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message 451: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Brooke rolled her eyes. "Just because you're older doesn't make you better!" she declared with the most childish voice known to man.

((the iro in part is that in random dragar set up athena with his brother XD. And that was before we knew they were brothers XD))

Layla stared at them shocked. "You cant!" she said looking for a way out of this.


message 452: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik rolled his eyes, "i think i can, unless you'd rather my brother come back and settle this his way..." he pointed out, his tone as cold as stone.

Sabrina was away from them contacting Estella...


message 453: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "dont ignore me Malik!" she hissed before she smacked his back, being obviously childish like she was.

layla stared at him and backed up.


message 454: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik sighed pitching his nose, "I will do whatever i wish Brooke," he hissed his gaze on Layla, narrowing... But soon Layla backed up until she hit someone who yelped, "what the hell! Watch where you're going!" i female voice snapped.

Sabrina skipped over grinning, "Estella's here!"


message 455: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Brooke growled. "i hope youre nicer in the future! i feel so sorry whos mated to you and Dragar!"she snapped and whipped away, before she appeared in the middle of the river near them, a way of her tantrums. one only her brothers could ever get her out of.

layla yelped before she whipped around


message 456: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Mailk rolled at her childishness, god he wish she'd mature in the future....

Estella stood there in her fiery beauty looking at Layla, "this the girl I'm sending?" she asked and Sabrina nodded. Estella smiled her one eye turning white, pure white, "Oh, you are lucky dear, just don't kill him, you won't be very happy if you did," she purred smiling, "you guys will be adorable..." she muttered before Layla was gone.


message 457: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) brooke crossed her arms and humphed. her way of annoying everyone but was also annoyed.
((such faith in his sister...))

((what thread is she going into??))


message 458: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Assassination))

Malik then disappeared, appearing sitting beside his sister, "you realize how scared I was Brooke?" he began his expression softening as he looked at her, "You know Dragar would lose it if you were lost to us, I would follow..." he said placing a hand on her knee, "I know you don't like people getting in trouble, etc, but it was better then Dragar had planned for her, and by the sounds of it Brooke, her future isn't here, yet you argue with me about every little thing... You know you can trust my decisions, but why do you always counter them?"


message 459: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((okay))

Brooke stared up at her brother before she instantly hugged him and gently sobbed into his chest. "I'm sorry Malik," she cried. "I just don't want something to happen where I get stuck away from you and dragar...i don't wanna leave you two. I'm sorry!"


message 460: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Malik hugged her back, rubbing her back to comfort her, "It's okay Brooke, and you know we will never let that happen, we'd look for you forever," he said softly rocking her gently, "But if it happens, know we love you and try and be happen if you are stuck there..."


message 461: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i watched them, "they are so cute..."

brooke hugged him tighter as she sobbed, this is were you could tell who took the most care of her.


message 462: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina nodded, who was by her side sighing, "I wish me and my brother were like that," she murmured sadly...

Malik continued to hold her and rock her, moving her to his lap as he did, letting her cry against him as he rubbed her back...

((Let me the first to state, Malik is my favorite demon, like he's a total sweetheart.... well not favorite but most liked))


message 463: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i looked at her, i could easily see her saddness. i instantly hugged her. "no matter how mean nate can get he will always love you, he will always care for you"

brooke closed her eyes, clinging to him her sobs decreased. she had fallen asleep.


message 464: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina snorted as she hugged Astra, "you say about the man who killed my mate," she sobbed.

Malik stood with her in his arms nodding at the two girl's before he and her were gone.


message 465: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded. "i know and I also.know he will come back, your mate will come back. I promise you."


message 466: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina snorted, "unlikely," she muttered sadly shaking her head before looking at Astra, "I need to go now... Please be careful," she said and kissed her cheek before leaving....

Estella stood there watching before looking at Astra, "you know i would do anything for you right?" she asked softly.

Sapphira was sobbing quietly in a cell, she didn't know where she was, all she knew a man with black hair and matching eyes stuck her here and not soon after a horrible women came and killed the nice man in the cell beside her, she had been crying ever since, smelling the foul blood filling the air... She knew she was slowly dying, the tears causing her small nymph body to start to dry out... Soon she'll just be a dead vine on the ground, her hair the only thing that will be left of her...


message 467: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I frowned before turning to Estella. "Yeah? As i for you.." I said softly. "Why?" I said walking over to her, Cocking my head slightly.

That's when a young man appeared beside her smelling a bit of ash fault and charcoal. He placed a hand over her mouth to keep her from screaming. "I'm not here to harm you" He said softly. "I'm here to get you out of here." he said softly. His face was hidden from her view since if the shadows in the cell.


message 468: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella shook her head smiling as she embraced her sister, "no reason, i am just glad we are so close," she murmured softly.

Small little Sapphira wouldn't have made a peep, hell she couldn't keep her eyes open anymore, she just laid there getting closer and closer to deaths doors as she dried up, whimpering in pain against his hand. Her vine hair was covering most of her face though...


message 469: by Nightmare (last edited May 23, 2014 03:36AM) (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i looked at her oddly, hugging her back. "what did you do?" i asked her gently, estella was never like this...something was wrong...something was missing...


message 470: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella laughed, "don't be ridiculous," she muttered pulling away and rolled her eyes, "I was trying to be sappy and lovey but nope whatever," she muttered dramatically.


