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message 151: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded before crossing my arms over my chest, and continued to walk.

Calix grinned before flipping her so she was on her back and he "sat" on top of her. "Calm down little angel, I won't hurt you." He said stroking her cheek.


message 152: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) < straddled her waist with his legs pinning her down easily.... ??>. ((Suggestion))

As she walked... It was eerily quiet... Too quiet... Until a girls scream pierced that air...

Estella stiffened freezing beneath him and looked up at him with wide eyes, "how did I get here? Did she take over again? Dammit I hate it when she does that," she muttered tho she unconsciously leaned towards his touch... "Your a demon calix, I've heard about you... How can you say you won't hurt me?" She demanded quietly..


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Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((Idk))

I jumped, my head whipping around before I darted to the sound of the scream.

Calix leaned his head lower. "Cause I won't." He purred honestly before kissing her neck.


message 154: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) She would have kept running until she reached a stream... A stream with water that was tinted red.... The scream came again before it was gone and soft sobs replaced it a little ways down..

Estella scowled opening her mouth to argue that point but before she could he kissed her neck and she gasped her hand immediately clutching onto his shoulders as she tilted her head to surprisingly give him more access while she laid there frozen in anticipation..


message 155: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked around to see where the scream actually came from. Wondering what happened.

Calix grinned victoriously as his hands traveled up her sides and back down again as he nipped, kissed, and licked at the skin on her neck.


message 156: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) There was a figure curled up near a rock just down the way sobbing.... But it didn't exactly look human...

Estella shuddered while arching slightly towards him as a moan escaped her before she could stop it as she clenched onto him more tightly wanting more while she tried to gain control of herself...


message 157: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I walked over to it, kneeling down. "Excuse me? Are you alright?"

Calix moved the trail to her ear, grinding himself slightly against her as he purred. "You spend to much time denying. Why won't you give in? Just for a little bit....I promise not to hurt you." He purred, as he gently nibbled on her ear before planting a kiss to her jaw.


message 158: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The small, child like... Girl was curled up her head hidden but hearing her she looked up staring at her with wide tear stained violet eyes vines for hair hanging down in a mess, "they're all gone, they're all gone and I'm alone," she sobbed..

Estella shuddered gripping tightly into him as gasped softly when he rubbed himself against her but managed to stifle a moan before slowly shaking her head, "I-I can't see you," she whispered a moan sneaking out before she continued, "I can't see you in my future, I can't see you past this point period, and I don't know why," she mumbled shivering liking the feeling of him getting hard on by her...


message 159: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I crawled closer, pulling the little girl into an embrace. "Who's all gone?" I asked rubbing her back.

Calix's breath skimmed across her chest. "Because you haven't have in. What if you try to follow off the patterns you see. Be...yourself...be who you want to be. Be...naughty." He purred in her ear. "Just for me. At least once. Common...you know you like it. You know you want it." He said knowing she could feel him being aroused against her.


message 160: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The little girl hugged her tightly, "my mommy, my daddy, everyone, all my brothers and sister... All gone, they told me to hide.. And I did, I'm the youngest you see... And they're all gone," she sobbed..

Estella oddly felt herself becoming wet with his words and groaned clenching into him tightly and bought her lips up to his ear to whisper, "I'm going to give you this one chance.... Do whatever you want, and ill do whatever you say," she purred nipping his ear lobe..


message 161: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I rubbed her back. ((I wonder...)) "what's your name sweetheart?" I asked softly.

Calix grinned before groaning once more. "Strip for me....I want to see your real self..." He purred, his lips clashing against hers.


message 162: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "S-sapphira," she stammered looking up at her, "w-what's yours?"

Estella shivered looking up at him questioningly before he was kissing her and she was kissing him back only to break it after a few moments to whisper huskily, "you can't handle the real me," she taunted.....


message 163: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((YES! I WAS RIGHT!!!! HA! Lol))

I nodded. "I'm Astra." I said simply. "It's nice to meet you sapphira. Common, I'll take care of you." I said holding out my hand for her.

Calix grinned. "I can try."


message 164: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira swallowed hard before hesitantly taking her hand, "will you help me find my mummy?" She asked softly tears still running down...

Estella leaned closer to him a sly grin on her lips, "show me," she purred as her clothes materialized off her, "strip for me you naughty demon."


message 165: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded. "I can try."

Calix smiled before taking off his shirt revealing his sexy ass abs as he began to work on his pants.


message 166: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira smiled then wiping her tears, "thank you wish Astra," she thanked politely... "What are you exactly? Your not a nymph like I..."


