, "is that all you have to say for yourself?"

Sabrina smiled, "it's no problem, sorry for the part i planned in that," she said and got up holding out her hand, "names sabrina, maybe you've heard of me.."


message 449: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Layla backed up, in into a tree nervously. "Please don't kill me." she whispered.

The girl smiled. "Yes I have. I'm Brooke, I'm that stuff box's sister Andy other brother, dragar. Yeah..sorry about the whole scared thing, dragar and I were playing tackle." she said before looking at malik. "Ugh Mal, leave the poor girl alone" she said taking Sabrina's hand and getting up.


message 450: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Oh, killing you is not a punishment," he stated with a smile, "I'll send you somewhere in the future, with someone who will do a lot worse then Dragar can..." he growled and approached her, "no words yet?" Malik looked back at Brooke and glared at her, "don't tell me what to do sister."

Sabrina chuckled, "i know," she stated and flitted over to Malik, "Estella can help with the time travel.."


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