((NOOOOOOO! Change it, no, change it now! He is supposed to carry her to the river! Just like their song says!!!!))


message 471: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gave her an odd look. "You never want to be sappy or lovey, you never liked that. Estella you know you can tell me everything, right."

The boy then lifted her up in his arms and they weren't in the cell anymore. He had brought her to a shallow river, he walked her to the water, stepping in, all he wore was pants and a white unbuttoned shirt his brown hair was mangled and his face, cheat, and hands were dirty. He walked her in and placed her down, once the water hit his feet he sighed and knelt down with her, gently allowing the water to hit her before he gently "washed" her.


message 472: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella gave her a look, "fine, there goes trying to be a sister," she mocked rolling her eyes, "there is nothing going on so drop it," she hissed turned and stormed off.

Sapphira gasped once she hit the water before she shivered, soaking in as much as she could as her skin began to return to its pale smooth state and soon her beautiful water lilies began growing on her vine hair. She sighed her eyes still closed before she finally opened them and stared at the man with her large bright violet eyes, not saying a word.


message 473: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Stella!" i cried going to run after her "don't go! I'm sorry"

The man was washing the dirt off him, soaking his hair and clothes. He soon looked over at her and smiled softly. "How are you feeling?"


message 474: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) But Estella was already gone.

"N-not dying," Sapphira stammered instantly, and blushed looking away, "t-thank you," she stuttered soaking in the water some more, not understanding why he was being so nice, and why she wasn't freaking out, she guessed she was just thankful she was out of that room....


message 475: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I stood there, staring. Something wasn't right, and I'm going to find out what it was. "Stella....what have you done."

The boy smiled. "Your welcome." he said before he bowed his head. "My name is Demos"


message 476: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~~

Sapphira shyly smiled at him, "my name is Sapphira," she whispered softly, she liked his name, it was a name of strength, pronunciation of the son of Ares... She was now floating in the water, soon sitting up as she brushed her vine hair behind her ear.


message 477: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he smiled, "thats a lovely name..." he said sweetly before blushing as he coughed. a small puff of flames erupted from his mouth. stupid side affects


message 478: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira blushed hard, easily noticed on her pale skin before she smiled at him, which was replaced by a look of startlement when she saw the smoke, "are you okay?" She asked softly reaching out to gently touch him but held back.


message 479: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he looked at her and smiled, confused. "me?"


message 480: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira nodded looking confused, "y-yes y-you?"


message 481: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Demos laughed. "Yes, I am fine. Why would you think I wasn't?" he asked.


message 482: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira frowned and shrugged looking away, "I-I don't know..."


message 483: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos frowned as he cocked his head "was it the fire and smoke?" he asked softly


message 484: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira looked at him sharply and then remembered and nodded, "yeah! It-it was that," she said the last bit more shyly...


message 485: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos smiled as he turned his whole body to her. "im a dragon, the fire and smoke is just a side effect. there is nothing to worry about, but instead, are you okay?"


message 486: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira stared at him in awe, "a-a dragon?" She asked shakily, dragons weren't known to be very friendly with nymphs especially water ones.... "I-I'm f-fine," she stammered.


message 487: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos looked at her and smiled. "thats good to hear," his smile soon faded. "so how did you get in there?"


message 488: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira winced and looked away and across the water, "My family was killed, and some very nice people found me.... I was then kidnapped by another mean man who left me there...." she explained softly.


message 489: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "im so sorry" he said softly before lowering his head "my parents were killed by hunters. was never one to be loved. i was left alone."


message 490: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira looked at him, her eyes tearing up sadly and she was suddenly hugging him tightly, "I'm so sorry," she whispered, "no one should be alone..."


message 491: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos hugged her back, he chocked back any sad emotions and just took a breath. "youre right"


message 492: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira nodded, hugging him a bit longer before pulling back and she slid a hand into her hair touching a flower and gently plucked it off. She then slid it into his hair and it's stem grew intertwined with his hair to stay in place, "so you'll never be alone," she whispered softly smiling at him. She was only 8.


message 493: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he watched her before looking at the flower. he then hugged her again. he may have found his best friend...he finally had a friend.


message 494: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira hugged him tightly again, liking how warm he was, she was usually cold. "Demos.... Are you my friend?"


message 495: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he looked down at her slightly. "can i be? i never had a friend. can i be your friend?"


message 496: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira grinned and hugged him even tighter, "Of course! You are my friend, i never had a friend either just my many sisters..." she murmured softly and grinned at him, "You don't have to stay in the water, i can come out now..."


message 497: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos smiled and blushed "right. right" he said but didnt move


message 498: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira waited for him to move, but it never happened... she looked at him curiously, "wouldn't a fire dragon not like water?" she asked curiously, innocently.


message 499: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "its calimg down my flames" she said


message 500: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((she eh?))

Sapphira giggled, "your flames need to be calmed? WHy?" she asked with childlike curiosity.


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