Estella eyed him hungrily as she soon flipped him over so he was on the bottom and swatted his hands away and grinned down at him her eyes black with lust, "I'll get that for you sweetie," she purred seductively before she straddled his waist and began kissing and licking her way around and down his chest trekking slowly across his abs and even lower to his navel pausing there as she glanced at him through her lashes, "shall I continue?" She purred against his skin..


message 167: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I hesitated. "That's not important. Common." I said softly walking her back towards the village.

Calix grinned. "Please, it's wonderful. Please continue."


message 168: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira shrugged it off and clung to her hand keeping glued to her side scared since she'd never left her home before...


Estella grinned right back before she continued lower her hand slowly tracing up his harden length beneath the fabric before she unbuttoned it zipping it down before tugging his pants down and away including anything underneath that... Before straddling him again so that their parts touched but he couldn't enter as she bent forward so that their faces were inches apart, "now what naughty demon?"


message 169: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed hard before walking into a building, a hotel to be exact.

Calix smiled. "Ride me my time angel, before I fuck you..." He purred softly, thou being completely honest.


message 170: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) (( a hotel in Ancient Rome?))

Estella shuddered at his words before she at up resting her hands on his hard chest closing her eyes as she began grinding against him teasingly light before she knew he was ready and grasped him gently moving him to enter her as she slowly came down as he slid within her... Was she came to the hilt she stopped with a moan clenching onto him as her body quaked...


message 171: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((I don't know where to go lol))

*i brought her to a building, needing to get her somewhere safe.

Calix smiled as his chest flexed beneath her, he gently started to thrust in and out of her, keeping a steady rhythm to make sure she was use to him as he grasped her bare back and pinned her against him. He gently kissed her shoulder then her neck moving up till he reached her lips.


message 172: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira just followed whimpering every time she saw someone that was human... But only relaxed when they got out of the clearing..


Estella quaked moaning softly before she began moving up and down taking him fully then out, only to slam back into him nipping at his neck before she eyed him waiting for their lips to make contact...


message 173: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed before looking around, bringing her to a back room. I cupped her face in my hands gently. "I will have to leave you soon. But I will find someone to watch you till I get back." She said softly before looking down at the floor. "I could get Estella. But god knows where she Is. I cannot trust a human here. Then who....who do I-SABRINA! That's it!" I said rather happy.

Calix grasped her back, pinning her harder against him before cupping her neck to press there lips together rather harshly but hard enough to cause pleasure. Calix on the other hand was rather enjoying this as his fangs skimmed out, brushing against her lips.


message 174: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphire followed obediently before looking at her and swallowed nervous nodding as she shook... "W-who's Sabrina?" She asked

"Me!" Sabrina sang giggling as she strolled towards them with a big smile wearing her robes the indicated she was in fact an important person in the Roman Empire... She smiled at sapphira, "hello young one," she said softly and looked at Astra, "you called?"

Estella hissed out a breath at his claws at hung her back towards him as she continued moving moaning at the delicious pleasure before he was kissing her... With that Estella dug her fingers into his hair pulling his head closer as she kissed him right back and moaned everytime she felt his fangs... As he tongue slipped out to flick against his fangs...


message 175: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at her with a smile. "I need you to watch my friend sapphire for a little bit till I come back. Could you do that?"
I said as my outfit turned into a dress, a beautiful red dress that was shorter in the front and long in the back, dragging behind me. A Jeweled belt around my waist. And matching black shoes that were five inch high. My long brown hair in full curls as the bangs covering my green eye, leaving the blue one to show. I bit my lip hoping shed understand.

Calix groaned flipping her till she was on her back, he continued to thrust into her, loving the feel of her hands in his hair, he grasped her waist. Pinning her down as he smiled against her lips. "Beautiful. Just beautiful" he purred to her. "You're fantastic!"


message 176: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina nodded smiling at her, "don't worry, ill look after the sweet nymph, have fun on that date, be sweet and awesome like I know you are, if Kyle does any shit tell him ill be there," she said warningly before pecking her cheek and turned to sapphira, "come on sweetie, lets get you to some water," she cooed as sapphira blushed and lowered her head down...

