Fiction Writers discussion

76 views
Group Writing > The devils backbone

Comments Showing 101-150 of 572 (572 new)    post a comment »

message 101: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella chuckled and shrugged, "sure, if you want.... But that means time travel you up for it?"


message 102: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled and nodded quickly. "Of course!"


message 103: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella smiled And was about to do it when she heard a blood curling scream rip through the air and she froze looking in the direction before she ran off towards it..


message 104: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I jumped slightly before running off after her.


message 105: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella ran until she stopped upon a horrifying scene.... A women, obviously poor and homeless was being whipped brutally by a roman guard.... Estella pushed through the crowd towards them but someone had already beaten her there...
A man, wearing ordinary clothes for Romans approached the guard and shoved him, "cut it out!" He snapped his voice holding authority. The man was quite handsome, with slightly longer then necessary brown hair almost dirty blonde but not quite and exhilarating golden blonde eyes..


message 106: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I ran to Estella. "What's going on?" I asked softly.


message 107: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella stood agape, "um... Some women was being whipped to death and that man stopped it," she mumbled and just at the roman was about to turn on the man and whip him when someome very familiar ran in between the men and the whip getting lashed....
And the man caught her and said one word that made everyone in the crowd freeze.
"Sabrina!"


message 108: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) My eyes widened. "Estella it's Sabrina!" I cried out, I grasped my sisters arm tightly.


message 109: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella growled her eyes going red, "I heard, come on Astra, lets show these Romans not to mess with us," she growled leading her forward into the weird circle that held the roman, the brown haired man and Sabrina...
"You dare lay a hand on our cousin!" Estella snarled at the roman who had flicked back the whip getting ready to whip it again.
The roman turned to Estella and narrowed his eyes, "she disrespected someone higher then her, she needed to be punished," was all he said before he lashed Estella across the face.

Estella cried out falling down and closed her eyes hissing at the pain feeling the awful sting tho luckily it hadn't been hard enough to break skin yet and then whipped her head up her eyes blood red her hair manifesting into fire once again, "you didn't," she snarled and lunged....

While this was happening the man had managed to get Sabrina onto his shoulder caveman style and had grabbed Astra's hands pulling her away from the drama and into the crowd...


message 110: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "No!" I cried, tugging my arm. "She's my sister! I cannot leave her!"


message 111: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The man pulled her closer looking at her, "I don't know how to heal Sabrina, she's losing too much blood, I need your help, and we both know anyone that pisses off Estella is dead meat," he stated before tugging her away towards the tree line...

Estella had pinned the roman to the ground and was burning him alive.... She got up when he was merely ashes and turned around as everyone got down 'worshipping' her believing she was a goddess... (Romans!)


message 112: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I struggled before looking at him oddly. "Who are you?!"


message 113: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The man looked at her as chuckled, "Lucian," he told her, "I'm Sabrina's soul mate," he informed her before he placed Sabrina down who was unconscious and looked at Astra, "please help her..."

Estella easily erased their memories before she made her way through the crowd.... To get to them..


message 114: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((I just had a mini freak attack!!))

I swallowed hard. "I can try. But...Estella was anyways better then I was." I crawled closer to Sabrina. "Alright....well she cannot take blood...she doesn't...react to it right. Thou it does work. The only other thing I can think of would be magic."


message 115: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Why??))

Estella soon walked up behind her, "her wounds are minor for ones we usually receive, heat heeling should work fine," Estella whispered the reminder in her ear before grabbing Lucian and pulled him a little bit aways talking to him in hushed voices..


message 116: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((It's Luke!!! XD))

I smiled at her reminder before nodding and began to work on healing her.


message 117: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((I KNOW HAha!!))

Soon Sabrina's wounds were healed and she awoke looking at Astra in a daze before grinning, "cousin!" She cried happily and hugged her tightly...

Estella and Lucian walked over after they finished talking both having a haunting expression...


message 118: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled and hugged her back tightly. "Sabrina! I missed you!"


message 119: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina grinned pecking her forehead, "good, I haven't seen you guys in forever," she teased standing up and gave Estella a hug, "has she met him yet-". Estella stopped her and nodded sadly::


message 120: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at them oddly. Before smiling devishly. "Hay Stella why not tell Sabrina about your dear friend that you met earlier!" I giggled.


message 121: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella stiffened looking at her wide eyed before growling and Sabrina stepped away looking at her, "yeah Estella tell us why don't you?" She sneered snickering as Lucian came to stand beside Sabrina wrapping am arm around her waist...

Estella gulped before pointed at Astra, "she purposely 'helped' Kyle," she said randomly...


message 122: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) My jaw dropped. "N-no I didn't! I didn't even know him at the time!!! Stella that's not fair cheater! Now tell us about Calix!!" I giggled


message 123: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella grumbled, "there nothing with me and calix! Nothing!" She snapped and stormed off..

Sabrina raised an eyebrow, "touché..."


message 124: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I giggled softly before looking at Sabrina. "It's just hormones from the baby..." I said before smiling.


message 125: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina looked at her shocked, "what baby?" She demanded looking utterly confused as Lucian chuckled rolling his eyes...

Meanwhile, Estella wandering through the streets of Rome grumbling under her breath about mean petty demons..


message 126: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I laughed, rolling onto my back as I clenched my sides.

"Awe, thinking about me again I see my time angel." Said a husky voice in her ear.


message 127: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina looked at Lucian then at Astra still so confused, "Astra! What baby?!" She asked as Lucian also soon fell to the ground laughing...

Estella whipped around to face the voice looking as if she was ready to beat them to pulp..


message 128: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I laughed before sitting up "oh why don't you go ask her yourself. She probably with the father now."

