Erotic Romance - Beta Reader Needed

[Lisa]

I have published 13 novels and over 40 self-help books, so hopefully in general this novel is "coherent" :). It should be free of most typos or other issues that tend to plague first novels.

This is my very first erotic romance novel, so I am mostly concerned that this novel works well for that audience. Until now I've written "fade to black" stories. I haven't included the intimate details. I want to get a sense that those scenes are smooth and well integrated.

The heroine has just graduated college and is tending bar as a favor to a friend. The hero is just out of prison, having done a stint for armed robbery in NYC. Will she redeem him?

Book 1 of this is 10 chapters long. Even if you could read the first chapter, and let me know if that grabs your attention, that would be a huge help.

Thanks!

Lisa

[Tala]

I'd be happy to help.

[Lisa]

Tala -

That would be great - I'll contact you privately. Thanks so much!

Lisa

[Heather]

Sure. I will do it for you. I've edited and read plenty of novels in the erotica genre. As long as it's not a PDF, it should be fine for me.

[Lisa]

Dear Heather -

Thank you so much - I appreciate it immensely! I will contact you privately.

Lisa

[Toni]

I'd be happy to read it too, if you're still looking for beta readers.

[Lisa]

Dear Toni -

That would be wonderful! I will contact you privately.

Lisa

[Lisa]

Dear Toni -

Hmmm, I can't send you a message :). If you could contact me via my website - LisaShea.com - I can get your details that way. Thanks!

Lisa

[Toni]

Hi Lisa,
Sorry i think i have to be friends with you to send me a message. I just accepted your request so it should work now. Otherwise i'll go on your website. Thanks
Toni

[Lisa]

Dear Toni -

Aha, that worked! I sent you a message :).

Lisa

[Toni]

Lol. I got your message and gave you my email address. Feel free to send it when ever you are ready. Thanks. Toni

[Lisa]

I'm ready with the beta copy, so I'll be emailing everyone who contacted me shortly. If anybody else out there is interested in taking a look, please let me know!

Lisa

[Lisa]

I have now emailed out beta copies to everyone who requested one. If you didn't receive your copy, please let me know.

I'm eager for more beta readers, so if anybody else would like to take a look, please contact me.

Thanks!

Lisa

[Rory]

Lisa wrote: "I have now emailed out beta copies to everyone who requested one. If you didn't receive your copy, please let me know.

I'm eager for more beta readers, so if anybody else would like to take a look..."

Lisa - I'd be happy to look at the manuscript and give you a critique on the first chapter or more (time permitting) - thanks for the opportunity - Rory Church
Church.Rory@gmail.com

[Lisa]

Rory -

That would be wonderful! What format would you prefer? You can message me if you'd rather communicate that way.

Lisa