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message 201: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle chuckled, "close your pretty eyes young one and rest," he purred waving his hand over her face closing her eyes and he cradled her close as he walked towards his place..


Estella smiled softly and held out a hand, "it's a pleasure to meet you miss, but do you know how to get rid of this by any chance," she asked brushing back her hair and showed her Calix's mark.


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Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded softly before clenching his shirt gently, knowing I should stop this, but not wanting to. Almost like my body was in control and my mind lost. Stella wasn't telling me something. "B-but...b-but..." I whispered softly.

Katriana shook her hand before she shook her head. "I'm sorry I cannot, the mark will not come off unless the one who put it there dies. And I cannot let you kill an innocent soul" she purred softly.


message 203: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle placed a finger to her lips shushing her, "no buts my dear little star, just rest," he said like he was compelling her to do as he commanded...

Estella scoffed letting her crazy hair fall back, "innocent my ass," she grumbled before sighing, "trust me it'll be gone once I die, but until then ill just avoid that crazy son of a bitch," she snarled not in the best of moods before smiling at the girl, "thanks at the very least anyway," she told her.


message 204: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded a few times before falling into complete darkness, laying gently against him though my hand still clung to him as if my life depended on it.

"Did you ever think why he did it?" She asked.
She said before bowing her head like a princess(wink wink). "Wait! Do you have family?!" She said rather nervous. "Like siblings or parents?"


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle smirked feeling her go under and then teleported her to his place, they appeared in his bed chambers and he gently placed her on the bed tucking her in before he crawled in beside her dematerializing both their outfits until only their undergarments were left... He then pulled her in close spooning her as he nuzzled his head into the crook of her neck taking a deep breath before falling into the darkness.


Estella stiffened before shaking her head, "no I do not, but I told him there was nothing going to happen between us, that it was only a one time thing... I don't care if he did it to protect me or what not," she growled to herself mainly now before she looked at her surprised knowing her to be someone of power already... Estella raised and eyebrow, "umm yes, I do, a sister and two cousins.... Why?" She asked confused.


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Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Damn. XD

I stiffened at the cool air against my skin before nuzzling I to the warmth that was next to me. My mind wondered. Wondering what it was.

Katriana swallowed. "Where are they?" She said before looking around. "You must keep an eye on them. I fear, I sense something coming, something big. You must watch out." She said before walking a little closer. "Show me your eyes...." She said softly.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~~~


Estella swallowed hard, "I know... I know!" She shouted at the end, "I've seen her death, everything she's done it just leading her to it and she won't listen she won't stop, i don't know how to help her," she said in a sob by the end before looking at her wide eyed, "why would you want to see my eyes?" She asked..


message 208: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ~le mini time skip~

I stirred gently, clenching something tight. My eyes fluttered open slightly as I adjusted to the light. That's when I saw it. A body...well actually a chest but still. I slowly looked up, my stomach nervous. I continued till I saw him. Kyle. I bit my lips before resting my head back down, this had to be a dream. It had to been. That's when I realized I wasn't wearing clothes. Only my braw and underwear. I swallowed hard, biting my lips harder.


Katriana shook her head. "That's not who you should be worrying about." She said before walking over, grasping her face and forcefully looking into her eyes. She went wide eyes at what she saw.


message 209: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) As she stresses about this the deep rumble of his voice sounded in her ears as he said, "I have not taken you virginity little one," Kyle rumbled in his sexy morning voice as his eyes snapped opened and he peered down at her, "yet."



Estella frowned in confusion opening her mouth to ask what she meant but the women had grasped her face and Estella froze seeing her reaction, "what is it?" She demanded.


message 210: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed before looking up at him. I felt my face get hot under pressure. Meaning I was blushing....a lot. "H-how did I get here...and what happened to my clothes....?" I asked softly.

Katriana moved back, pulling her hands away before closing her eyes. "You bring out his good side. He marked you to keep you safe, he loves you." She said softly before opening her eyes. "Something is coming for you, and he saved you're life putting that mark there. It will never leave, no matter what you do. He placed it there, not to tell everyone that you're his, but to keep you safe from harm." She said before looking around. "You mustn't judge a book by its cover." She said simply. "I can see what you cannot, the eyes are the windows to the soul. You know that you're meant to be mated. You knew it once you first laid eyes on him. Just like Kyle and Astra. You must tell her, if you don't everything she's ever known with wave in at once, her mind could explode."


message 211: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Me of course, how else would you have gotten here?" Kyle pointed out liking the image of her blushing in his bed, "and I don't think It would have been comfortable to sleep in your gown, no matter how gorgeous it was," he stated with a shrug of his shoulders.

