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message 251: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gasped gently as he grabbed me and my lips parted allowing him access before I tried to fight him for dominance, cowering against him soon enough so that he won.


message 252: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle delved his tongue into her mouth fighting her for dominance ending up victorious and greedily took claim of her mouth exploring it..


message 253: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I moaned softly against his mouth, grinding my hips against his unable to control myself.


message 254: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle instantly drew back staring at her wide eyed and breathless shocked at what he was doing, the backing away part not the continuing it... Which scared him and confused him insanely...


message 255: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I sat up, looking at him oddly, knowing something was up. "Kyle are you okay?" I asked now nervous for his sake.


message 256: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle shook his head clear of anything lingering before nodding stiffly, "I'm fine," he grumbled before he was out and off the bed pacing.


message 257: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I know a lie when I hear one." I said walking over as I placed a hand on his arm. "Please tell me what's the matter."


message 258: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle stiffened at her touch before looking at her sharply and glared. But he said nothing and pulled free of her grasp and continued pacing...


message 259: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I stepped infront of him grossing my arms. "I don't take no for an answer!" I said simply.


message 260: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle glared at her, "good thing I didn't give you am answer that included no," he spat out sharply..


message 261: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I rolled my eyes. "Well if in trapped here the least you can do is tell me what's wrong"


message 262: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Your what's wrong!" He shouted at her whipping around go face her, "your bewitching me," he snarled glaring at her as he approached his whole body shaking with anger and he towered over her imitating..


message 263: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I'm bewitching you?" I said rather confused. "How could I possibly do that?"


message 264: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I don't know how are you?!" Kyle snarled at her.


message 265: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Kyle I don't bewitch people." I said before crossing my arms again.


message 266: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "You better not, but you still bewitched me," Kyle snarled and whipped around walking away from her...


message 267: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I laughed. "How could I have possibly done that, you were with me the whole time!"


message 268: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Exactly!" He said whipping around to face her, "you've been with me the whole time! Bewitching me throughout that time," he hissed.


message 269: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "How exactly are you bewitched?" I asked.


message 270: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle huffed and turned away from her ignoring her..


message 271: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Don't ignore me!" I hissed appearing infront of him.


message 272: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle glared at her darkly, "I will do whatever I wish," he snarled and continued pacing..


message 273: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "If you're gonna ignore me at least let me out!" I hissed steam coming out of my nose and mouth almost like smoke.


message 274: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "What's the fun in that?" He snapped bitterly...


message 275: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Ugh! You're hopeless!" I said before walking towards the door realizing it was still locked before I walked over to the bed, sitting down and held myself. My hand slipped to the mark he created as I touched it, tears streaming down my cheeks.


message 276: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) In a bit Kyle just growled and disappeared....

((Hehe do you see what's happening?! ))

Kyle then appeared and grabbed Estella by the throat pinning her to a wall glaring at her, "what
The hell is happening to me?" He demanded harshly..

Estella who was holding his wrist trying not to choke and gasped out, "love you idiot."


message 277: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked around when he left, I was getting out if it was the last thing I do!


message 278: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle snarled In irritation before he tossed Estella's body carelessly on the ground like she was a rag doll before he disappeared and reappeared in his room glaring at her. "your free to go," he snarled and teleported her out of his room..

((Appear where ever you'd like))

Estella whimpered where she laid on the floor where he tossed her closing her Wes as she curled up her pain filled body....


message 279: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I appeared right back by the tree, shifting so my clothing was normal once again. I wasn't one for dresses. I wore a black long sleeve with light blue jeans and a scarf, to hide the....mark. I shook my head trying to imagine it not happening. I headed off maybe back to Sabrina and sapphira or maybe to find Stella.


message 280: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina strolled in with sapphira on her shoulder giggling before she saw Estella . She gasped and rushed over touching her gently, "Estella are you okay?" She asked softly... Estella managed to nod Before passing out.


message 281: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I blinked a few times before seeing Estella and ran over. "Stella?" I said a little shaky. "S-Stella...."


message 282: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina sighed and looked at her, "she's fine, she's fine, Kyle must have zapped her energy out making her exhausted," she mumbled stroking Estella's hair while sapphira still up on Sabrina's shoulder hide her head in her hair...


message 283: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I knelt down. "Why the fuck would he do that?!"


message 284: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Demons get a little uncontrollable when their angry. More so their powers even for them," Sabrina stated with a shrug.


message 285: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded, rolling my eyes before looking at sapphira. "Thank you for watching her. Did you guys have fun?"


message 286: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira peeked out from Sabrina's hair and smiled nodding, "she took me to see pretty sights," she said...


message 287: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled at her softly. "Did you like them?" I asked


message 288: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira nodded eagerly then blushed, "yeah, i did, thank you for asking..." She said softly...


message 289: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled largely before looking at Sabrina then Estella. I placed my her to hers. "Stella...."


message 290: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella slapped her hand away, "no sleeping girl, come back in an hour," she grumbled her eyes still firmly close...


message 291: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I jumped slightly. "Well..."


message 292: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Then," Sabrina finished her eyes wide before she burst out laughing...


message 293: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled before laughing as well. "Even in the oddest times we tend to laugh. Oh did I miss you Sabrina."


message 294: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina grinned at Astra letting sapphira down before hugging astra still laughing, "oh right we do, and the chaos we cause together is absolutely hilarious!" She said laughing...


message 295: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled, nodding before brushing my hair back. "Ah...good times." I laughed. "And each time Estella would freak and say to act our on ages."


message 296: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Tehe


message 297: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina laughed nodding, "yeah, god I hate her lectures, they get so annoying," she mumbled rolling her eyes and laughed, "remember the time we blew up that building? And Estella lectured us about having consideration for others properties," she said grinning, "and then after we broke each of our own things and blamed it on her?" She smiled fondly, "oh good times, they should really reconsider sticking us together, we just cause too much chaos."


message 298: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled. "But...they never do since being younger then everyone. Whining still works" I laughed.


message 299: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina laughed with her chuckling and shook her head, "it surprises me at times that Estrella is younger then me, she sure acts like a old hag," she mocked smirking..

"I heard that you ungrateful bitch," Estella snarled from the ground glaring at them..


message 300: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I covered my mouth, trying not to laugh before my eyes looked over to her and they reared up. "Stella?" I croaked out. "W-what is that?" I said pointing to the think on her neck.


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