No one was there. "Over here my time angel" the voice hissed once again in her ear.


message 129: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina's eyes widen in acknowledgment before she began laughing falling on the floor right next to Lucian as they both laughed till tears were steaming out of Sabrina's, "OMG! That's grreat!"

Estella growled realizing who it was and scowled, "leave me alone!" She snapped whipping around again towards his voice, "I'm not your anything so stop calling me that," she huffed like a child...


message 130: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled before getting up on my feet and stalking away towards town.

Calix appeared infront of her. "Awe my angel....whats ever the matter?" He asked softly.


message 131: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina instantly sat up, "where are you going?! Kyles still out there!" She called out...

Estella growled at him backing away only cause he obviously didn't respect having personal space... "You're the matter calix, get lost," she stated firmly before she turned and as she did morphed into a red fox... Once fully transformed to was off...


message 132: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked back. "I know...." I called out as I continued.

Calix smirked and vanished. "Awe where you gonna run little fox?"


message 133: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina appeared in front out her and held out a necklace, a locket to be exact, "then at least put this on, and when your in danger it'll help you..."


Estella kept her ears flattened against her head letting out a slight whimper as she kept running hoping he wouldn't come near her or somehow show up and scoop her up.... Since beside her teeth she had no way of defending herself in this form... Since Astra when she was just a young one, decided it would be fun to declaw her as she self in fox form....


message 134: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looks at her oddly. "W-what is it?" I said stopping in my tracks. "And what exactly will it do or how will it protect me."

She was instantly lifted by the scruff of her neck, as the chuckle got louder. "Helpless little fox. Thou, you're adorable."


message 135: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina waved away her questions, "that is unimportant, just keep it on at all times, understood?" She stated as it materialized around Astra's neck...

Estella yipped thrashing against his grip trying to turn her head to bite him but knew it was useless so she simply hung there whimpering...


message 136: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked at her oddly. "Sure..." I said before hugging her. "Catch you later?!" I giggled before running past her.

Calix appeared and grinned. "Awe my angel. Don't worry I wouldn't hurt you"


message 137: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina chuckled, "of course!" She called after her and shook her head before grasping Lucian's hand and ran off....


Estella glared at him with her fox eyes baring her teeth at him... Before thrashing about trying to get free...


message 138: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I ran into the forest, one of my favorite places to just walk. Being along...it was even better.

Calix chuckled. "Calm..." He said gently stroking her head.


message 139: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) It soon grew darker.. And a chuckle echoed through the trees..

Estella growled at him vicious glaring darkly b


message 140: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) At him as she soon began whining tho she tilted her head against his hand liking the sensations..


message 141: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I froze, placing a hand against a tree, looking around oddly. What the hell?

Calix smiled, stroking her a bit more. "See. I won't hurt you. I swear."


message 142: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Confused?" A voice hissed in her ear... And the space around her continue to darken..

Estella against her will began nuzzling against his hand, not liking how she was being carried but she enjoyed being petted by him oddly enough and she began making a purring sound..


message 143: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked around. "Who's there?!"

Calix held her in his arms, rocking her gently before he stroked her tummy. "See, a good little fox...." He purred. "My little time angel..." He said before flashing them into a huge room.


message 144: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Who else little star.." The voice purred... As Kyle appeared in front of her, "miss me?" He sneered... His eyes black.

Estella though she knew she was being manhandled didn't mind enjoying the sensations of being his his arms especially him stroking her... Odd but she couldn't seem to care as she purred nuzzling closer to him gently touching her declawed paws against his arm...


message 145: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I jumped, ramming my back into the tree as I smiled at him. "Yes, I missed you so very much." I said thou sarcasm was the tone.

Calix smiled as he walked, entering a room, his bedroom. He laid on the bed, resting her on his chest before he stroke her head. "You're so much nicer when your not trying to kill me." He said sweetly. Yes sweetly....shocker I know.


message 146: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle placed his hand to his heart looking at her with a look of pain, "I'm wounded little star, truly wounded," he drawled dramatically..

Estella meowed, yes meowed as she suddenly morphed into a pretty white fluffy cat, with red within its coat, her more animalistic side taking over as she snuggled closer into him leaning more towards his strokes wanting more as she purred loudly her innocent white cat eyes closed as she struggled to get more, since she was still declawed and her paws were utterly useless..


message 147: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I held the tree to keep me from falling, I looked up at him slightly nervous, but there was something else. Something I couldn't describe.
"What do you want Kyle?" I asked softly not really wanting to hear the answer but gonna get it anyways.

Calix smiled. "Good girl. You know....if you change back to your normal self you can get more." He purred before kissing her head, still continuing to stroke her.


message 148: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle smiled at her reaction to almost falling in his presence but he bowed respectfully looking at him her through his lashes, "would you like to accompany me... As my date?" He asked in a purr... Only someone who knew he very very well, would know he was actually nervous to ask her..

Estella meowed again leaning towards his hand unsure about his statement since the animalistic part of her knew the moment she shifted back the more human part would take over, it didn't want that... She she turned so she was laying on him on her belly and crawled closer then her small pink tongue slithered out and licked his neck as she purring continued as she nuzzled her head against his...


message 149: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I swallowed. "Why? And where?"

Calix smiled. "You're adorable." He purred with a smile.


message 150: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle straightened up grinning at her, "I'll take that as a yes, put on something pretty, ill find you at dusk, be ready before then," he purred winking and vanished..

Estella meowed again licking his chin before she suddenly shifted back into her human form and was laying on top of calix breathing heavily as as shook blinking as her eyes returned back to her cream colour and glanced up to notice him.. She gaped at him before a faint blush highlighted her cheeks and she went to scrabble off him...


back to top