I have to be honest here. While I liked the overall premise of the book, I found the writing to be somewhat amateurish and character development left much to be desired. Much could be accomplished here with some serious editing. I understand that the various character threads needed to be joined together at one time but it made the story too repetitious for my taste. That said, I feel that this author has much to offer in the future. He has an excellent imagination. Give us a story that we can sink our teeth into and fill it with characters with real character and you will have a sure winner
I have to be honest here. While I liked the overall premise of the book, I found the writing to be somewhat amateurish and character development left much to be desired. Much could be accomplished here with some serious editing. I understand that the various character threads needed to be joined together at one time but it made the story too repetitious for my taste.
That said, I feel that this author has much to offer in the future. He has an excellent imagination. Give us a story that we can sink our teeth into and fill it with characters with real character and you will have a sure winner