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A Constellation of Vital Phenomena - Day 4 (November 2013)
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"Life: a constellation of vital phenomena — organization, irritability, movement, growth, reproduction, adaptation."
My impression is that Natasha's perspective was more personal, leaning towards a biological or even spiritual concept. When Sonja reads it through the retrospective lens of Natasha's life, however, the definition becomes more sociological - as though the words were defining the Chechen people as a whole.
Any other opinions or perspectives from others? Did the title ultimately work for you?

I liked the 'in x number of years the girl will...' additions while Sonja is grilling Havaa about her sister. I'm glad Marra is giving us an actual ending.
Having finished just minutes ago, it still has to sink in and i'm not sure i'm ready for the big questions this book raises. But to answer Daniel, i do think Sonja reads it much more philosophically than Natasha intended when she circled it, yes.
And more hopeful as well, if those are the vital components of life, then Sonja can do it. While perhaps Natasha circled it more towards what she was missing for her own short term survival.
I might change my mind on this over the next 24 hours though. It all still needs to sink in.

I do agree with Daniel that when Sonja reread it towards the end, she was reading it through the lens of what the years had brought since she returned to Chechnya after the first war and she saw it as a definition for what the people of Chechnya had done/were doing to survive. If Natasha had survived, she would likely have perceived it quite differently too.

From an educational angle, I was glad to learn something about Chechnya and the wars there. I don't think I could have even claimed there were actual wars there before reading the book. I thought it was an ethnic uprising that executed some terrorist acts in Russia. Typical American ignorance.

I liked how the author gave us different characters' futures throughout the book. I felt like that served to make it seem less hopeless and less tragic, although the novel was both still very much those things. I guess it was just nice to affirm that life went on, at least for some people, even if they had made bad decisions or been in bad situations.


I think there was more symmetry between Ramzan's loss and Dokka's loss.

Describing it like that made me realize there is perhaps some parallel, because Natasha is being used as a toy for other people's pleasure too. But she fled voluntarily, out of desperation and a naieve belief that people will help her, and she's exploited for that.
So yes, there is a parallel, but the motivation and the starting points are very different. One had a choice, the other didn't.

Not abused, no. I agree on that point, and I appreciate how you rephrased the issue as "mental impact." That has a much more inclusive ring to it. While I agree with everything you say, I also want to strike out a little farther on the issue of Ramzan in this regard.
Ramzan was not sexually abused, but he was definitely sexually tortured. While browsing the internet for supplementary information on this topic, I stumbled across this fascinating article titled "Sexual Torture of Men in Croatia and Other Conflict Situations: An Open Secret" (link: http://www.kit.nl/net/KIT_Publicaties... ). It describes male sexual torture as "...full or partial castration, genital beatings and electroshock." The authors also point out how "gender stereotypes" make it difficult to address male sexual torture.
On a less academic note, I would also argue that we males have a tendency to illogically conflate sexuality with power. It's why the term "emasculation" carries such loaded metaphorical and literary imagery.
So coming back full circle, I completely agree with you that the experiences of these two characters cannot be compared (nor should they, really). In the same hand, their story lines seem extremely connected despite being so different. Perhaps Ramzan is simply the foil through which Natasha's strength can be clearly seen, but even the fact that neither can talk to their family about their personal tragedies suggests to me that Marra could have been intending something deeper...

For me, Ramzan is the most complex character. His father realizes that he did not care for him as he should have. Do you thing Ramzan knew that Ackmed was his half brother?

That's my suspicion as well. After all, if you're raising awareness about the greater picture regarding Chechnya, it only makes sense to tackle issues like sexual trafficking and sexual torture of which the larger audience might not be aware.
At the risk of having discussion run rampant, I'm going to try response questions to multiple comments above.
Hanne: I love how you detail coming to that conclusion. You say that Ramzan is the only one held captive, but could we perhaps say that Natasha is held captive as well? Not with physical chains, to be sure, but can we see metaphorical chains as equally binding? (And I think Linda's link from HuffPo could suggest that as well).
Jenny: An interesting take. Out of curiosity, protection for whom? I think we could read that as being for either him or his father. I would also venture to say that Natasha isn't talking as a means of self-protection as well. Thoughts?
Linda: I wavered back and forth about Ramzan knowing. If so, it would certainly explain why he always seemed to be sleighting Akhmed. In the end, I read enough hints to believe that he knew. There was just too much of a silent beat when he talked with his father. What did you think, and did it add some sort of subtext for you?