Estella groaned, loving the feeling as she arched towards him wrapping her legs around his waist as she began tugging lightly at his hair making it pleasurable as she groaned before she moved her lips to his neck, "you feel so good inside me," she purred in his ear before kissing his ear before clasping his earlobe with her teeth...


message 177: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled softly before waving goodbye, nodding slightly before I looked at the sky, still having a bit of time I made my way towards the forest hoping to at least perch for a bit.
I appeared in a tree, sitting back sweetly as my dress tumbled off the branch. I closed my eyes, my hands placed gently in my lap.

Calix smiled as he pulled away, looking down at her. "Good to know..." He said before trusting deeper in till he knew he hit her inner wall. He instantly went for her neck, pecking it gently. Ever so gently.


message 178: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) As it grew to dusk.... Well as soon as it was dusk.. The branch disappeared from under her and she fell only to be caught by a sexy looking Kyle in a sexy fancy roman robes, but it looked like a futuristic tux... "Hay doll, miss me?" He purred..

Estella grinned up at him before she threw her head back and cried out in pleasure when he thrusted deep into her hitting the one spot that caused her body to tremble and her pleasure began to heightened as she gripped him tightly while she kept her head back allowing him more access her to it..


message 179: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gasped, clinging to him. "Miss you? You got rid of my branch." I said like a child. "But you did catch me so I'm giving you a chance. One chance." I said before carefully slipping onto my feet. "So where are you taking me exactly since you didn't answer me earlier." I asked softly, fixing my dress that rose up a little since I was in the tree and he had me in his arms.

Calix grinned victoriously before sinking his teeth In to her, marking her.


message 180: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle winked at her, "oh darling you like being my damsel in distress," he purred to her before he placed her hand on his arm before leading her off, "oh you'll see, it's a surprise little star."

Estella froze digging her nails into his scalp clinging to him her eyes wide but she didn't scream she only paused for a while... Before she let out a groan shuddering as she shattered around him as her eyes opened and they were glowing..


message 181: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I rolled my eyes slightly before holding his arms gently, walking with him. "No funny business." I said softly, turning to look at him.

Calix pulled away, revealing a crescent moon, a dagger through the center, an angel wing connected. His very mark. He looked down at her devilishly. "You belong to me now. Now and forever." He purred before kissing the mark gently, sending a pleasurable vibration between both of them.


message 182: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle chuckled who was looking straight ahead but had glanced at her with a sexy lop sided smirk, "nothing pulled up my selves little star, cross my heard and hope to die," he purred chuckling as they suddenly walked into a rippling portal and appeared in an elegant dining room filled with people sitting and eating.... Romans, but it was fancy...

Estella shivered at his words shaking her head slowly and opened her mouth to argue but the only thing that escaped was a needy moan as her body quaked again feeling the pleasure his kiss to his mark sent through her...


message 183: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Where are we?" I asked instantly before rubbing at my neck where the necklace Sabrina gave me was placed, it burned, how could it burn?

Calix grinned. "My little time angel...your sounds are breath taking." He chuckled.


message 184: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle smirked, "I had gotten an invitation to this ball sort of thing that these Romans do, and I had to bring a date," he said As he lead her towards their seats and glanced at her, "And I thought of you," he purred..

Estella shivered finally gaining some control over herself as she looked at him opening her mouth again and actually spoke this time, "you marked me as your," she said breathlessly, "yet this is a one time thing," she pointed out, reminding him of their words before they began this...


message 185: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded, swallowing hard before freezing. "Me? Why me?" I asked curiously before scratching at it again, it irritated, and burned...it hurt.

Calix smirked. "You say that now, but later you'll think differently, that mark is like a call, touch it ill be there instantly. And there's no way to get it off. So I guess you're stuck. You'll sister will be stuck too. Mating...you gotta love it." He purred before caressing her cheek. "Well, by now she should be with Kyle, possibly itching to feel." He chuckled evilly. "


message 186: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle smirked knowing she was feeling irritated by now, "because your mine little star, and I'm going to make it known," he purred as he pulled out a chair gesturing for her to sit...

Estella widened her eyes realizing what she had just let him done, and knew she had to get out of there... She so materialized clothes on herself before pushing him forcefully of her causing him to fly off before she jumped up and ran for the door while morphing into her fallen angel form, dark almost black red wings, her hair longer and darker with literal flames for her clothing while the rest of her skin that wAsnt near her parts were bare even her feet... She then burst through the door of his room and bolted down the corridors...


message 187: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded softly before sitting down, I looked up at him a little worried thou not at the same time. I grasped the hem of my dress, the necklace was bugging me but I didn't know why. I could only think of one thing to do, but I didn't know if that was the best choice to do. I grasped the locks on it. Swallowing hard. Should I? Should I keep it? I thought it over unable to decide.

