Looking for constructive criticism

[Gordon]

Hi folks. Somewhat new to the group. so nice to see that such a group exists here. Also nice to see so many fellow authors. I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism. I've prepared a teaser I'll be posting about my new comic strip gallery. I would love to get a sense of what you think of the teaser. thanks:

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What if dogs could speak? Admit it, the way they perk their ears up and tilt their heads in wonder when spoken to, often raises the question for us, what would our conversations with them be like?

This comic strip gallery explores the imaginative life of the author’s Scaramouche sheltie. Readers will find 75 full colour witty anecdotes revealing a sheepdog’s perspective on such topics as grief, sleep deprivation, adoption, the meaning of life and much more. Because the comic strip blog, from which this book has sprung, has a growing worldwide audience, Gordon has also included a contextualized glossary of terms and expressions in the back of the book for people who speak English as a second language.

Sit back, relax and meet Frodo the thinker, the philosopher, worrier, the regal, and clever conversationalist. Meet Frodo the Sheltie and enjoy the hilarious antics of this loveable dog.

[Marcy]

Sounds like a winner. I want to read it.

[Gordon]

thank you Marcy. that's very kind of you.