Estella frowned taking this all in before shaking her head, "that's insane, I'm not targeted, that isn't me, I am nobody, I sAve others who are something I'm in no danger," she stated how market scoffing tho she couldn't deny the little flip in her chest with the idea of him wanting to protect her, but she had to shove it away, he may be evil and crap not that she actually cared but she couldn't be around for him, her job lies elsewhere everywhere, he deserved better. "He deserves someone that will give him what he needs, a proper mate," Estella stated softly before she gave the girl a look, "I may not be able to see my own or CALIXS future but I know my sisters, if she falls for Kyle now, she will die, I cannot let that happen, maybe in a different world a different century but not now." She stated


message 212: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "S-so you stripped me?" I said almost shocked then anything. "If you wanted me in your bed with no clothes you could have bought me a drink first." I teased before looking away as I blushed harder, not even believing that I said that. "Please tell me I just thought that and didn't say it out loud." I said a little embarrassed.

Katriana shook her head. "You are his mate and it will always be. You cannot change fate." She stated. "And you're sister is falling fast, she will die, and there's nothing you can do to stop it."
A man appeared behind her, wrapping his arms around her waist as she gasped in shock before cooling when she knew who it was. "Estella this is Grayson, Grayson....this is Estella." The man nodded a hello. He had shaggy, messy dark brown hair, that hung in his face and bright golden brown eyes. He was tanned and muscular an don't forget sexy as fuck!!!


message 213: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed, actually laughed at her comment smirking down at her, "if you were that easy I would have," he purred before smiling slyly at her, "if it eases your mind young one," he teased.

Estella growled, "I will prevent her death don't bother telling me otherwise," she snarled ignoring the statement before.
When the man appeared she scowled already deep in a foul mood and just nodded, "hi," she said stiffly before walking away waving good bye to the odd irritating girl..


message 214: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed, actually laughed at her comment smirking down at her, "if you were that easy I would have," he purred before smiling slyly at her, "if it eases your mind young one," he teased.

Estella growled, "I will prevent her death don't bother telling me otherwise," she snarled ignoring the statement before.
When the man appeared she scowled already deep in a foul mood and just nodded, "hi," she said stiffly before walking away waving good bye to the odd irritating girl..


message 215: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I blushed even harder before I hid against his chest. "That's embarrassing." I whispered to myself mainly before I looked up at him. "You still haven't answered me from last night. Why choose me to be your date when there's tons of other girls out there. Why me?" I asked.

Katriana shook her head. "What I say is true. Don't deny it!" She said before bother her and Grayson vanished.


message 216: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle chuckled as he twirled a lock of her hair in his hand looking down at her, "cause your mine, and I wanted them all to know that," he snarled possessively..

Estella simply ignored her And raced off back to the city knowing whatever calix was protecting her from was stupid and useless no one knew she existed let alone cared and that's how she liked it... Not to mention she was going to save her sister.


message 217: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at him oddly. "I don't understand. What do you mean by I'm yours?" I asked.

~~~


message 218: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle grinned, "that your mine, and no one can touch you," he stated.


message 219: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded softly before sitting up slightly too look him in the eye. "I must ask you, do you know what Stella isn't telling me? It seems everyone knows except for me." I said curiously.


message 220: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle looked at her oddly, "your sister tells the future no?" He pointed out, "i don't see the future I wouldn't know what crazy shit she's spewing," he stated simply.

Sabrina was doubled over laughing as Estella glared at her, "It's not funny!" She exclaimed hotly and frustratedly while Sabrina just held out her hand gripping her shoulder As she looked up at her tears spilling out of her eyes for laughing so hard, "it tis!" She cried while sapphira was on the floor rolling around as she laughed holding her sides since they ached.


message 221: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded. "Well I know she's hiding something from me and Sabrina too, and I thought we were all closer then that but I guess not when they can't tell me what their fucking hiding." I said as my hair began to float slightly, my eyes glowling darker as my breath was heavier.