Calix grinned, the blanket covering his lower half as he watched her. His plans worked perfectly.


message 188: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle glanced at her smirking and pushed her seat in before taking the seat beside her, "I'd keep it on love, it may not be able to keep me away, but it keeps other things I don't want touching you away, or even near," he said mumbling looking straight ahead again his expression impassive...

In seconds Estella was laying in the forest laying on her back her wings out stretched her hair everywhere and her limbs just sprawled on the ground staring up at the tree tops in a daze, a daze of shock and utter regret... Stupid animalistic hormones, she snarled disgustingly to herself in her mind before she began clawing at his mark wanting to tear off the skin in hopes it disappears...


message 189: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I froze before my cheeks flushed instantly. Nodding I slowly pulled my hands away, placing them in my lap. "How do you know what it will do?" I asked softly

Everytime she touched it, it either shocked her or sent vibrations through her. The mark never broke it was strong and it was staying.


message 190: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle chuckled glancing at her, "the power emitting from it, it's strong witchcraft, it's obvious to tell if your not oblivious to the world of magic," he stated shaking his head from obvious amusement..

Estella eventually stopped trying tears running down her cheeks since the skin around the fucken mark was torn and bleeding painfully... Estella then turned over curled up on the forest floor and silently sobbed as she whispered, "I'm sorry sister... I'm so sorry.."


message 191: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I crossed my legs before looking at him. "You are one to judge a book by its cover." I said with a grin.

There was a soft touch on her arm, almost as if we're a gloved hand.


message 192: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle leaned slightly towards him looking down at her, "what do you mean by that little star?" He asked..


Estella yelped instantly shifting into a fox and scurried a bit away before whipping around to face who had touched her ready to attack tho her sight was still slightly blurrier by tears...


message 193: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I shook my head. "It's nothing. Just nothing. I said nothing." I said before smiling at my earlier remark. "Nothing at all" I leaned back before looking at him with a soft smile. "Judging books by their covers..." I taunted with a seducive grin.

A girl with a black cloaked hood coward. "Please don't hurt me!" She cried, her voice laced with a thick British accent.


message 194: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle chuckled rolling his eyes as she shook head head slightly, "your something little star," he said grinning at her before he glanced around..


Estella calmed realizing it wAsnt calix it anyone as such and shifted back Into her human form sitting crossed legged staring at the person, "I won't hurt you if you mean no harm to me," Estella stated...


message 195: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I bit my lip staring at him still thinking over Estella's lectures on him. But they seed so wrong. Well the ones about him being good looking we're right...he was hot. But he really didn't seem like he'd kill every person he'd seen. Maybe Estella was hiding something from me...

The girl calmed, she brushed her dark brown hair to the side with her gloves hands. Once she did you could visibly see vines crawling up her neck, cheek and to her eye that were a beautiful green. She smiled softly before nodding. "Are you alright?" She asked softly.


message 196: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle was conversing with the person next to him not noticing where her thoughts were leading her..


Estella gasped standing up and walked over, "that's beautiful, the vines, it's just magical," she whispered tempting to go and touch it before she sat down covering her face, "no that bastard marked me!" She shouted but was muffled by her hands, "all I need to do is get killed and the mark with be gone," she growled shuddering at the thought of trying to actually kill herself..


message 197: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) The more and more I thought about it the more I felt the sick feeling in the pit of my stomach. I felt the room spinning I grasped the arms of the chair tightly as I closed my eyes tightly thoughts whipping by me. By breathing got heavy but it all fated quickly. I was to be like Estella. I was strong...like Stella. I wouldn't let anyone hurt me, I wouldn't let anyone touch me, I am my own person. I will not be marked, I will not be obedient, I will not be tamed. I will be like Stella.

The girl shook her head before blushing. "What is your name?" She asked.


message 198: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle's gaze snapped to her as he then excused them before he stood up scooping Astra up as well and carried her out of there looking down at her, "you okay darling?" He asked as they excited the place...


Estella calmed herself enough to glance up at the girl frowning, "my name is Estella, what is yours?" She demanded standing up knowing she want going to live long anyway so there was nothing to stress about...


message 199: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed hard as I clung to him tightly, before the memories suddenly vanished. "Where are we going now?" I asked before my eyes suddenly looking around before getting to him. "There's two of you....why is there two of you...ugh...my heads spinning." I said nuzzling Into him.


message 200: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) The girl smiled. "My name, is Katriana" she put her hood down to get a good look.


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