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Mar 06, 2010 03:12PM

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What did it in was Youtube--Will the Circle be Unbroken..."
Are the speakers plugged in? I know that's a stupid question, but I've forgotten to check at times. It's easy to kick the plug out.
Is the volume muted? I've done that, too.

Yes. Check the little horn in the lower right. Click and the volume meter shows.
Also, rebooting sometimes does wonders (like a massage for us).
You can always use it as an excuse to buy a new computer system. Rationalization sometimes leads to precious updating of systems.
Also, rebooting sometimes does wonders (like a massage for us).
You can always use it as an excuse to buy a new computer system. Rationalization sometimes leads to precious updating of systems.
Thanks, guys. But I've done all that. Now I'm letting it sit and mellow for a while, think that'll work?
Ha. My dad used to snort and say "There is no spontaneous recovery in mechanical objects."
But then, that was before computers.
Ha. My dad used to snort and say "There is no spontaneous recovery in mechanical objects."
But then, that was before computers.

"They were commended for their story on IBM's considering raising capital despite a difficult market situation..."


"They were commended for their story on IBM's considering raising capital despite a difficult market situation...""
I think that you're right that it's right but looks wrong. Consequently, I'd rephrase it to say:
"They were commended for their story on IBM's consideration of raising capital despite a difficult market situation..."
(Personally, I'd also reduce the jargon by saying "in a difficult market", but that's a more minor and subjective issue.)

Is it correct to say -
"The pictures disambiguate the difference between paly and paly-bendy" (two patterns of heraldry), or could one say "The pictures disambiguate paly and paly-bendy," or is "disambiguate" being used incorrectly? Maybe "distinguish" is better?
thanks for any advice.
sarah

However, that is a bit of a mouthful, and personally I would say "distinguish between x & y" or possibly "clarify the difference between x & y".
On the other hand, part of the culture of heraldry is archaic and flamboyant language, so maybe your original construction is ideal for the context.

On another note, I forgot to say thanks for the grammar help before. The sentence wasn't mine, I just copy edit. It was written by a youth who has either been homeless or in foster care (I can't remember who wrote it). I need to keep their voice but make it grammatically correct. I only change sentences if they really don't make sense because otherwise I'd be changing every sentence in the articles. They write amazingly well considering their history and experiences but no so well in the grand scheme of things. :) I would have written it as "we talked about the programs that are helping us be successful." These kids love flowery language though. It's like they think that to write well you need to use lots of big words. :)


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