~~~


message 222: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle looked at her amused, "just like you told Estella you went out with me?" He pointed out unfazed by her growing anger, he does know Sabrina for crying out loud, but it did make him pull her close and continue twirling her hair in his fingers. "Some things are just best left untold."


message 223: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed before hugging him slightly. "I couldn't find her, I assume that Sabrina would have told her already." I said before looking up at him a little faised by him.


message 224: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle stiffened when she hugged him before awkwardly hugging her back, "that maybe so, but remember you snuck down to earth without telling her," he pointed out knowing it was probable creepy how he knew all this stuff but he didn't exactly care..


message 225: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked up at him with a slight grin. "Hay, I do it all the time, I need more adventure then what I get at home. But to Stella, I'm just a child and I get into trouble and I'm not good dead and blah blah blah..." I said before giggling.


message 226: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle looked at her hard, "you should learn to listen to your sister more often, she's the one saving you half the time Is she not?" Kyle pointed out


message 227: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I growled slightly. "So...? She's my older sister that's what sisters do...." I said before I flashed on another dress, this one different from the first, this one only held together by a few strings on either side. It was almost revealing, it pretty much only covered her parts.
I slipped from his grasp, hopping off the bed as I flashed on some black gladiator shoes before looking at him. "Nice chat, but I must be going, catch you later....or not...either way works for me." I said flashing a grin before walking towards the door.


message 228: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle didn't move only say up more on the bed his hands behind his head and watching her as she walked with hungry eyes, "the door is locked little star," he stated after a bit just as she was about to turn the knob which wouldn't have turned, "thought you'd like to know, plus only I have the ability to flash in and out of my room...." He added smirking devilishly at her.


message 229: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I turned around, a little bit of a pissed off look appeared on my face. "You locked me in here?!" I said taking a few steps closer. "How can I get out?"


message 230: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed and nodded, "of course I did, didn't want you to wander off now did I?" He pointed out chuckling, "oh you'll have to plead to my inner kindness," he sneered grinning.


message 231: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I raised a brow. "And how can I do that?" I asked crossing my arms over my chest.


message 232: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle shrugged, "that's what your supposed to know and plead," he purred grinning...


message 233: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I placed my hands on the bed. "And what would you want..." I asked raising a brow before moving over to his side, my eyes never leaving his b


message 234: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle grinned seductively at her, "what any man wants," he purred.


message 235: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I let out a breath before licking my dry lip, staring up for a moment before looking back at him. "Tell anyone...and I'll kill you." I said softly before carefully crawling on him before gently laying on him. "One time thing....be happy.." I said before gently pressing a kiss to his chest as I lowered.


message 236: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle grinned down at her before his smile faltered and he pushed her away shaking his head adverting her gaze trying to figure out what felt... Weird.


message 237: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at him oddly. "What?"


message 238: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle shook his head frowning, "I don't know," he grumbled before he pulled her close against him staring down at her before he ducked his head down to her neck kissing and nipping venturing around to find her spot.


message 239: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gasped slightly at his sudden movement but made no argument to reject. I watched him carefully.


message 240: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle found a spot and he began attacking it greedily nipping kissing making the skin tender before his eyes turned black and he sank his teeth into her neck...


message 241: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gasped as my eyes shot wide before closing, I grasped onto him before the gasp turned into a moan. No. I thought no no no...this can't be. Please make it something else.


message 242: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle kept biting her, her moan causing his desire to flicker before he released her licking the wound before pulling her back brushing her hair out of the way before examining his mark, a smile curled onto his features as he glanced at the star on her neck before at her, "yes little star, your mine," he purred before he captured her lips.


message 243: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) A soft tear rushed down my cheek before I melted into the kiss, cupping his neck gently as I kissed him back.


message 244: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) **you're

Kyle slowly laid her down on her back with him hovering over her never breaking the kiss as he tangled his hands into her hair dominating her mouth...


message 245: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I grasped onto his back, forgetting everything for what seemed like anything. And the on you thing that was on my mind was him. I wrapped my legs around his waist.


message 246: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle continued to kiss her passionately and dominantly loving every second his mouth was attacking hers..


message 247: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I flipped him so I was on top till I pulled my lips from his and began to kiss his chest, moving lower and lower


message 248: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle groaned in pleasure his muscles going crazy beneath her touch before he realized were she was headed and flipped her back over and hovered over her growling as he possessively claimed her lips again.


message 249: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled against his lips before wrapping my legs around his waist, and my hands cupped his neck.


message 250: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle continued kissing her hungrily his hand coming back and down to cup her ass cheek while his other hand was supporting his weight, his tongue licked his bottom lip asking for permission..


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