Chapter 12 - Bolo

[Candie]

The Gig is up, the storm is upon Riley Switch. The pressure Lorelei was feeling was palpable. How was she going to stop the war? I did't see any of it coming!

[Ines]

I thought it had to do with the photographs some chapters before but I was hoping it wasn't it. Even though she was the reason the world was saved, she wasn't the real hero. I wanted her to do more...

I was hoping for the Order to come to their aid. Maybe the love of everyone wanting Lorelei to win would weaken the demons enough for Cameron and Jared to kill them. And then somehow Lorelei parents would return and knew enough on how to close the gate and take everything back to Hell. More fighting, more blood, more love, more people involved.

[Dana, Founder]

Curve ball! LoL

[Vicki]

Total curve ball. Intense chapter.