Anyone want to Copyedit a 10,000 word sci-fi piece?

[F.F.]

I am working on a 5 to 10 thousand word submission to this promotional free book along with some 18 other writers.

I have been over and over this thing and can't stand to look at it again right now.

Can anyone check it out? I struggle with comma placement and capitalization, especially around dialogue. Some sentence fragments I have left intentionally. Any and all edits that you notice, I will consider.

Disclaimer: there is sex and violence in here!

PM me if interested and include your email address so I can send you the word doc.

much appreciated!

FF McCulligan

[Dana]

I'd be interested - I sent you a PM with more information.